Please let Hiram keep Steven. I can't stand child abuse...those parents will soon get what they deserve. Glad Savvy is ok. Good chapter.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: January 13 2015 09:00 am
Wow it was a bit of luck Hiram happened to be in the hospital when esther arrived with Steven..hope Hiram adopts him ...can't fathom Steven being stuck with his abusive parents any longer..the poor little boy deserves some happiness..update soon!!!
Reviewer: jenny Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 13 2015 07:39 am
I hope the FBI get involved in investigating Hiram's mother and the kkk. They probably will find other children being abused by other kkk parents. I wonder will the doctors after treating Steven find Steven as a carrier of sickle cell? Now that will really upset Steven's family.
Reviewer: Investigation of the Whitfield's Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 13 2015 06:23 am
Stevie will hopefully be safe now that Hiram has seen him. These people are evil! ! Savie is such a cutie. Awesome sauce! !
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 13 2015 05:44 am
The rubber is getting ready to hit the road. Hopefully little Steven will get away from his crazy parents. If the bruises are there, that should be reason enough for someone to examine Steven.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 13 2015 05:37 am
I hope that Steven gets placed in Hiriam and Camille's care and I hope Hiriam's family goes down and they all end up in prision!!!
What a tease?! I love your story but the chapters are super short!!!
Reviewer: Faith Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 13 2015 05:34 am
Savvy is a cutie pie.
And now the truth is out. But watch that family of his not believe their lying eyes.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: January 11 2015 07:00 pm
The pic of Savannah is so adorable! 💖
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: January 09 2015 06:17 pm
Wow. This actually brought back a memory of when I found out that my baby nephew had sickle cell. We were in such a panic. And he just kept screaming. This really hits home. People don't think that it's as bad as it sounds but it is. You bring a lot of passion into your writing and I hope you continue. Love this story!
Reviewer: hazelbazel92 Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 09 2015 12:02 am
You hit the nail on the head! Knew Hiram Sr was a under cover brother, because he loves to sex up a sister but will marry a white girl, lol! Great update! Great detective work by Camille and Hiram Jr.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: January 08 2015 09:59 am
Btw...lil miss savvy is simply adorable!! How could anyone not fall in love with that beautiful baby and want to hurt her is just mind-boggling. I'll never understand that kind of hate, that kind of evil; I just hope the family can move away from that dreadful place soon and start anew.
Reviewer: JV4ME Signed [Report This]Date: January 08 2015 01:58 am
The truth shall set you free !
Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed [Report This]Date: January 07 2015 05:15 pm
If the Klan-Whitfields are capable of drowning their too-dark infants in order to pass, then they need to keep a sharp eye on Savvy and not let em anywhere near her! I put nothing past em.
Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 07 2015 04:22 pm
Knew something was fishy about his family! Well them foks ain't pure white nobody is no matter what they say
Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed [Report This]Date: January 07 2015 07:33 am
Thank you! I read the story twice, Camille is supportive and Hiram is actually fine with knowing that his father had black genetics and I hope that one day he will explain to his daughter where she came from and that she is the example of what love can become when you forget about the color of your skin, your religion, your wealth, she was created because love conquers all.
I know that Hiram and Camille are not thinking about having a baby right now but you touched me so much with that beautiful picture of baby Savvy, I'd love to see a picture of baby Hiram/Camille before the end of this story.
Reviewer: katt Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 07 2015 03:57 am
Hiriam's family was and is trip!! Savie is so cute and loves her daddy. I am glad that Hiriam was able to find his true family lineage. Awesome sauce!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 07 2015 03:20 am
Hmmm... Its all coming together.
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: January 07 2015 03:17 am
Errrmigod never thought I could love three characters this much! Thank you for the update, absolutely adore this story
Reviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]Date: January 07 2015 02:31 am
A wonderful update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: January 07 2015 02:25 am
Mmmm. Mmmm humpf!! Lawd-ah-mercy! Hiram's mammy is going to have a fit!! What is she going to do when the truth comes out...!?! Lol. Will she disown all her children? Plus she'd lain down and beared fruit with a black man- a few times removed sure but ole Hiram Sr. had black blood running through his veins...hahaha...probably knew it too! No doubt his mother will deny the whole thing and act-a-fool but who cares...ole biddie!
Anyhoo, I'm glad little Savvy is better. If she truly has sickle cell...then in all probability both parents had/have the trait. Camille should know her status since most states test certain races and/or ethnicities for the disease in early childhood. With this new development, Hiram and Camille should discuss the possibilities if they ever decide to expand their family.
My hangup with this chapter was the use of the 'African American' descriptive as Camille read one of the articles...imo, I think the verbiage would"ve been 'negro' or some other reference commonly used during that era and geographic.
nevertheless, shiot is about to get real! Thanks for the enlightening update!
Reviewer: JV4ME Signed [Report This]Date: January 07 2015 02:07 am
Awwww Savy
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: January 07 2015 01:40 am
Oh man, can't wait until the other Whitfieds find out they are bi-racial, especially it shrew of a mother and his lazy sister. Lol.
Reviewer: liberty lady Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07 2015 01:31 am
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Reviewer: Moe Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 07 2015 12:34 am