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Title: No Charity Here

please keep going

 Reviewer: Benedicte Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2016 08:18 pm
Title: No Charity Here

I can't wait to see the elaboration of their relashionship.

 

 

 

P.S. Bedside the orthographies the writing is solid.

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 21 2014 03:39 am
Title: No Charity Here

Which one is married? 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2014 03:34 pm
Title: No Charity Here

Why is she always running?? Runing away is a trait that i find annoying. Sean is a available keeper! 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2014 03:32 pm
Title: Need

Why couldn't Nina stay? Is just using Sean for sex?   If Nina doesn't want Sean, I'll take him! Me likey!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2014 03:19 pm
Title: No Charity Here

I have so many questions but I can't help but love a good mystery. I don't know if I like Sean. He seems a little.... off to me. And Nina is a mystery to me. What is their relationship and why does it seem they are both hiding something BIG?!

 

Please keep going, I want more. Great job, this story is truely orginial :D

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2014 10:30 am
Title: Need

I like it, this chapter was a great start to a very good story. Please contiune :D

 Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2014 10:25 am


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