JoelleJax. .........you already know what I am going to say. It is what I say in every review that i leave you so I won't waste your time by fawning over you and telling you how much I love your work. Lol
Author's Response:
Lol. Aw, Artamiss Caine, you have absolutely made my day. Thanks so much for reading and the lovely review. I so appreciate it.
Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed
[Report This]Date: December 19 2013 02:21 am
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! How could you ended it right there!!!! I wasn't ready!!!!!!!! OMG! Awesome update!!! Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
Lol. I'm sorry. I know I can be a bit of the stinker with the cliffhangers, but the next chapter should end with a little bit more resolution. Updates forthcoming. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, Treale!!!
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: December 19 2013 01:43 am
*gasps* *dead* nuff said
Author's Response:
Lol. Thanks Lajack!
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: December 16 2013 10:00 pm
Hahahaha the ending was priceless. That is why they say revenge is a dish best served cold!!
Author's Response:
They do say that. Let's see how long that rings true. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 16 2013 08:40 pm
Pardon me, while I scrape my mouth off the floor... LOL... It's a good thing I am home and alone. JJax as usual you hit the ball out the park. Tell me this isnt a one shot... What a teaser!
Author's Response:
Lol. This was supposed to be a one shot. But as with most of my challenge submissions, it has taken on a life of its own. I'm juggling several projects right now, so the updates may be slow going, but there will definitely be a continuation. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Introspection! I look forward to having you along for this ride.
Reviewer: Introspection Signed [Report This]Date: December 15 2013 05:04 pm
I love Natalia and I'm glad Richard "Dick" got some of her old fashion payback and I can't wait for him to get more. What kinda BS is old Dicky talking bout inviting his newly ex-wife to meet the family he just 6 months ago divorced her from and to add insult to injury flounce a new soon to be acceptable wife in her face yes he got what he deserved and I hope he gets more. Please I am on my knees begging that he gets more ......and yeah that there is more and not the end.
NATALIA DO YA THANG GIRL I AINT MAD ATCHA!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Richard's woes are definitely not over and he might have some company in his misery. Stay tuned. Updates forthcoming. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kimyso!
Reviewer: kimyso Signed [Report This]Date: December 15 2013 04:28 am
OH MY GOD !! THAT WAS SOOOO SWEET & A BIT NASTY ! I LOVED IT :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks Kisser!
Reviewer: kisser Signed [Report This]Date: December 15 2013 12:19 am
You go girl will there be more?
Author's Response:
Yes, there will be more. Thanks Kimyso!
Reviewer: kimyso Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2013 10:22 pm
ROFLMFAO!!!!!!
This was just TOO delicious!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks JV4ME!!!
Reviewer: JV4ME Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2013 07:07 pm
I freaking love it!! I missed your stories so much!! Thank you for sharing I need a update ASAP!
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks Treale!!! I hadn't planned on doing anything more with this one. But as always, I can't walk away from it just yet. Updates forthcoming. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2013 08:19 am
Damn just found this story. Natalia is having a time, I like her. Though I am not clear on Anthony's parentage. I take it Natalia is Richards second wife?
Author's Response:
Natalia is Richard's third wife; Anthony's mother is his second. More on that in what is looking like several updates to come. Thanks for reading and commenting, Trulyme!
Reviewer: Trulyme35 Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2013 07:31 am
Thank God that was a dig. Oh trust and believe I will come running when you update cause I have got to see the reaction.
Author's Response:
I'm working on an update now. Hopefully I'll have something posted in the next few days. Thanks Shellyme.
Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2013 04:19 am
I kinda wanna bitch slap Natalie right. She is all kinds of wrong for this mess right here. Revenge should never come before self respect. All his wrong pales in comparison to sleeping with his son inorder to get pregnant. *shakes head & walks away*
She foul.
Author's Response:
Oh she is foul, but not for trying to get pregnant by Anthony. That was a dig, not a part of her plan. We'll see how well that works out for her (or maybe not since I drove you to walk away with the this part of the story). Thanks for reading and commenting, Shellyme!
Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2013 04:04 am
Okay, now I know the meaning of dysfunctional. I hope she knows what she's doing. Anthony is broke right now. I don't think she wants to get back at Richard bad enough to want to be pregnant by a struggling writer.
Author's Response:
Nat thought she knew what she was doing, and no, she doesn't what a baby by a struggling writer. Her last words were a dig, not her plan. We'll see if she grows to regret them. Thanks for reading and commenting, VeMo!
Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 14 2013 02:33 am
*faints*
Author's Response:
Lol. Thanks for reading and rating, BellaChica!
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 14 2013 02:18 am
Natalia is evil, how could you use his son like that? Nat is just put herself on my list of characters to be disliked. More please!!! How old is Richard? Why did he treat her like he was ashamed of her? More please!~~
Author's Response:
Lol. You hate all my heroines, Pam. Nat did do a little too much sleeping with her ex's son, but Anthony certainly wasn't complaining. Richard is 53, and he was ashamed of her because she's Black and his parents would not approve. I'll do at least one more update/follow-up. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2013 12:22 am
HIs parents are crazy, damn the man did graduate from college, he isn't on drugs and he doesn't have any baby mommas be grateful. It's about to be on like donkey kong!!
Author's Response:
Lol. Thanks Pam!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2013 12:16 am
Her sister Barbara is wet blanket, have your fun Nat!!
Author's Response:
Lol. Thanks Pam!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2013 12:12 am
This story was EVERYTHING!!
Author's Response:
Thanks CaramelGal!!!
Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2013 12:01 am
BooYAAAAAAAAAA I love it
Author's Response:
Thanks Idiotendenial!!!
Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2013 11:47 pm
BooYAAAAAAAAAA I love it
Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2013 11:47 pm
I love it....
Author's Response:
Thanks Bredreaway!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2013 11:45 pm
this chapter has put a smile on my face and chuckle in my throat. Great Job
Author's Response:
Thanks Bredreaway!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2013 11:43 pm
Pay back comes on the form of Natalia F***in Anthony and letting Richard know. And now that you have given me a glimpse into this story I want more, I want to see her pregnant, I want to see Richard see his son be a man and then I want Richard to have a stroke because those that you keep in the closet always come to light. Great short story!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks, JovanBleu! So glad you liked it. I don't know if I'll be able to give you everything you want, but there will be at least a one shot follow-up. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2013 11:26 pm
Please, Please give us a little more
Author's Response:
Coming up. Thanks Bredreaway!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2013 11:18 pm