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Title: Secound Act

I like to see Camille biological mom and dad/family ends up needing her in someway.

 Reviewer: Shanee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2014 12:35 pm
Title: Secound Act

Looking forward to the second act. Thanks for sharing this story.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2014 04:15 am
Title: Chapter 25

Wow, interesting back story.

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Date: December 16 2014 04:14 am
Title: Secound Act

It will be cute when Savannah starts talking but her first word should probably be Daddy since she loves Hiram so much. Yes I want to know where the Kellers are because Lord knows Ruth is a cold grandmother even Douglas and Viola act as better grandparents. The mystery behind Savannahs features are just begging to be revealed. As For Hiram and Camille I can feel marriage in their future because they are made for each other and are healing each other. At this point Hiram deserve s to have his name on his daughters birth certificate since he's been through hell for her not a lot of men do that. Steven obviously admires and loves his uncle more than his father and deserves a loving family.  Yes Debbie needs to get hers she doesn't really love Hiram and she never has.

 Reviewer: Yeassss Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 15 2014 11:50 pm
Title: Secound Act

Bring it!!!

I'm all for Debbie getting her come-uppance.

And Stevie, I hope he able escape that viper of family. If Hiram can get him, Amen.

And the mystery behind Savvy looks, should be interesting. I'm sure its going to mess with some peoples minds.

As for the Baxters, I really would like to see them suffer for their ignorance.

 Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]
Date: December 15 2014 11:29 pm
Title: Secound Act

Great story!

I'm a faithful reader.

You cannot forget to check in with the great Reverend Douglas and Sister Viola and their family.

Looking forward to reading more.

 Reviewer: Bluegardenia Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 15 2014 10:19 pm
Title: Secound Act

Girl, you on it!!!!  ;~}

 Reviewer: SnowFever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 15 2014 04:13 pm
Title: Secound Act

All of that sounds great.  I really can't wait to see how you put it together.

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Date: December 15 2014 03:44 pm
Title: Secound Act

Looking forward to the next part. From your description, maybe one of Hiram's family members is passing. How funny if that turns out to be the case. As fair as the Baxters, they are despicable people, and I really hope they come back into Camille's life to see that she's way better without them and that they do need her for something. I want them to regret what they did. Also can't wait for Debbie to get hers. 

 Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 15 2014 02:44 pm
Title: Chapter 25

This was a powerful chapter ! Hopefully they can gather up enough money to get the heck out of there

 Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 15 2014 05:17 am
Title: Chapter 25

Debbie is psychotic and needs to be beaten to death! .. Kill that heifer no one would miss her. Hiram is more of a man than his father ever was! ! Team Hiram! !

 

 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 15 2014 03:12 am
Title: Chapter 25

The Baxter's are just like the Klan!!!! The Grand wizard Eugene & his wife are  just disgusting human being...

I hope Camille & Hiram will consider moving Savvy away from those ignorant losers....

 Reviewer: Ashley Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 15 2014 02:41 am
Title: Chapter 25

Can something good finally happen for them? Please?

 Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 15 2014 01:53 am
Title: Prologue

It's time for Debbie to make an exit stage right...dispatched to hellish hereafter in a painful way.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 15 2014 12:41 am
Title: Chapter 25

Your chapters always stir up a variety of emotions.
Well done.

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 14 2014 10:30 pm
Title: Prologue

I just wanted to say that I think it would be AWESOME if you did a sequel with Stevie.

 Reviewer: HAPPY! Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 14 2014 08:38 pm
Title: Chapter 25

I'm so happy that you returned to this story. The dialogue between Hiram and Camille is beautiful. Please keep it up!!

 Reviewer: HAPPY! Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 14 2014 08:36 pm
Title: Chapter 25

I am so glad that they finally told their stories to each other and right now their relationship will stand stronger forever no matter what problems come their way. You know, I wonder if Hiram is going to fight for custody over Steven because it does breaks my heart to know that Steven is being abused by his parents. Look, I know the difference between getting spankings and being abused and that right there is not a spanking at all. If Hiram does fight for Steven, then he will have a little sister/cousin...hmm. Oh Oh and then maybe there will be a story about Steven being with a woman like a hispanic or an asian woman. I mean that should cover the should cover the basis of the rainbow tribe of women in this story...idk. I am just getting ahead of myself.

Great chapter!

 Reviewer: luvrayne Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 14 2014 07:46 pm
Title: Chapter 25

So much pain. I really like to see them get a break.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 14 2014 06:55 pm
Title: Chapter 25

It's crazy how much I love this story!!!! I would love to see a semi-sequel involving little Stevie if that's possible. My heart wrenches for that little boy! So good. Please keep up the good work! 

 Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 14 2014 06:42 pm
Title: Chapter 25

So good!!! I'm glad you told Hiram' s back story.

 Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 14 2014 06:25 pm
Title: Chapter 24

Where are Priscilla parents? Why did they not claim Savannah? 



Author's Response:

Hi Carla I'll explain that later on. This was a flashback from Hiram so he does not know at least right now where the Kellers are.

 Reviewer: Carla Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 14 2014 05:30 pm
Title: Chapter 24

Update soon!

 Reviewer: waiting Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 13 2014 05:53 pm
Title: Chapter 24

Camille can make it without those backward people the Baxters. Sometimes your blood relatives are really not your real families.

Baxters will need somebody at some point, from someone who they least expect.

 Reviewer: relationship Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 13 2014 05:49 pm
Title: Chapter 24

Unfortunately there are a lot of Baxters in the world doing just what they are doing, rejecting family members because of their skin color. A lot of those rejected family members do well and some don't. Because Hiram and Camille are supportive of each other and have other people supporting them and believe in them they are going to make it. 

As for the Baxters, I think they are headed for their own destruction. If it is not her mother and father, it will be their children or the whole family. Dirt is dirt and begets dirt.

Your update was great

 

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 12 2014 06:54 am


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