Loved the update! Can't wait to see what happens at this meeting.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed
[Report This]Date: October 10 2014 05:09 am
Oh Okay! That's for the spoiler (which I love by the way. Lol!!) makes sense and this story just got even better now. I can't wait to see how everything plays out. Please post again soon. I really like this story and that's for answering me too.
Great job and keep going :)
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: October 10 2014 03:37 am
Hiriam worked fast to locate his daughter and I like that. He will be a surprise for Camille and I hope a pleasant one. I love the name Sanvannah Marie. Keep the goodness coming!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 10 2014 12:38 am
Interesting
Reviewer: jackson1973 Signed
[Report This]Date: October 09 2014 10:47 pm
This is getting good.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 10:45 pm
Can't wait to read Hiram reaction to see the baby and her adopted mother.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 09 2014 09:08 pm
Looking forward to future updates.
Reviewer: Karmal Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 08:00 pm
interesting! Looking forward to seeing where you take this.
Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 09 2014 07:58 pm
Well I'm looking forward to this story. I hope you update daily:)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 05:10 pm
I like it. This is different than other stories on this wonderful site.
Pictures please, I'm curious as to who you would choose to fill these roles.
But if I had to choose I could definitely see Camille Winbush as your leading lady.
Dougie Poynter as your leading man and Bo Derek as the mom.
Just a thought. :)
Author's Response:
I was actually going to use your suggestions. However I was wondering if you had any idea how to get these pictures up
I'm having trouble and I'm pretty sure everyone wants to see the cast if you can offer any help it will be greatly
apperciated. Thanks
Reviewer: jlly16 Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 04:25 pm
Daaaamn ! This is crazy ! Seems good ! :)
Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 04:22 pm
Daaaamn ! This is crazy ! Seems good ! :)
Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 04:22 pm
I knew that you were going to make it like the real-life case of the South African woman that looks 'bi-racial' although her parents look 'white.' It also reminds me of an episode of a talk-show when a 'white' racist finds out that he has 'black' ancestry, and his wife and family no longer accept him (I think he killed himself afterwards, since, apparently, he was a klansman who'd killed others for being black). I don't ordinarily like stories that deal with 'colorism' because I HATE the topic, and I find that way of thinking to be infuriatingly ignorant and ridiculous. But maybe I'll give this one a chance!
Reviewer: Guest Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 03:59 pm
Love it keep going this can be really good.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 03:23 pm
It reads like they're in the 40's not 90's. With the exception of the "reallys"
Reviewer: SunnySideDown Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 02:52 pm
Evil, is what comes to mind when i think of Hiriam's family. His mother Ruth was a complete bitch! I hope that finds his baby and falls in love with Camille. So good!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: October 09 2014 01:21 pm
Deeply moving and indepth character building. Supreb writing.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 10:16 am
How can 2 Caucasians make a biracial baby?
Reviewer: Trulyme35 Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 08:51 am
Damn!!! How messed is that for a mother to be so heartlesss about another mother dying, giving birth to her first grandchild.. Wow! SMH, I feel for Hiram and I hope he finds his baby soon. Hmm, though I am wondering since Priscilla and Hiram are white, how is the baby biracial? Or is that his baby?
Please post again soon, can't wait to get more :)
Author's Response:
Hi thanks for reading I feel terrible for giving you a spoiler so early but I feel it's necessary. Yes Hiram and Priscilla are
white however I was making thier baby would be what you call a throwback child. This means that either on Hiram or
Priscilla's side they have at least ancestor that was African American or at least to some degree. It skips a couple of
generations if you want to read more about it you can check out the real life story of Sandra Laing. As for whose
ancestor it was I haven't decided yet though it would be ironic if it were from Hiram's side of the family I'm leaning more
towards Priscilla's. Please stay tuned.
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 08:40 am
Great start! I'm looking forward to reading more! Thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: Annienathanson Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 08:03 am
Wow, this story sounds like it will be an interesting story! Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 06:22 am
Wonderful beginning, I'm looking forward to the update.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 06:08 am
Me likey!! Please continue.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 05:43 am
So you started with the very end chapter for the first chapter or did you mean prologue? It's a great start but I'm not sure of the direction of the story.
Please post again soon :D
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 05:25 am
OK. That was short. I'm interested in seeing where this goes.
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2014 05:18 am