please keep going
Reviewer: Benedicte Signed [Report This]Date: June 21 2016 08:18 pm
I can't wait to see the elaboration of their relashionship.
P.S. Bedside the orthographies the writing is solid.
Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed




Date: September 21 2014 03:39 am
Which one is married?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed




Date: September 20 2014 03:34 pm
Why is she always running?? Runing away is a trait that i find annoying. Sean is a available keeper!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed




Date: September 20 2014 03:32 pm
Why couldn't Nina stay? Is just using Sean for sex? If Nina doesn't want Sean, I'll take him! Me likey!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed




Date: September 20 2014 03:19 pm
I have so many questions but I can't help but love a good mystery. I don't know if I like Sean. He seems a little.... off to me. And Nina is a mystery to me. What is their relationship and why does it seem they are both hiding something BIG?!
Please keep going, I want more. Great job, this story is truely orginial :D
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed



Date: September 20 2014 10:30 am
I like it, this chapter was a great start to a very good story. Please contiune :D
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed



Date: September 20 2014 10:25 am