Uhhh, it's going to hit the fan! I know his Mom n family will give him a fit!
Reviewer: Cindi47 Signed [Report This]Date: January 04 2015 01:39 am
Poor Savvy! I know that in the future that Camille and Hiram would be stronger for their daughter, if anything this will bring all three of them closer. Now, I have been thinking long and hard about Savvy's appearance because I am guessing the Hiram's mother or father has African ancestory in them but pass for white because that could only explain it. I am banking on the father. Just my thought.
Reviewer: luvrayne Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 01 2015 10:39 pm
omg this book is getting better and better
Reviewer: NAYNAY Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 30 2014 07:05 pm
I really hope Savannah can pull through this sickle cell battle given how small she was when she was born and the umbilical cord wrapped around her neck I'm not surprised her immune system isn't that strong. But if she's strong enough to survive her birth she's a strong little toddler. As for what's going on in that family tree the Whitfields have some explaining to do.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 30 2014 05:56 pm
Poor Savannah ! :(
Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed [Report This]Date: December 30 2014 03:40 am
More trouble for Hiram and Camille. They have had quite a few challenges. I hate Savannah has sickle cell. That will a very challenging disease for the family. I am hoping for wrong diagnosis. Although this will get Hiram to investigate his family's background as well as Priscilla's. Hopefully he can dig up some history from the court house and the news papers.
I am sure when Hiram's mom find out there has been some hanky pinky going on, it will probably drive her crazy. Who knows she and Hiram's dad may have African American ancestors. Want that shake up the klans?
Hiram may find some hidden papers of his family history at the cabin because it was a secret place for Hiram's dad. None of the other family members seems to know of the cabin.
Reviewer: Hanky panky Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 29 2014 12:41 pm
Great update can't wait until the New Year to see what secrets Harim unearth on his fathers side of the family. See ya then
Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]Date: December 29 2014 11:12 am
Great update! I had a feeling there was a "Fly in the buttermilk" as they say! Well, well, well! Ms. Ruth is going to fall dead when she finds out that, the love of her life Hiram Sr. has black folks in his family!
She will be shunned and maybe crazy Debbie will finally back off!
Have a great rest of your holiday. Happy New Year!
10 stars!!!!!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: December 29 2014 10:27 am
oooohhhh unearthing family secrets here we come lol
Reviewer: Mary P Signed [Report This]Date: December 29 2014 10:06 am
Awwwww Savy
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: December 29 2014 09:20 am
I'm so intrigued. I hate that Savvy is sick, but this definitely opens up some new family carp fir Hiram. Loved the update. Happy New year!!!
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: December 29 2014 07:50 am
Be blessed Marchpeices! Excellent update, but we all know that Hiram will get no where with his human incubator. Where are the Keller's? Thank you for an early birthday gift which is an update of thw0s wonderful story!! Awesome sauce!
Author's Response:
Thanks and Happy Birthday to you
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 29 2014 02:37 am
Whitfields turn in your Klan cards. Savvy has ousted your dirty little secret.
Author's Response:
Pretty much.
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: December 29 2014 02:00 am
Thanks for the update.
I can't wait to see where the African American gene trait is in the Whitfields. I am sure Hiram's mother is going to be some upset. If it is in Hiram it is most likely in the other siblings😳
Who put the chocolate in the milk? Interesting!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 28 2014 10:40 pm
Thanks for the update, looking forward to more in the new year. Loved how you are working the family history into the story, very clever to use a medical condition.
Author's Response:
I originally didn't want to give Savannah sickle cell but there needed to be a reason for them to actually dig into their family's history to find out why Savannah looks the way she does.
Reviewer: kurious kale Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 28 2014 09:22 pm
Ugh!!! I wish this story was set today. If a child misses so many days of school the school administrator and the resource officer will go check on the child if they don't respond when called or letters are sent. These excuses for humans need to be beaten just like they hurt little Stevie, by someone bigger ad's meaner. I hope Stevie runs away and finds Hiram and his new family.
On a happier note, I'm glad those two are growing closer. Savvy is too cute and it's going to be spoiled rotten with love, but not in a had way. I want them to get Stevie and go away, far away.
Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed [Report This]Date: December 28 2014 01:54 pm
The guy you selected to represent George Hamilton was a stroke of genius, due to the fact that the actual guy is a publically known racist on television. Too funny. Perfect casting!!
Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]Date: December 28 2014 06:00 am
Loved the update! Poor Steven! That whole family is abusing that poor boy. Hope he escapes from that environment. Martha is a smart woman but it's too bad she doesn't have any positive influence on Debbie.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: December 28 2014 03:28 am
Steven needs to be rescued from his crazy family before he is seriously hurt. Hopefully his teacher will notice the bruises or some of the students and they tell the teacher.
i believe Savannah got her complexion from Hiram's side. Somebody put some chocolate on the milk.
Update soon.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 27 2014 11:30 pm
Wow, Hiram's mother is mean. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: December 25 2014 11:33 pm
What a tragic beginning for this baby. I can't wait to read why the baby looks biracial if both her parents are white. AS for Camille to be rejected by her family because she was to dark is tragic. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: December 25 2014 11:14 pm
Debbie, is dangerous you have to stop her before it's too late! You h e to say Steven before they really hurt him.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: December 25 2014 06:38 pm
Poor steven ! Makes me sick
Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed [Report This]Date: December 24 2014 07:09 am
I sure hope that when Hiram leaves he takes Steven with him, his so-called parents are nothing but lazy uneducated ignorant drunk assholes.
As for Debbie, seems that dad spoiled her rotten, she is going to learn a Hard lesson.
Reviewer: liberty lady Signed [Report This]Date: December 24 2014 03:22 am
This is getting better and better! Can't wait to find out why little Savannah looks like she's mixed! Ready or not, I would love to read about a precious baby made out of love, they would cope right! They'd fall in love with their child before they worry about the hows and whys! That Debbie better have it coming in the next chapter and please save that poor child from the violence, both physical and psychological he is going through!
Reviewer: Katr Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 24 2014 02:21 am