Gray is going to cancel on the hiking trip--she got her period. How old was she when she was adopted? Please say she was a preteen anything else is just a bit creepy. Caleb need to end things with Jenna and high tail it to Austrailia--give Grey time to accept they were meant to be. I would worry more about explaining things to the lil sister.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed
[Report This]Date: October 10 2014 04:34 am
I'm glad he told her but he's just making it bad for her later if he wants her to be with him. Needs to break with her friend...
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 11:27 pm
That was so dumb....
Author's Response:
HAHA!
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 11:02 pm
If he keeps up with Jenna she's gonna get hurt.
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 10:47 pm
Feel sorry for him...
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 10:36 pm
Yes. I love this 😊 !
Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 10:34 pm
Oh dear. He needs to let go of Jenna. She's going to witness something and be a woman scorned.
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 09:21 am
I wish that Caleb would tell Jenna that he isn't interested because it is painful reading about her throwing herself at him. Damn, buy a clue girl!! I hope that he hears back from Australia, being separated from Caleb somemore will help Grey to make up her mind. Especially that she knows how Caleb feels about her. Awesome juice!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 05:54 am
I like the story. It flows well. Caleb is so torn because he loves Grey and I think deep down she feels the same way. Now I hope Jenna doesn't find out. Anyway I like the story and if Caleb looks like Kit Harrington then how can Grey resist him. He's hot!! Please update
Author's Response:
Lol RIGHT!
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 04:29 am
I love that it's in Caleb's point of view..
Reviewer: Wideyedreamer Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 04:08 am
I love it! Can you show more from grey's POV?
Author's Response:
I can stick it in there some how sure!
Reviewer: chelseycarenne Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 04:05 am
Supreb!!!!!
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 03:58 am
Good updates n hope she figure it out soon
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 03:34 am
Holy smokes! It just got real. I wonder what she's going to say!! Update soon!!!!!
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 02:18 am
Love the whole taboo vibe going on and the twist makes it very interesting. I cant wait to read more.
Reviewer: amlaamar Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 02:08 am
Oh my! I want to know what Grey thinks.
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 01:57 am
Caleb and Grey use to be close but when did the rift in their relationship start? Like where they close before she went to Barcelona, did they get in a fight before she left, or was it a slow progression? It just seems like they went from 100 to 0 on the closeness scale. Great story, excited for an update =)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 08 2014 11:46 pm
Finally!! I hope Caleb will be a little nicer. What is Grey gonna do about the kiss? Will she tell on him? Will she hit him? Or will she go along with his feelings? These questions and more will be answered on the next update!! LOL!!!
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: October 08 2014 11:45 pm
Fabulous. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see how this will play out. There are a few typos, but I've chocked it up to (and forgiven them for) a rapid delivery of chapters to your anxious fans! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks for letting me know! Ill be sure to fix them!
Reviewer: Azulphoenix Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 08 2014 11:12 pm
This is very interesting! Please keep going.
Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed [Report This]Date: October 08 2014 10:47 pm
Wow, Caleb kissed Grey! I wonder what are her thoughts? ? Jenna is making a nuisance of herself and Caleb will soon regret using her for sex. I am waiting for Caleb to blurt out that he'a in NV love with Grey. Jenna making my eye twitch!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 08 2014 09:53 pm
I really don't like Jenna and Nathan is working my last nerve. I am loving this story!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 08 2014 06:31 pm
Jenna is so stupid, Caleb ain't thinking about youuveitis and he just used you for sex. Grey has feelings for Caleb, yes!! More please! !
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 08 2014 06:26 pm
This story is AWESOME! I know you would like feedback but I don't have any. I'm sorry for that but your story really is good.
Author's Response:
You are okay!
Reviewer: AD Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 08 2014 03:13 pm