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Title: Chapter 22

this was such a precious chapter ! I loved it ! :)

 Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28 2014 09:51 pm
Title: Prologue

They're the sweetest I'm obsessed with them! I can't wait to see what happens next!

 Reviewer: brookedoe Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2014 07:17 pm
Title: Prologue

They're the sweetest I'm obsessed with them! I can't wait to see what happens next!

 Reviewer: brookedoe Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2014 07:17 pm
Title: Chapter 22

Wonderful update.

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Date: November 28 2014 12:34 pm
Title: Chapter 22

That was beautiful!  Keep up the good work

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Date: November 28 2014 06:11 am
Title: Chapter 22

Thanks for the update. Thank you for responding to your readers.

Can't wait for the rest of the chapters.

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Date: November 28 2014 05:47 am
Title: Prologue

Very well done loved how you wrote this for her to grow up knowing and learning about her Jewish part of herself although her birth mom is not alive to share that glad Harim & Camille have found someone that can help them with that part.

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Date: November 28 2014 01:47 am
Title: Chapter 22

Awwwww sweet :-) !

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Date: November 28 2014 12:40 am
Title: Prologue

I'm truly enjoying your writing.  I'm hooked.  I am impressed with the racial aspect of your story-- a very different perspective.

 Reviewer: Elizabeth Griffin Signed [Report This]
Date: November 27 2014 11:53 pm
Title: Chapter 22

Great update.

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Date: November 27 2014 08:54 pm
Title: Chapter 22

I love this story. I feel the love in each chapter. I thank you for writing such a wonderful and powerful story!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 27 2014 07:38 pm
Title: Chapter 22

I just love Savannah, she is just a sweetheart.  She will grow up knowing love and that will offset thehate oozing from Hiram's family.  Happy Thanksgiving! !

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2014 06:54 pm
Title: Chapter 21

Let's get these crazy klans out of Hiram's, Camille's and Savannah's life so they can build their lives together.

 Reviewer: together Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 27 2014 03:34 pm
Title: Chapter 21

I'm thinking at least one person knows about that cabin.  It's hard to believe that no one knows about it. 

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 27 2014 01:46 am
Title: Chapter 21

I'm thinking at least one person knows about that cabin.  It's hard to believe that no one knows about it. 

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 27 2014 01:46 am
Title: Chapter 21

Don't they realize they should "never poke a sleeping bear?" Hiram will attack them just like a bear if the keep trying to hurt Camilla and Savannah!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 27 2014 12:14 am
Title: Chapter 21

Hiram is a good man for Camille and they deserve happiness and good break at life.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 26 2014 01:59 pm
Title: Chapter 21

Those Henderson biddies are too much. If they knew where Cam and Hiram lived, the whole damn town would know in a flash. Do they not have anything else to occupy their time? I hate nosey azzed people.

That Debbie doesn't know when to stop. I think there's a clinical diagnosis that exists for that twat.

Great update, Chica.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 26 2014 01:55 am
Title: Chapter 21

They better get to thinking quickly before the klan finds them 

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Date: November 26 2014 12:43 am
Title: Chapter 21

This was a nice chapter.  I love how the church is helping them. Now Debbie she just needs to go away.

 Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 25 2014 11:54 pm
Title: Chapter 21

I haven't written a review yet, but I wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying this story and waiting for the next update.

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Date: November 25 2014 11:52 pm
Title: Chapter 21

I'll never understand why folks always chasing someone who clearly does not want to be with them.  SMDH

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Date: November 25 2014 08:42 pm
Title: Chapter 21

I haven't written a review yet, but I wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying this story and waiting for the next update.

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Date: November 25 2014 08:02 pm
Title: Chapter 21

My body wants to be in this book and become assassin creed to kick their a$$!!!

 Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2014 07:54 pm
Title: Chapter 21

Can't believe how Much Debbie is thirsting after Hiram!  Dag, she just needs to move on.



Author's Response:

Debbie was very spoiled growing up so mentally she's still that whiny little girl who's used to getting what she wants.

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2014 05:37 pm


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