Stop stop I can't handle anymore!! lol
Reviewer: justmeplz Signed [Report This]Date: February 06 2014 12:05 pm
Hey! You make it as "rebirth" story, meaning , you have different scene of them falling in love in different era until their goal is reached . But please continue
Reviewer: Locmoca Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 06 2014 09:08 am
Two more chapters, pretty please.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: February 06 2014 07:40 am
This is a beautiful story. I would hate for him to die. You have told their whole story in one chapter. Maybe you could follow with detailed stories about their past.
Reviewer: SweetCoCo76 Signed [Report This]Date: February 06 2014 04:36 am
A part of me is thinking to end it here...unless if he gets better...I hate sad endings...and I love them already even in such a short chapter.
Reviewer: amlaamar Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 06 2014 02:57 am
Me likey! Please don't kill him! So continue!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 06 2014 02:15 am
Please, please continue but put their earlier life into the story......please do continue
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: February 06 2014 01:37 am
Please continue
Reviewer: jackson1973 Signed [Report This]Date: February 06 2014 01:20 am
keep going, keep writing.
Reviewer: tiffany Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 06 2014 12:37 am