I always get confused by stories with kidnapping, rape and Stockholm syndrome. It's an extremely fine line to walk... And that is what spoils the fantasy of it for me.

I have been reading IR lit online for a while now, yet The only writer I've seen do this well, is Onimosity. Her character decided she would do the girlfriend for debt thing, and was willing in her mind. This character is never willing, even though he gets her body to 'betray' her. Which still reads as rape to me. 

And then there's alpha dominant and brutal dominant. This guy hurt her badly. He cannot even protect her from Himself. I am really curious to read a chapter from his perspective. What are his thought processes?

Anyways, if she's his prisoner, then she should sign up for online classes. And get something lasting out of it. Plus if they've been making the beast of two backs every night for five weeks straight, then she's already pregnant.

Wow! I need a cold shower. I love the way you write. It's as though I am sitting there watching them like a fly on the wall. Keep up the good work 

Wow if they keep up like this she's sure to be preggers in no time which I'm sure is his intention anyways.

Amora needs to stop thinking of ways to escape? Her thinking does not work for her.

If Noah wanted the model, she would be in the house. He knew who Amora was talking about. So, that says he has seen her on tv or somewhere.

Noah has made it clear he is not going to let her go. She indeed has become more than a debt. Hopefully time and his feeling of "owning" her will change his mind and he will offer her freedom; whatever freedom will mean to her.

Has Noah been in contact with Amora's dad to let him know how she is doing (based on how he defines " doing well") or the status of the debt?

Wow, Amora's body is calling out for Noah!  Noah is using her attraction to him against her, I love it!! where is douche bag of a sperm donor? I really want something  terrible to happen to him, I want him to meet karma. Awesome sauce!! 

This story is hott, twisted and wrong! I feel like I should hate him but I can't! Keep it up! 

Loving this story so much!! I love that Noah is so rough around the edges because once he realizes he's in love he's going to be that muc more protective of her. Please ignore the negative commenters and keep writing the story as you see fit. Can't wait for the next update!!!

i feel she needs someone to show her what feel like to really understand what Noah's giving her should not bring her so much pain physically. Also she has stop fighting for freedom and settled with the fact that she has to be abused to be happy.

I am not sure about this chapter. I guess I feel Noah is just too brutal. But I guess you can't expect anything, more from him. Loving a person is a choice, and it doesn't come by force, brutality or having sex with someone every night. Noah is confused between what lust is and what love is. It seems as if she is also.

What is happening with Noah and Amora these,days? Need an update!!!

And thats the way the cookie crumbles

Please update soon. I am baffled and confused like some of the other readers. Noah comes in the room talking abou he misses her after beating her, wants to know if she can move, gives her an aspirin and wants sex!!!!

Amora says her back is in searing pain from the wounds and she can't hardly moves, but she WANTS him. 

Please updae!

An ASPIRIN!! Come on now! Then going to ask her can she move😁

I wonder how he would feel if someone beat him with a whip!!!L

She gave into him too quick😱

Please update soon,