I love it. Women have babies for even dumber reasons then this lol. This is going to be good. I want to know why she doesn't want to ever get married that seems to be common with black women is it because she feels like no one wants to marry her?
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[Report This]Date: August 16 2014 01:18 am
So if he cannot have her love, he will accept the love of her child? Um huh? Sounds like someone needs therapy.
Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]Date: August 15 2014 10:14 pm
Please update soon this is getting better and better with each chapter.
Reviewer: jackson1973 Signed [Report This]Date: August 15 2014 01:52 am
Hmm. Everything abt what was written in that contract would raise red flags on my radar in my opinion. First, why would a handsome rich man need a contract to get a woman to marry him? Also, he was talking down to her as if she was on her way to the homeless shelter with no options. He seems a bit off to me. I wouldn't sign any contract like that. Almost like she's signing a prenup without knowing a thing about him. Be careful girl! 😯
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: August 14 2014 07:22 pm
this is good. keep updating
Reviewer: miss jlb Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 14 2014 06:10 am
She has to give him a baby? Jameson is sounding kinda creepy. Let's see what the next chapter brings.
Reviewer: shadow Signed [Report This]Date: August 14 2014 05:50 am
very unusual clause. especially the part about giving him a child if they are not in love. ok, so i am intrigued. thanks for the chapter.
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[Report This]Date: August 14 2014 05:32 am
LOL....Elise acts like she just signed her life away to only knows what!
I think they are both going to learn alot when this is all over.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: August 14 2014 04:10 am
Oh, man.... This is getting really real for Ms. Elise. I'm just shock and curious about who is Jameson really is. He is so intense and different. I can't wait to see what happens next, now that the rules of the game is set. I hope they have hot and passionate... 'relationship' *wink wink* for these two, LOL!! This story is hella good. I can't wait for more.
Great job, please post more soon :D
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: August 14 2014 03:16 am
I think that Jameson like Elise to because she actually wants to do something with her like and that she's just not asking for money to blow it on artificial stuff
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: August 14 2014 12:52 am
Only one chapter in and I'm already liking this story... Can't wait to read more
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: August 14 2014 12:29 am
They will both learn something about themselves during this arrangement. Her childhood really jaded Elise and she is terrified. Yet she signed the contact so that she could have her dream. Hopefully Jameson will grow a heart through this interaction. Thank you updating so quickly!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 14 2014 12:03 am
Rsally enjoying ..thanks for updating..
Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2014 11:44 pm
Very interesting clause, I was not expecting that at all. I wish the chapters were longer. I need to know more.
Update Soon!!
Reviewer: HermioneMalfoy08 Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2014 10:25 am
I like the clause but I would love to read longer chapters. Looking forward to updates. ASAP please!!!
Reviewer: SnowFever Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2014 05:32 am
Weird! If you fall in love would you not want to marry! Kind of a let down. Hopefully the next update will make more sense. Hope you update soon
Reviewer: Ace1234 Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 13 2014 04:14 am
Lol I was expecting something weird . But that sounds like a good clause lol I mean why not marry him if your in love with him yeah?
Reviewer: Jesslove3205 Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2014 03:59 am
I absolutely love the clause. Is there a stipulation if they have a baby? Aww man, I realy like this story and cannot wait for the update.
Reviewer: jj Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 13 2014 03:02 am
Love the clause, but wish it were longer. :-)
Reviewer: A.C. Nixon Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 13 2014 02:49 am
Good story but how did her dress go from a short black cocktail dress at the begining of the story to a red dress at the end?
Author's Response:
her dress was not red he was talking about her lips.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 13 2014 02:09 am
Ohhhh.... I love this story. And Mr. Jameson is very mysterious and sexy, I can't wait to see how this all plays out. Please post soon, I was not expecting the clause to be what it is.
Great job :D
[Report This]Date: August 13 2014 01:56 am
Interesting turn of events. Interesting clause, I would have to think about it.
Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2014 01:25 am
I am surprised by that clause as Jameson doesn't believe I love or marriage. I think that Elise will begood for Jameson making him feel. Jameson will show Elise how to enjoy life. I like the clause.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 12 2014 11:39 pm
Interesting. Of course they'll fall in love!
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: August 12 2014 10:39 pm