Reviews For COLORLESS
Title: Prologue

Those Baxters...ugh. the live scenes were good.

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 12 2014 01:15 am

Title: Chapter 24

I loved reading this story. Here we have two people facing rejection from their parents and others in society. Through this rejection, they are finding love for one another, which is going to be a building block for their future and their daughter's future.

Little Savannah will learn from Hiram and Camille in her later years about the power of love and how love can meet challenges head on.

I can't wait for the updates to see how this family is going to face the challenges. 

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 10 2014 09:38 pm

Title: Chapter 24

This was amheartn breaking chapter. The rejection from your parents in front of others. The Baxters are mad heads. They really need a pay back day  those siblings really!

Please update soon!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 10 2014 07:20 am

Title: Chapter 24

Awesome!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 08 2014 02:02 pm

Title: Chapter 24

Hell yeah the baxters are going to need her some day.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 08 2014 06:42 am

Title: Chapter 24

It is definitely time for Camille and Hiram to experience some real good blessings. Hopefully as time pass, Camille can become the doctor she desires and Hiram a CEO of a chain of auto garages or something.

As for the Baxters, hopefully they will need a doctor for a specific need only  Camille services can provide.nwant that be a turn around?

The Baxters have rejected Camille because of her color. You know, "You reap what you sow." Well, it  is now high time the Baxters reap rejection big time. They think the are accepted in society because they are high yellow😝 SOCIETY can play some dirty tricks on you, and it is not always about the color of your skin. Let them go broke and see what happens. I am sure there are some people in their town that are of the same color but are not accepted because they are poor!

Let's turn the table around for the Baxters!!!!

Reviewer: Is it all about the color of your skin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 07 2014 11:45 pm

Title: Chapter 24

Awwww poor Camille, She didnt need them anyways ! Im not ready for the bad to bein lol

Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 07 2014 09:57 pm

Title: Chapter 24

Her family is trifling, sad, low down ridiculous.  I honestly can't blame the kids so much because hell look at the mother and father of them.  I think the best thing for Camille was being put up for adoption because if she would have lived with them, they would have made her miserable every day of her life and she wouldn't be the Camille we love now.  Everybody is in our life for a purpose, we just need to figure out what it is God is trying to teach us.  That isn't always easy but it is a necessity.  The best comeuppance for her family is to realize, no matter how "light" you are, you are still a black person in America.  Now there are many ways that can be shed onto this family from being addressed as the N word or being harrassed but they need a wake up call.  But Camille and Hiram, love it.  Now the question becomes what the hell are those witches up to now in Hiram's family.  Oh, would love if Hiram was awarded custody of his nephew.  People never have a mind of their own these days.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2014 04:05 am

Title: Chapter 24

the flashback was rather painful to read. how her birth parents could be so cold towards her was heart breaking.

Reviewer: anomy Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 07 2014 03:33 am

Title: Chapter 24

Wow!  That was really deep. I can't believe her biological family, but sadly, ppl used to think that way and still do to this day. I'm glad Camielle have ppl in her life who truly love her for who she is. All thins happen for a reason. As hurtful as it was for her, it helped bring her, Savannah, and Hiram together. 💖

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 11:31 pm

Title: Chapter 24

Another great and emotional chapter. I hope they can both heal each other one day.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 07:41 pm

Title: Chapter 24

The sad part is there really are people like the Baxters out in the world. 

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 05:34 am

Title: Chapter 24

Loving this story so far! Hope all works out for them.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 04:18 am

Title: Prologue

The Baxters needs to fall on hard times and need  Camille & Hiram ( after they win the lottery or a rich relative hooks them up) to bail them out. Their A$$%# need to suffer. I just saying. Love Hiram and Camille!!!

Reviewer: zetacrave Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 02:21 am

Title: Chapter 24

it sucks that camille's biological family thinks the way they do but she was lucky enough to get adopted into a loving family and found somone who loves her regardless of her skin color. great chapter!

Reviewer: sandradee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 12:27 am

Title: Chapter 24

The Baxters' still haven't learned a darn thing. They preach a form of self hatred. There no better than the Klan.

Bless the Johnson, Hiram and Savvy for being Camille's family.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 12:00 am

Title: Chapter 24

And the Racial tension between dark skinned blacks and light skinned blacks is still going on today. We don't need the KKK, we have people like the Baxter's!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2014 11:39 pm

Title: Chapter 24

what a wonderful chapter...hurtful and heartwarming at the same time.  Great Job

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2014 08:15 pm

Title: Chapter 24

My heart is heavy. I just whew I just can't. And here's me wishing my two was a little darker. But still can't inmagine giving a child away because of color. Really. Yeah Baxtors. Yall will need her way before she needs you. It would be funny if one of the grandchildren got sick and Camille was the nurse. 

Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 05 2014 08:08 pm

Title: Chapter 24

The Baxters are rotten to the core. I hope nothing but bad befalls on that family. Camille is better off without them but after all Camille and Hiram have gone through, can they hit the lottery or something or inherit lots of money and do good for the commuity while the Baxters crash and burn? I think it's only fair to allow Camille to see their downfall and knowing the Baxters, they will probably never be ask for forgiveness but I'd like them to regret what they did to her. Uhh, they make me so mad!!

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2014 07:23 pm

Title: Chapter 24

Do I care if the Baxters need Cam in future, nope. Actually, if she never sees them again it will be good for her, imo. People like that will get theirs, Cam's best revenge is to live well and love well. Her true family is Savvy, Hiram and the Jacksons. Can you imagine what kind of damage would've been done to Cam's soul if she had been left in that viper's nest. She's blessed. So, no, let them Baxters get their just desserts, but let Cam be far away from those "good" people.

Savvy's skin color would fit with the Baxters, yet she would be ridiculed if not killed because of it in Hiram's family. I find that quite ironic. That should let Cam know that skin color is not the real issue, both sets of families have deep seated problems and no amount of kumbaya will solve. She needs to take a lesson from what Savvy being in her life is trying to teach her.

I love the way you're telling this story, Chica. Good job.

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2014 06:00 pm

Title: Chapter 24

I had to say something,  medical school comes after 4 years of college after she takes the MCAT. Nurses don't go to medical school either. Did Camille want to be doctor when she was younger?



Author's Response:

A little embarrassed I actually did not know that and yes Camille always wanted to go into the medical field.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2014 05:26 pm

Title: Chapter 24

Great update love how Camille & Harim are connecting & becoming like a real family with lil Savvy. I love how he keeps telling her how beautiful she is. Finally she told him about the Baxsters & How they rejected her twice as a baby & then at 18; That left her scarred. Karma has a way of making some people humble thankful & great. I would like to see them reenter her life because they desperately need her & how she handles them

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 05 2014 04:44 pm

Title: Chapter 24

I really hope that if the Baxters come to Camille because they need her help, that she will show them the door just like they did to her. If it wasn't because they need her help, the wouldn't have contacted her. I know that Camille is sweet and that she has a good her. But please, don't make her tooo naive or too nice and that she will end up helping them. Let Camille ignore them and kick them out of her life if they come back. Like seriously she is not a saint. Nor does she have to act like a desperate girl who still wants her parents to love her. Her foster parents opened their door for her and gave her all the love they could. Since she was to dark to be the Baxters daughter, then show them that she is to dark to to help them too. 

Reviewer: Msroos Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05 2014 03:29 pm

Title: Chapter 24

That was soooo sad and it pissed me offf really really bad that a stuck up bit*h could say lead alone tell their child that....I hope that they get theirs and I can read about it.....I know that this is vengeful but how could they have done their own child like that and kiss and suck up to another.  That whole family of baxters is f**ked.  I hope that grandbaby change colors to look like Camille just to see what they'd do.

Reviewer: kimyso Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2014 02:54 pm



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