Reviews For Sugar Baby Love
Title: Compromise

I team both, they both have their valid points... Have a feeling that Jen is going to find out about their arrangement and make life difficult for them

Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 10:27 pm

Title: Compromise

Like the update 

Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 04:20 pm

Title: Compromise

Team Jameson all the way, Elise makes my left eye twitch.  I am glad that she knows just how wrong she is but I don't trust her to change just yet. So good!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 03:14 pm

Title: Compromise

Well, that went well. LOL!! I have to say I was very proud of Elise in this chapter. She put on her grown ass woman panties on in this chapter. Jameson held himself surprisingly more human, for a second I thought he was all robot. But he really opened up. So, if I had a team at this point it's Team Jameson, he is open and honest, I hope him and Elise take this good start and go passionate and sexy very soon. *Wink*

 

Great update and please post soon. Happy Labor Day :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 11:27 am

Title: Compromise

He's a little too blunt, but I like him that way, so go team Jameson.

Reviewer: ayiti2001 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 05:55 am

Title: Cast

Sorry but this story is so haphazard to make any sense. Plus Elise who is supposed to be a med student is acting like a spoilt brat.  Her character is so irritating  and annoying that it is a wonder  that Jameson could remotely be attracted to her.  It is not like she was forced into signing anything.  If she did not like the terms she could have backed out.  Well she wanted something from him therefore it stands to reason that she keeps up with her contractual terms and gives something back.   Where is this all going. 



Author's Response:

Well this story is fictional so... but all stories have three parts and this is still the beginning. This can be a whirlwind for some people, but this story has a purpose. 

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 05:54 am

Title: Compromise

I wonder what happened her past to make Elise so standoffish? Bad habits are hard to break. I believe that she'll try to be nice, but eventually she'll show out again. 

Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 05:49 am

Title: Boundaries

Why is Elise acting as if he blackmailed her into their relationship. Right now its business arrangement one in which she entered with full disclosure. If she hates the idea of their arrangement why start it.

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2014 09:31 pm

Title: Friends? Pt 1

I think he should listen to Tony and become friends with her other wise this can blow up in his face big time.  I wonder how his friends are going to react to her?? Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2014 07:26 pm

Title: Friends? Pt 1

So far so good! I can't wait to find out what happens next. 

Reviewer: Belladonna400 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 11:12 pm

Title: Friends? Pt 1

Again, she agreed. I hate when people do that. Going forward, she needs to tell him her issues with school and his demands. They can work something out in special cases. But, she need not use that as an excuse for everything. Because, again, SHE AGREED!! She's going to have to give a little, too.

Seriously, what the hell did she think she was agreeing to anyway? She gets his money, new car, new apartment, and school funding and he gets what from her? The long arm, and constant whining about keeping up her end. Its hundreds of thousands of dollars here! Its like lending someone money and that someone gets mad when asked to pay the money back! Geez!

Yes, I will defend Jameson on this one point.

 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 10:57 pm

Title: Friends? Pt 1

I understand that she needs to sleep and study. At the same time, she did sign the contract and was fully aware of the situation. She really needs to get over it and suck it up, he's being rather nice and sensitive to her at this point. Maybe they can compromise with him giving her a schedule of all the events he wants her to attend ahead of time, and she can plan her time (sleep and studying) accordingly. Hopefully, they the can get on the same page and actually start bulinding their (platonic and romantic) relationship ASAP.

 

Thanks for updating. Keep that in flowin'!!!

Reviewer: SeekingVirtue17 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 08:23 pm

Title: Friends? Pt 1

This is all so weird. He can try; however, a person who as no friends does not know how to make them if they are not taught. She signed his contact, knowing full well what he expected of her, so she needs to put her big girl panties on and act nice. It was not like she did not know he was freaky as hell. 

Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 08:21 pm

Title: Friends? Pt 1

Elise is getting on my nerves. They are both getting something from this arrangement. She could be a little nicer. She's coming off like an ungrateful brat. It's not like he asked her to do that much. Sleep in some expensive lingerie next to a hot man...get pampered? Where do I sign up?

Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 07:17 pm

Title: Friends? Pt 1

They are not mature enough! She is acting like a brat although SHE decided to sign that contract with him! He acts like he never had a woman or even never had sex! They lack maturity in their conversations. 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 01:47 pm

Title: Friends? Pt 1

Elise isn't likeable.

Reviewer: GypsyBonez Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 01:27 pm

Title: Friends? Pt 1

I think Elise needs to "lighten up" she is so distrustful, she can not see the effort or the good in the relationship. I think before they go any further they need to have an honest conversation with each other.

Elise is not the type of woman that accepts help, compliments or friendship quickly or easily, so Jameson will need to learn patience, and how to not be so demanding.

In the end I believe this relationship will be GREAT for all involved! 

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 12:25 pm

Title: Friends? Pt 1

So James seems borderline psychotic.  I mean the obsession with red and everything is just team too much.  I keep waiting for him to attack her when she really "disobeys" him.  He is really, REALLY creepy.

Reviewer: babygirl2cute4u Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 09:25 am

Title: Friends? Pt 1

I hope so she so mean to him lol. 

Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 07:56 am

Title: Friends? Pt 1

Elise is working my nerves, she is not even trying to play nice,.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 07:50 am

Title: Friends? Pt 1

Hmm, I don't know if they can be friends. I think they would need to know more about each other. Right now they seem to be at defense stance with one another, so being friends seem really unlikely. LOL!! 

 

Good job, I can't wait for the next chapter :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 07:26 am

Title: Boundaries

Yes. Lol.  Way too much. But it works.

Reviewer: Astrid Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2014 12:22 pm

Title: Boundaries

Seems kind of weird... Can't get a fix on his personality yet. I will keep following story though.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2014 09:26 am

Title: Boundaries

I think JAmes hold on tight and like to be in control because he doesn't knoe what true and healthy love is. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2014 02:08 am

Title: Chapter 5

Man he being a big d head but, something tells me he going to fall for her hard and fast big time. Thanks for the update

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2014 01:59 am



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