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Title: Chapter 3

By the way, what is she hiding? What did he do so wrong to make her leave everything behind? I've got so many questions.



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Reviewer: LuckyMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2014 08:37 am

Title: Chapter 3

GTFOH! Did he just do that? I'm over here screaming. Jace is so sexy. I love alpha males and how they stalk their prey. He wants her badddd. Great chapter. 

I need to go to bed but I want to know what happens next. Great story. 



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Reviewer: LuckyMe Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2014 08:29 am

Title: Chapter 3

Oh my days!!! This story is is soooooo good. Jace is bringing it wiith the alpha vibe



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Thanks for reading. Jace is sooo an alpha male. He really can't help it. He and Paul both have this protective vibe when it comes to Breezy. She kind of brings it out of people. 

So staytuned. Things are just heating up. Will update in a few days.  

Reviewer: Judahlove Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 21 2014 07:12 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Issshhh just got real!!!??? Update soon!



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Yes indeed!!! Thanks for reading. Stay tuned. New update coming next week. 

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2014 09:39 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Good! Lets see what is what!



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Thanks for reading. Please stay tuned. 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2014 10:06 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Well hello...:-)

Will the next chapter(s) dive in depth about how their relationship started. It said that he was married. Did he married young and why was he married?

Where is the ex-wife? Will the previous jealous women surfaced? Will Breezy give Jace a chance or after the wedding she'll dissapear? But since she told him where she was I guess he'll find her or something *Shrug*

Well like you see I have a lot of questions (Even more)XD

Hope to see you update soon.



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Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2014 05:50 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Interesting update but still want to know what's the back story between the two of them.

Author's Response:

We'll get a lot more back story in the next chapter 2 chapters. Thanks for reading. Stick with me. Will be updating more next week. 

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2014 07:08 am

Title: Chapter 3

LOVE IT! You're a fantastic writer! Anxiously waiting for your next update! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much for reading. Stay tuned as the story unfolds. Will post again next week. Thanks again!!

Reviewer: Twelve20One Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 17 2014 07:03 am

Title: Chapter 3

I'm loving the build up. It's so good. Please! Please! Update soon.



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Thanks for reading. Hang in there with me. Will post again next week for sure. 

Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2014 04:16 am

Title: Chapter 3

Oh you suck I can't believe you ended it there.Nice update.



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Thanks for reading. Gotta keep you wanting more. LOL!! Stay tuned. 

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2014 03:09 am

Title: Chapter 3

Why did she run again? Breezy obviously still has feelings Jace and Jace is still in love with her. Hoq long as Jace bwen divorced? So good!!



Author's Response:

Many of those questions will be answered in chapter 4. Stay tuned. Will post next week. Thanks for reading. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2014 01:49 am

Title: Chapter 3

Oh my sweet tomatoes!!!!!



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Thanks for reading. Will post again next week. Stay tuned. 

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2014 01:46 am

Title: Chapter 3

Ohhh Lord!!! Hot Hot HOT! I'm trying to rack my brain to figure out what happened between them. Please don't keep us waiting too long with the next update. 



Author's Response:

Many, many thanks for reading. Things are going to get really hot. Stay tuned. Will post next week. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2014 01:28 am

Title: Chapter 3

More!  Please!



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More is definitely on the way. Thanks for reading and stay tuned. Will post next week.  

Reviewer: lilmissg69 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2014 01:14 am



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