Poor Steven!! Hiram and Camille need to find some way to get him away from that family. Neither parent cares and Grandma Ruth is a psycho. Debbie's mother is the only one showing some sense. It is never ok to be obsessed with anybody or thing. How is she able to rally all of these people to her cause and make them thing it is ok?? I hope that the klan are not able to surprise Hiram and Camille like the last time.
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: December 23 2014 05:58 pm
I love the update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: December 23 2014 05:10 pm
I pray that CPS takes Steven away!! Hopefully Camille and Hiram can adopt him?
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: December 23 2014 03:35 pm
Great update
Reviewer: jomoli Signed [Report This]Date: December 23 2014 03:10 pm
You know in a way Steven and Savannah are kind of like parallels to Hiram and Camille. Camille saw herself in Savannah when she was born in the fact that the child's grandmother did not claim her at the hospital (thank God) just like her own parents. And Camille knew Savannah wouldn't fit it in or be critizied by the Whitfields over her skin and her Jewish roots just like the Baxters did to her.
The fact that Steven resembles Hiram more than Edward is symbolic and ironic at the same time. And of course Hiram has treated Steven as a father should more than Edward ever has. Hiram although not physcially abused like Steven was just as verbally and mentally abused growing up with all of the things his parents espcially his father was putting in his head. Hiram can clearly see that cycle contiuing with Steven the same if not worse
So maybe the two of them want to do right by Steven and Savannah so they don't end up with emotional and mental issuses as they get older. Great update
Reviewer: A second generation Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 23 2014 12:53 pm
Hiram's family members are monsters and downright disgusting. I was even more disgusted at Ruth's reply after Stevie's (so called "father") was beating him like he stole something. I do not think Ruth and the others need help at all because there are people who would rather stay in hate for the rest of their lives. Stevie needs to be taken away immediately. My heart goes out to him.
I know that Martha is a racist and all, but she even finds it disturbing about her daughter's, Debbie, behavior. I mean she basically told Debbie to leave Hiram alone and that he does not want her. Also, Martha can sense that Debbie would go to such lengths to actually kill anyone who stands in Debbie's way. After all, this is what happens when you SPOIL THE CHILD.
Great update!
Reviewer: Luvrayne Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 23 2014 11:56 am
Ruth is just as screwy as her kids. She knows Steven is being abused and she just accept it? Where did this family go wrong? There is no love or compassion.
And Debbie just needs to be institutionalized.
Date: December 23 2014 11:50 am
Please get Steven out if that crazy house...ugh. I swear I was sick to my stomach just reading it and I know it's fake. I hope that granny, momma and daddy get their assets beat!!! Hate them
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: December 23 2014 06:29 am
I feel so bad for that sweetie pie Steven, someone needs to save him. I know that Steven jas to have had some injuries, so why hasn't his teacher reported his sperm donor and human incubator to the authorities? I am so looking forward to Debbie, his incubator Ruth and her daughters as well as yne rest of the klan to perish. How soon will Steven Hiram and run away? I want that little boy safe as he seems to most like Hiram. Awesome sauce!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 23 2014 05:55 am
wonderful update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: December 23 2014 03:58 am
Loved this chapter. They are so happy and in love. :)
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: December 23 2014 03:11 am
We needed that soft update. Hate is so strong it sometimes over shadows the good of the story. We need to remember the good, and the fact that, We are to love one another inspite of how they treat us. I know that is hard especially with all the violence being leveled towards our black men and boys today in the U.S. But we must live for the day when we will all be considered equal and I know that will only be in God's Eyes, but His are the only ones to matter!
Thank you again!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: December 22 2014 10:27 pm
Loving it and that was a nice way for them to bring in the New Year...Now back to our regularly scheduled program.
I can't wait to see the evil get their just deserves and the good get theirs.
Thank you for the update. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: December 22 2014 07:24 pm
Great update........................
Reviewer: Maria Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 22 2014 06:51 pm
Their getting closer and closer to getting the heck out of dodge
Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed [Report This]Date: December 22 2014 06:49 pm
This book just b getting better and better
Reviewer: nay nay Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 22 2014 05:29 pm
Nothing like shower sex!! Get it Camille and Hiram!! How much longer will they be in harms way as they now 2,000 dollars and whatever else they have saved? So good!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 22 2014 04:12 pm
WOW!!!!!!
WOW!!!!!!
Date: December 22 2014 03:26 pm
I would like to know who killed Hiram SR. I suspect the woman that he killed family but still would like to know dead on.
Love the story and Hiram, Camille and Savy are so perfect together.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: December 22 2014 02:57 pm
Sounds like a good second act to me.
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: December 18 2014 08:21 am
Yes Hiram deserves to have his name on his beautiful daughter's birth certificate and he deserves to have Camille as his wife. He is a strong man indeed to be able to go on with all the shit he's been through and his only crime was loving a woman his family or the Klan didn't approve of. He's twice the man his father was and he's not even thirty years old yet. Like the saying goes we unfornately don't get to choose what family we're born into but this story is making us believe we do have control over who are family will eventually be. I belive that none of the Whitfields want to see Hiram happy because they are so wrapped up in thier own hate the same goes for Camille with her realtionship with the Baxters. I really want to see this family survive the next couple of months because things will get ugly
Reviewer: A heart of gold Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 18 2014 02:18 am
Can't wait for an update.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 17 2014 01:02 pm
No, that just about covers all of my questions.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: December 16 2014 11:18 pm
I'm enjoying this story. It's all about rejection.
Well everyone has experienced some rejection from their families as well as others except the Baxters. If they loose their status in their circle because of being broke, their lifestyle will change and they may have to mix with a different group of people darker than them and a different neighborhood where the people remember them and their high mindedness. Debbie has experienced it somewhat from Hiram, but not the point it really hurts in her own circle. I wonder what would happen to her if the klans find out she is mixed or has been sleeping around with someone that is black or a Jew😱
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 16 2014 08:17 pm
Looking forward to Ddbbie getting her especially and the Klan too!! This story is so amazing and so arw you Marchpieces. I give this story two thumbs up!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 16 2014 01:06 pm