Indigirl, Hiram and Priscilla weren't married.  Just he's grieving doesn't mean that he can't notice how attractive Camille is.

 love your story, love Camille, love Hiram and love love Savannah.

i really enjoy reading the times when savannah is together with her mommy and daddy.

i actually read those sunny parts as slowly as a toddler, to make it last :)

Your plot is so good, and your writing so vivid, hey have you thought of printing your story? with a little tweaks here and there i think it would be good enough to publish :)

but i personally think that Hiram mourns Priscilla a teeny bit less than a loving husband like him would have....

i mean Hiram knew about his wife's death on june 25th and on july 16th, he is attracted to Camille. Now i understand that camille is adorable, we all love her, but to loving husband who just recently found out about his wife's death....is it possible for him to get attracted to another lady so soon?

i am sure i don't want Priscilla to come in between camille and hiram, but...

if hiram knew about his wife's death while he was in prison, he would have 6 months to know and come to terms with his wife's death. then when he would meet camille on 16th june, his attraction would be much more...sensible?

i would love to know how you feel about this... :)

hope i am not intervening, this is your story, and you are doing great! :)

all i can say is thankyou

:)

Sooooo good!!! Sooo sweet. Please keep these updates coming. I'm enjoying the slow build between Hiram and Camille! 

So if the whole town is so racist how are they doing to be able to go out in public without someone messing with them?

So sweet.  Hiram trying to be a good responsible daddy!  I hope Debbie falls in a ditch.

I like how Hiram is trying to do better for his daughter.  Debbie, Mr. Hamilton, his mom, and all of his dad's cronies are going to be a problem.

woo not woe

Raspberry, not blueberry.

lose not loose

other than that, great story.

I loved that chapter. There is something amazing about a man loving svc casting for his child that always makes me smile. Hiram and Savannah made me smile smile. Camile needs to be informed about what's going on with Debbie and the kluelss klan doo she can be prepared for whatever chimes her and the baby's way. And she needs to tell Hiram Scott her plan to move. They need to have a serious conversation about everything with the social worker and a judge. Usually, a judge is the one that decides about custodial issues and social workers do visits and follow-ups. Great story. May I inquire as to why it is set in the 90s? Update soon.

He's so sweet. Great update

So adorable! I love the father/daughter time they have together. They both really love each other and he is so amazing to his baby. I can't wait for them to have more time together, I hope Camille will be apart of the time together as well. 

I really want them to be a whole family, they seem to love Savannah so much. They make a perfect team. 

Great job, please keep going and post again soon. I can't get enough!! :D

Poor Hiriam,  I see so much trouble coming his way.  Now some new thot is coming into the picture who will try twice as hard to get with him especially because she fet rejected before when he wanted to date a Jew but now a dark black chick.  Oh hell nawl, she is going to throw the biggest bitchfest ever.   We always think about how minorities can't get away from their pasts in trying to make a new start, this is a different view.  He can't seem to get away from Klan to make a new beginning that doesn't include hate.  I felt it was very key how the nephew wanted to take his son to a klan rally.  I always believed hate, prejudices etc is a learned behavior, we are not born with hate in our hearts. 

This is an insightful story, it makes u imagine and actually feel like you are there observing the interaction between Camille, Savannah and Hiram.  I hope they make the year and become a real family because they need each other.  Do anyone believe that this story is true for someone out there in this world........I DO!!!!  Will some of those hipocrates change their thinking about Camille and Hiram because I can remember hearing from older people in their true stories that they may get behind their white sheets but secretly they want to be us with our big lips and lusious a**** not to mention they just want US!!!  Honestly I don't get it cause every race has some black in them.

Awesome ! I was waiting to see how they interact while parenting savannah together