nicely done !
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. New updates weekly!! Stay tuned.
Yevette
Reviewer: minxie Signed [Report This]Date: July 19 2014 01:39 am
This is getting real good. I am looking forward to reading what is next.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Stay tuned as we get a little deeper into what makes these two tick. I really appreciate the review.
Yevette
Reviewer: Belladonna400 Signed
[Report This]Date: July 09 2014 01:40 pm
I want more... I think you should really get it published so far. Keep up the good work and GOD BLESS.
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much for reading. And many more thanks for the encouragement. I really appreciate it. Stay with me on this journey.
Yevette
Reviewer: Anitra Edwards Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 09 2014 10:28 am
This chapter was so short! It has me on my toes.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Will update the rest of the chapter on tomorrow. Stay tuned.
Reviewer: vulgarviper Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 09 2014 03:18 am
Oh that Bish!! See it is time for some putting down roots and whipping a bish ass with my limbs until she crying. Now I want Breezy to fight for her man. Don't let this heffa get away with this manipulative crap. So I am guessing from this conversation that he married Sara because he thought she was pregnant with his child when she was actually pregnant with someone else's child and now that decision to marry her and most likely have slept with her while with Breezy has Breezy running for the hills. At this point I feel sorry for Jace. He has 2 stubborn women in his life. One he wants to get rid of and One he wants. Hmmm, wonder how he will resolve this because no matter what he says, she will only think he is saying it to get into her pants. His best friend is going to have to help him. Paul and her sister will need to help him so he will have to appeal to them I think, otherwise I don't see her staying in the same room as him for 5 seconds. Can't wait for the next chapter tomorrow.
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much for reading. Yeah, Sara is a piece of work. Jace has got his work cut out for him. Right now everybody is upset with him.
Breezy has a lot to think about. Its hard for her to trust people. Her circle of friends is very small and very protective of her. Right now, she does not want a thing to do with Jace. She just wants to get through this week with as little drama as possible but now she has to deal with Phoenix and now Jace.
Stay tuned. Tomorrow we'll get her take on this situation.
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: July 09 2014 02:02 am
Thank goodness tomorrow. I was like hey what the heck!?!?
Author's Response:
LOL!!! I know right. But tune in tomorrow and let me know what you think. Thank you so much for reading.
Yevette
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: July 09 2014 01:28 am
I hate conniving bitches!! And I hate more that she clearly got away with something major. Make her pay.
As for the baby, I'm going to assume it isn't his because I'd hate for a child to suffer because of this. Although I do see why Jace could possibly do that given his mother. She's someone who doesn't know when to step off, so the hard line has to be taken with her.
Waiting for the rest....
Author's Response:
Jace is going to have to get Sara in check and quick, if he wants to have a shot at Breezy. Sara is use to getting whst she wants and she knows that Breezy is Jace's weakness. So, she's going to do whatever she can to keep them apart.
Thanks for reading and keep the reviews coming. They are my motivation. Stay tuned.
Yevette
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: July 09 2014 01:04 am
Yaay, another update.
To be honest though, Sara doesn't actually seem that bad. Or is that just me thinking that?
Author's Response:
She's got a few boundary issues. Plus, she really just doesn't like Breezy. But if i was to take a guess, I would say that she's jealous of the relationship that he has with Breezy.
Thanks for reading. And keep the reviews coming so that I can continue to grow as a writer. Love receiving them. Stay tuned
Yevette
Reviewer: anomy Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 08 2014 11:32 pm
this is getting good. i can't wait to find out what sara did to jace to cause this strain between him and breezy.
Author's Response:
Sara, has a way of getting what she wants and what she still wants is Jace. Even in her present condition. She still can't move on.
Stay tuned. We'll get Breezy's take. Thanks for reading and the review.
Yevette
Reviewer: sandradee Signed [Report This]Date: July 08 2014 10:31 pm
Sara needs an ass whopping, asap!! Why hasn't he filed a restraining order against Sara? That bitch had a dual personality, and their both psychotic. Ladies, can we say medication?! Looking forward to tomorrows update.
Author's Response:
That she does! Jace has let her get away with this foolishness for far too long. But once she insulted Breezy, I think that finally woke him up.
Stay tuned to find out Breezy's take on the whole situation. Let me know what you think.
Yevette
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: July 08 2014 10:09 pm