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Title: Chapter 10 - Generous to a Fault

I've been waiting for an update on this story. This is soo sad, she needs to be honest with Anthony and take a chance. I understand her reasoning but she's denying herself so much. I enjoy your writing.

Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2014 10:32 pm

Title: Chapter 10 - Generous to a Fault

Love this story, and I really hope Natalia and Anthony can get it together and be together.  I know things did not start off in the best of ways, but I hope they can get past that and figure it out.  Natalia needs to respond to Richard though and let him know definitively that he should get lost for good!

More please :)

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2014 04:02 pm

Title: Chapter 1 - Cougars

Their relationship is evolving slowly, but surely. 

Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2014 03:42 pm

Title: Chapter 10 - Generous to a Fault

Ughhh, I hate when women do that.  Don't encourage him into a relationship he doesn't want because of YOUR feelings.  Get your shit together on your own.  Then be pissed off because he took you up on your advice.  You set the damn stage, what do you expect.  They have feelings for each other and she needs to see where it goes.  Yes, it wasn't the best beginnings to a relationship but that dickwad dad was the one that jumped all of the BS off.  Now he want to send gifts.  Do I look like a mistress to you.  Do you think I can't get a man.  WTH is wrong with him.  Bish stop communicating with me when you weren't a true husband and was play acting.  Now Anthony, don't fall for the okie doke.  You know darn well you don't like that girl so don't play with her emotions.  Read up on pregnancy, her hormones will be so out of control she will jump your bones in 3 wks give or take, LOL.  Great update as they continue to tiptoe around their feelings.  Will Rita set him straight?  Who will set her straight?  

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 20 2014 03:32 am

Title: Chapter 10 - Generous to a Fault

Yay an update!!! I love this story. I know she's trying to push him away, but I can't wait until they realize the want each other. Also, I can't wait until Richard comes down there begging and his own son tells him off!!!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2014 02:41 am

Title: Chapter 10 - Generous to a Fault

It's clear Natalia is trying to do what is best for everyone in this situation. I understand that. She is also scared of her attraction to Anthony, which is also understandable. Anthony is a grown man, sure, but she was married to his father which I'm sure she has and is dealing with. She does not want to tie Anthony down, he has already chose to be responsible and in the baby's life, she does not want to add and though, I do not think she would, I can see why she thinks she would. I would probably do the same thing.

Anthony is just finally starting to figure out what he wants to do with his life and Natalia knows this and is trying to make this as easy as possible for him without becoming too attached and dependent on him. But sweet Anthony is making it a little hard, lol. He really is sweet and Natalia is trying her hardest to play at friend without getting caught up. It's not really clear what Anthony wants with Natalia. It is clear that he wants to be in his baby's life. It's also clear that he is attracted to Natalia, but long term with her, I do not know and Natalia does not either, which is why she encourages him to go out, have fun, and live. Besides, does Natalia really want to jump into it any further than she already is with Anthony given she was married to his father? I know, morality has been shot to hell already, but still. Anyway, awesome story!



Author's Response:

Excellent insight.  I couldn't have said it better myself.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2014 02:08 am

Title: Chapter 10 - Generous to a Fault

Why is she pushing him on other women?  Natalia is working my last nerve!! Athony is such a sweetheart and a good man to boot!  Loving this story! 



Author's Response:

Lol.  She's trying to do what she thinks is right.  We'll see how well that works out for them.  Thanks Pam!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2014 01:06 am

Title: Chapter 10 - Generous to a Fault

so i screamed when i saw the update!!! i'm so flippin happy!! :D :D

damn Natalia for pushing away Anthony. he has shown more then twice who he wants but nooo Natlia points him in the opposite direction *shake head* can't wait for more - love this story!!

btw has Natalia been to the OB and done a checkup? just thinking that would be great moment for her and Anthony to bound *hint,hint,wink,wink* LOOOL!



Author's Response:

Lol.  Natalia's first prenatal visit will be featured in chapter 13.  Stay tuned and thanks for reading and reviewing, Cassius Noir!

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2014 09:59 pm

Title: Chapter 10 - Generous to a Fault

:( I was sure there was goin to be a next chapter... Lol I read it again from scratch cause my mind said... Girl stop we read this and I was going to skip but I was like nope don't remember which chapter I ended off and I fell in love with the story again. 

Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2014 09:37 pm

Title: Chapter 10 - Generous to a Fault

Why is she pushing him on other women?  Natalia is working my last nerve!! Athony is such a sweetheart and a good man to boot!  Loving this story! 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2014 07:44 pm

Title: Chapter 10 - Generous to a Fault

I don't know why this chapter made me so sad. Your female leads are so selfless it's painful. I love them for it, but it's still amazing that your males leads don't let them get too far with it. I hope Anthony can pull her out of her slump, even if they don't end up together. She deserves happiness. 

Reviewer: SleepEasy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2014 06:36 pm

Title: Chapter 9 - Too Little, Too Late

another very very good story! i'm truly enjoying and looking forward to seeing Natalia and Anthony grow closer as friends and as a couple. i cant stand Barb...! she's rude and keeps on butting in on Natalia's life - why? why the hell does she feel that need to do that...!?

i'm curious as hell about Richard - is he really such a cruel and two-faced person or are the reasons for his behaviour? why is he calling Natalia? does he want her back? if i was Natalia i would answer the phone or something because Richard strikes me as a person who can suddnely show up on your doorstop if you keep ignoring him - and that would be very intersting if he did, LOOOL!

i know you have tones going so i wont ask for an update because i know the wait will be worth it! thanks for sharing this story with us! :D

 

 



Author's Response:

The reasons behind Barb and Richard's behavoir and his calls will be revealed in future chapters.  As for your presumptions about Richard popping up unannounced, excellent call. 

I'm hoping to eventually get back to this story when my schedule eases up.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Yuukiyanagi!!!

 

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2014 04:59 pm

Title: Chapter 9 - Too Little, Too Late

Anthony is more man than his father ever hoped to be.  He and Natalia have great chemistry together.  Their companionable existence is very promising for something more than just an arrangement of convenience.  I'm looking forward to extended chats where they discover new things about each other or whimsical moments that stimulate their intellect. No matter the circumstance or situation...I always enjoy the experience.

I've been stalking the site for months hoping for an update! Please don't make me wait much longer.  Truly feinding for my Joelle Jax fix!  😇



Author's Response:

Thanks JV4ME!  So glad you've enjoyed the story thus far.  I do apologize for the wait on an update on this story and "Becoming Mrs. Kourosh."  Writing has been a real challenge for me lately.  Hopefully things will soon calm down, the fog will lift, and I can get back to both stories. 

Thanks again for taking the time to read and review.  I truly appreciate it.

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2014 02:45 am

Title: Chapter 9 - Too Little, Too Late

Great job

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2014 07:03 am

Title: Chapter 9 - Too Little, Too Late

Poor Nat and poor Anthony.  He is going to go after Candace.  I think Nat should be friendly with Jamison.  I have a feeling this story is about to heat up...and wth does Richard want?

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 01 2014 05:42 am

Title: Chapter 9 - Too Little, Too Late

Girl, you're KILLING me. LOL! 

Reviewer: Camille Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2014 05:13 am

Title: Chapter 9 - Too Little, Too Late

Admit that you want more with Anthony.  Those people in his group ats kind of rude. Only that one woman was rude. GOOD STUFF! !

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2014 07:44 pm

Title: Chapter 9 - Too Little, Too Late

Thanks for the update. Good chapter.

Reviewer: shadow Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2014 05:09 pm

Title: Chapter 9 - Too Little, Too Late

Natalia is a cool cucumber. I probably would not have been so cool or nice about everything. I like her. 

Reviewer: JFJD Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2014 04:08 pm

Title: Chapter 9 - Too Little, Too Late

Well, well, well.  Does Anthony like this Candace girl or is he just being nice.  They are so stuck on the origins of their interaction that they are losing sight of what is currently in front of them.  True, the origination of the child and their past is not ideal in anyway but at this point it cannot be changed.  Do you sacrifice what is truly good and might actually be the absolute right relationship because of that.  Sometime we really get in our own way.  Also if this was a man with a 13 yr younger woman who was pregnant we wouldn't bat an eye at the age difference and how she is too young.  He would be attempting to seduce her all the time.  Sometimes I think Anthony's lasagna is seduction for him and her.  Want to really see what it is going to take to turn their relationship into even closer touching.  At some point her hormones and his sexual frustration is going to blow up but hopefully with each other.    It sounds like this interaction made her open her eyes some because she realized she wanted to be with him.  Curious to know Anthony's thoughts.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 28 2014 04:07 pm

Title: Chapter 9 - Too Little, Too Late

These two are dancing around each other.  Jamieson and Candace both look like they are not just going to walk away.  Her sister Barb just can't stop interfering in Natalia's life.   I am looking forward to seeing Natalia and Anthony grow closer as a couple.  And why is Anthony's dad calling Natalia?  

Nyeesha

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2014 03:26 pm

Title: Chapter 9 - Too Little, Too Late

Nice but when will the other story be finished?

Reviewer: So Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 28 2014 03:21 pm

Title: Chapter 8 - Heartburn

I enjoyed seeing her like this, relaxed, having fun and being herself.  I think Anthony is starting to see her true personality and is liking her more himself.  I don't think he is going to leave the home, I don't think she will let him leave the home because it will always be something to hold him their.  For a moment I forgot they are only 13yrs apart and their are plenty of men married with children or fathers at this time.  They are what each other needs despite the beginning of their circumstances.  

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2014 04:14 pm

Title: Chapter 1 - Cougars

With a twist of the neck and a butchering of normal inflection, I channeled ghetto-girl.  “My baby-daddy.”

The sentiment that she's channeling her "ghetto-girl" really bothers me.



Author's Response:

While I can understand the gut reaction the phrase "ghetto-girl" might evoke for some, I'm not sure I fully understand the exact reason the reference as used was bothersome to you.  If I had attributed it to a specific race, city, or community, or assumed the users of the dialect I was refering to (one I frequently and unbashedly use myself) possessed certain negative traits, I would have no trouble understanding any offense you might feel.  But that was not the case.

At any rate, I respect your feelings about the phrase.  And if you want to discuss it further, you're welcome to comment or email me at joellejax@ymail.com.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 20 2014 04:40 am

Title: Chapter 8 - Heartburn

You know, I've never considered sororicide, but damn if Barb ain't changing my thinking on that. And what the hell does Richard want?

Really like the brief alone time that they had. Looking forward to them getting closer. But with Barb on one end and Richard on the other, gah, I'd want to do bodily harm to both.



Author's Response:

Lol!  You're in good company.  What Richard wants will be revealed in future chapters.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, BellaChica!

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 20 2014 04:06 am



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