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Title: Chapter 20

Great I'm so glad they moved & noone knows where they live. Now all they have to do is fix the place up more which he knows how & is more than capable of doing. So glad she's giving into her feelings for him & I'm glad he caught her because it gave him the opportunity to let her know that he is attracted to her & he saw her beautiful.

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 20 2014 01:21 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Team Hiram!!  Hiram is just who Camille needs, his loving whom he loves shows his complete growth as an human being.  I take it that is Hiram's human incubator and his late donor's Klan peeps don't know where this hunting cabin is?  I love this little family!!!  As forCamille, I believe loving Hiram will teach her to love herself.  Awesome sauce!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2014 12:16 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Wonderful update. Glad to see Hiram putting the moves on Camille.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2014 12:04 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Hiram liked what he saw and Camille has to accept that!  Can't wait for more!

 

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 20 2014 09:19 am

Title: Chapter 20

sweet

Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 20 2014 07:15 am

Title: Chapter 19

That was said but I'm so glad that he took that hypocrite off his underserved pedestal and put his mother and sisters in their deserved places.....I knew that it had to be that ole Sr was getting some chocolate.   Hurry up and bring some more cos i just can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: kimyso Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2014 07:27 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Okay! Although Hiram, Camille and Savannah have experienced prejudice from the klans (expected), let's look at Camille's parents. Prejudice!!!!!!!!!   Prejudice within own family because you are too dark, whoa!!!! I'm sure a lot of us know about that!!!!

i surely hope you will bring Camille back into their lives as a successful doctor needed to save one or both of their lives not knowin who she is until after the life saving experience.

Her parents needs to be in the story later, surprised at what the missed out on not being in Camille's life.

And let's bring some great fortune to Hiram!

 

Reviewer: Prejudice Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 19 2014 01:04 pm

Title: Chapter 19

It is time for some unidentifiable thugs to get hold of Randal and Garrett in the woods for a beat down.

i would be some funny if Hiram's mom found out some black blood was in her genes😳

Well Miss Debbie needs a reality check as well. It would serve her right if the kkk found out she has been sneaking around with a black man.

 

Reviewer: WOW!!! Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 19 2014 12:19 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Wow, that got a little intense for a minute or two...I am glad Hiram showed up when he did or it would have really gotten ugly!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 19 2014 12:14 am

Title: Chapter 19

Oh snap crackle pop

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2014 01:25 pm

Title: Chapter 19

I really enjoy reading your story, please keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2014 10:39 am

Title: Chapter 19

Wow, very powerful  chapter. Am glad they are going to  move.

Thank you for writing this  story, it's  beautiful.

Reviewer: Amaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2014 09:24 am

Title: Chapter 19

What an ugly family. I glad Camille and Savannah are safe.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2014 07:41 am

Title: Chapter 19

Racism, prejudism & hate are such ugly things. What a hypocrit those brothers were just like his dad they would use her for sex but acted like she was distasteful because of her skin color & an innocent child no one but someone without a conscious could hurt an innocent child. What does he have up his sleeve, what contacts have he made that he has the perfect place for them to go. Great update can't wait til read more

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 18 2014 06:31 am

Title: Chapter 19

i wonder where hiram wants them to move so they will be safe. great story!

Reviewer: sandradee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2014 06:26 am

Title: Chapter 19

OMG !! That was too damn close, I was so afraid Hiram's nightmare was coming true. I love how he beat the shit out of those perverts and cursed out his sorry ass family. I agree with him, moving far away is the best way to protect his family, they deserve to have a safe and happy life together. I hope they get it and that dangerous, hateful group will be put in prison for their crimes. 

 

Great update, please post again soon :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 18 2014 05:27 am

Title: Chapter 19

Yaaaaaaaas! Finally moving ! Thank god none of them were seriously hurt . Great job :)

Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2014 05:06 am

Title: Chapter 19

My heart fluttered when those two monsters barged into the house. Especially when he man handled the baby like that. But relief washed over me when Hiram came in even though I thought he would be more enraged at the damage done to Camille and especially Savannah. Hope their relationship continues to build. He should not waste his time with that family of his. Please continue to update. 

Reviewer: Cju Signed [Report This]
Date: November 18 2014 04:41 am

Title: Prologue

I was so scared for Savannah and Camille. Thank the lord for Hiram telling of his crazy ass family too. Love this story so much. I'm addicted.

Reviewer: brookedoe Signed [Report This]
Date: November 18 2014 04:24 am

Title: Chapter 19

He confronted his crazy ass momma, i don't know if that was a good idea?  I loved that Camille asked  Hiram to sleep with her so he could hold her. Camille is coming along with her feelings.  I love this story!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2014 02:51 am

Title: Chapter 18

This story is perfect, I absolutely love everything about. Please continue to write these great chapters

Reviewer: Carriekiara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2014 10:43 pm

Title: Chapter 18

That was a great chapter. Heart breaking but a really good back story. 

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2014 07:21 am

Title: Chapter 18

Very sad, but good update! Can't wait until this is revealed to Camille. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2014 07:39 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Can we get some Camile and Hiram romance? The story is great, but I am waiting for their romance...

Reviewer: Pen to Paper Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2014 04:33 pm

Title: Chapter 18

His father was a souless hypocrite. Its amazing what people will do to keep their skeletons hidden. Then the way he treated him before he died, just wrong. Glad he's his own man.

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 16 2014 01:41 pm



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