Why is that fool calling her?  They are so going to fall in love?  Barbara works my nerve, please do something about her. Anthony is good man, he is more of a man than his father will ever be.

I like their interactions and it's helping them get to know each other.  Why does dumbass Richard always call at the wrong time?  He is a screw up in more ways than one.  I know she says she wants Anthony to go out, but I have a feeling as soon as a female starts sniffing around him she's gonna lose it!! :)  Can't wait!!!

Loved the update.  Things are looking interesting.  I can't wait until Richard finds out.  It ought to be quite entertaining. 

Nyeesha

So...umm this is nice but when are you going to update Eshan and Joss story?

Oooo... Natalia is one evil bitch. The girl got game. I know I shouldn't say it, but I like her.

As for Dick, hell have a scorn women. Payback always hurt.

Author's Response:

Yes it does.  Thanks Juno!

I really love this story, it has a factor of truth in it that I just love. I hate that annoying woman Barbara, I know she's only trying to look out for her sister but the way she's going about us not only wrong but totally freaking abusive! It's one thing to bad mouth snot hot but to stay there and talk so bad about her future niece/nephew and put her sister down like that isn't what family should do to each other. I think deep down Barbara is acting so stank cause she might be jealous that her sister is gonna have something her and husband don't have, a child. 

I loooove Anthony! Most guys would've went running the other way, even if Natalia was their longtime boyfriend, much less a revenge one night stand, I appluad his morals, and his willingness to be better for his future child.

im enjoying this story immensely!! barbara and richard are both on my fucking nerves!! if she refers to the baby as 'that thing' one more time ill punch her in the face MYSELF!! im looking forward to seeing these two find their way together. more please!!!!!!!!! BRAVA

Please let the police have to throw Barbara out--she is a piece of nasty work.  I am loving your story.  Thank you! 

I enjoy your writing and I am enjoying this story soo much because it delves into the grey area that we each have in our lives.  Everything isn't always black and white.  Sometimes as they say, you are so busy with trying to hold onto something you should let go and then let go of something you should have held onto.  Yes, her original actions were not worthy of the woman that she is but she has yet to run away from it, instead she has embraced it and is dealing with all the ramifications that have come to pass. I admire her for that and Anthony who was an innocent bystander has also stepped forward to be the Man that he is and be there for his child and not leave this woman by herself despite maybe having every right to do so.  You never know, this could be a blessing in disguise, how do we know TPTB didn't have this plan.  Should they not attempt to see if a friendship can develop and maybe more because his dad was an asshole or she is older than him.  So happy she is kicking her sister to the curb.  She also gave Anthony something to think about with regards to their relationship.  So take your time and we will be here supporting you.

Someone needs to give Barbara two handed slap.   Great update

This was worth the wait. Fantastic job. Im still grossed out that she is pregnant for her former stepchild but I m workng passed the ick factor. I appreciate that they are both being so mature especially anthony. She caused this on herself so i dont have that much sympathy for her but he is taking this not only in stride but handling her and their situation respectfully.

Wow! It began as just revenge against the father, a man who didn't even want to acknowledge that he knew her much less that he was married to Nat and now she's pregnant for his son. This is very unexpected for everyone evolved but it was good that she told him as much as she knew there would be a chance that he wouldn't want to have anything to do with the baby.

Anthony now has really been the surprise and one that shows how mature he really is. But along with being mature, it's how honest he's being not only with himself but with her. He may not have much to offer in the sense of financial support but him being there is the best sort of beginning. They are both going to go through the discovery of learning about themselves and each other and then their futher. We are in for a wonderful ride with this story.