I think "The Rogue" makes more sense as a title. Otherwise excellent work!!
Reviewer: jables Signed [Report This]Date: January 17 2015 12:12 am
I've been slack by not commenting on your work thus far but I've got to let you know that your imagination is excellent. I can almost see the scenes--almost as though I am watching a movie. Keep up the good work. Waiting anxiously for the next update.
Reviewer: readwonderfully Signed [Report This]Date: January 16 2015 08:28 am
Was Celeste hallucinating or drwaming about her unborn baby? I need more!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 16 2015 06:29 am
Who gave Celeste the knock out juice? Is Sage okay or was he part of the conspiracy? Where sre Michael and Jasper? Awesome sauce?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 09 2015 06:58 am
Who gave Celeste the knock out juice? Is Sage okay or was he part of the conspiracy? Where sre Michael and Jasper? Awesome sauce?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 09 2015 06:58 am
Why did Michael kiss Miriam?? Celeste didn't need to see that.
Reviewer: Wideyedreamer Signed [Report This]Date: November 20 2014 05:00 pm
I invited really don't like Miriam now, why did Michael kiss her stupid ass? It's suppose be Celeste and Michael and that nut job ho is suppose to be dead. I livedhow scard Dr. Marab deserves to die for what he helped to do Jasper and Celeste. Why is it that in an apocalypse the evil people take over? Awesome Sauce!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 19 2014 12:41 pm
AWESOME!!!! Celeste is a bad momma and appreciate Michael exhibiting a healthy fear. Karen is evil and I hope that she is dead.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2014 05:11 am
Holy crap this is good. So celest's baby is infected and not her? I don't know if that's a good or bad thing but I need to know who is the father? I can't remember if u told us or not.... Anyway I'm so enjoying this story please continue.
Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed [Report This]Date: October 13 2014 02:08 pm
Is the title RED? Or did you mean ROGUE?
Great start!
Reviewer: 321wriley Signed [Report This]Date: October 12 2014 08:00 pm
Wow, Jasper, Celeste and Michael can't trust anyone. I have no doubt that Michael would kill Celeste. Celeste is not infected but the baby is, so why is Celeste stronger than Jasper? Michael is frightened and I don't blame him at all. I really want Karen and Dr. Marab dead!! This is so awesome! !
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 01:12 pm
I luv this story but I'm sooooooooo confused. It's like watching a bad car wreck... you know you can't watch and slow down but you can't help yourself. ..
Reviewer: AD Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 08 2014 02:36 pm
That was crazy her only friends are now her enemies. What will Celeste do? More please, I must know what happened!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 08 2014 01:44 pm
I'm so ready for your come back. Awesome start, I can't wait for more.
Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed [Report This]Date: October 07 2014 12:39 pm
Loved they start! Sort of scary!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: October 05 2014 07:10 am
OMG! I just died,........😮
So glad u are back!
Reviewer: Avapriceless1 Signed [Report This]Date: October 05 2014 03:58 am
Oh crap, did she get bitten? Where in the hell is everyone? More please!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 03 2014 05:29 am