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Title: Chapter 12

Here it comes. I wish they go on and move out of this hateful town.

 Reviewer: jackson1973 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 27 2014 07:48 pm
Title: Prologue

To Guest Anon: Hidden Agenda? Really? If you don't like the author's story then kindly pass on it. It's a work of fiction. Key word, fiction. The writer can do, write, and say whatever she pleases in her own story. Your negativity is distasteful. I apologize to you March but i just had to say something. Anon's comments are out of line. 

 Reviewer: noni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 27 2014 07:40 pm
Title: Chapter 12

Ahhhhhh! And the crap begins. Love the story keep up the good work.

 Reviewer: luvrayne Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2014 06:46 pm
Title: Chapter 12

I knew it!! 

 Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2014 06:12 pm
Title: Chapter 12

uh oh, it's about to hit the fan!

 Reviewer: Cindi47 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2014 06:05 pm
Title: Chapter 12

Hiram and Camille are so sweet together, and Savannah is just the icing on the cake.

 Debbie you Ho, go away, Hiram doesn't want a woman that would give him an STD if she Breathed on him. Whatever this tramp plans will backfire.

 Reviewer: liberty lady Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2014 05:42 pm
Title: Chapter 12

Awww, darnit, ish about to hit the fan.  This bish can't accept the word no.  So freakin' self-entitled.  Debbie you do not have the personality or anything that Hiram wants in his woman.  Camille is kind, caring, compassionate, a good mother in Hiram's eyes and when he finds out she is a virgin.  That he would be the only one to touch and feel the vajayjay!!! Bish you REALLY don't have a chance.  I hope Camille and Hiram can stand the heat that is about to be thrown at them.  Camille is so innocent when it comes to men and it is ashamed that her own race has made her feel vulnerable and unbeautiful for being a dark complexioned beauty, when she should have been uplifted for these same traits.  So much more to find out about these two.   Their journey will be interesting. 

 Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2014 04:44 pm
Title: Chapter 12

Oh dear!

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2014 04:06 pm
Title: Chapter 12

Oh damn ! Shits about to go down ! 

 Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2014 03:58 pm
Title: Chapter 12

Ugh, Debbie.

 Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2014 03:39 pm
Title: Chapter 12

Ridiculous. I don't think it's realistic for people of ALL races to be so obsessed with color like this. As far as racists Whites are concerned, I don't think it matters if the Blacks are 'light' or 'dark.' They hate them all equally. I don't know what to think about this story. Honestly, it's borderline offensive the way you're trying to put such color-stuck twists on everything. I'm starting to wonder if you have a hidden agenda, especially since there are already too many stories on this site about people with color-insecurities.

 Reviewer: Guest Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 27 2014 03:06 pm
Title: Chapter 11

Oooh, I so want to pimp slap Camille's parents right now, the nerve of those two. Did they forget that they are just a lighter version of a beautiful darker orgin. I guess they never heard of recessive and doiminant genes either. People like this promote self-hate. Enough of my ranting, loved the chapter. I am truly enjoying your story. I hope this couple is able to make it; they have a lot stacked up against them.

 

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 27 2014 04:43 am
Title: Supporting Cast 1

Great cast they fit perfectly<3

 Reviewer: brookedoe Signed [Report This]
Date: October 27 2014 04:29 am
Title: Supporting Cast 1

Great choice of characters for your cast!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 27 2014 12:51 am
Title: Supporting Cast 1

I could definitely see this story as a Lifetime movie. Thumbs up!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2014 09:32 pm
Title: Chapter 11

Wow. Stunning. The only diff I see between the hate in Camille's "family" and the hate in Hiram's is that Hiram's will kill the body, Camille's will kill the soul.

Hiram and Camille have a lot in common.

I love their little family of 3. And Savvy is too cute. She wuvs her daddy.

Chica, I'm enjoying this story, even though it's hard to read at times. As lots of blacks from the South, we all have been touched by the Klan's terrorism in one form or another. And none so much as in Mississippi. Well done, Chica. Bringing back painful memories, but it's something that we should never forget, lest we allow it to happen again. Well done.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2014 07:07 pm
Title: Supporting Cast 1

Wonderful job on the cast. 

 Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 26 2014 06:18 pm
Title: Chapter 11

Damn crazy ass people smh

 Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2014 05:21 pm
Title: Prologue

This is a lovely story that had me reading all thirteen chapters in one sitting.

Well done.

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 26 2014 11:13 am
Title: Chapter 11

Her parents are just wrong for that.

 Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2014 07:58 am
Title: Chapter 11

Skin tone preference is alive & thriving in the African American culture… Camille parents should live the rest of their life in complete Shame!!!!

Hatred is taught!!! Taking a child to a Klan meeting should be a crime; psychological child abuse.

Camille & Hiram should consider raising Savannah in an environment with fewer narrow minded, self righteous, ignorant people...The seeds of hatred are deeply rooted in that town…SMH

 

Love the story….

 Reviewer: Adriana Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 26 2014 07:09 am
Title: Chapter 10

That Elaine was something else. If she was truly concerned about Camille then she would've delivered the message not quite so nastily or publicly. I'm glad that Hiram reassured Camille not that someone out to take advantage of another would freely admit it. 

 Reviewer: JFJD Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2014 06:33 am
Title: Chapter 11

Thanks for the update. This us a great story so far.

Ok I so wanna SLAP Camille's sperm and egg donors, they are nothing but color struck, I wonder if their other children know about Camille and how they discarded her like trash, I hope they are miserable.

Looking forward to more.

 Reviewer: liberty lady Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 26 2014 03:02 am
Title: Chapter 11

Wow! Great update! How sad that the Baxter's treated Camille like that!! Wonder if they even think about her at all?.... Glad that she's made something of her life despite such sad beginnings!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2014 02:23 am
Title: Chapter 11

I hate to say this but Camille was bless to not grow up with the Baxters. How they can disowned their own child is beyond me. This is a form of self hate.

As for Hiram, sickness just runs in that family.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2014 01:02 am


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