Reviews For Choosey Lover
Title: Chapter 13

She needs jus simply apologize, and talk to him honestly about how she feels. 



Author's Response:

Definitely and it needs to happen sooner than later. Thanks for reading and reviewing Musicluva.

CG

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2014 12:09 am

Title: Chapter 13

Tracie is a BITCH! But on a good note maybe Elle will finally use her words.

Author's Response:

With her just randomly showing up again, she better use more than just her words lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing shellyme.

CG

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: December 12 2014 12:06 am

Title: Chapter 13

Why can't Elle  just apologize to Dean for a bitch? He doesn't deserve be treated like she is treating him. Lord, help her ti grow the hell up! ! Please tell me that she is there to apologize as well as admit to her fellin b s for Dean?  Awesome!!



Author's Response:

I’m agree, she definitely needs to be more mature about the whole situation. Hopefully, you’ll like what I have planned for next chapter. Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing pmgayles.

CG

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2014 11:34 pm

Title: Chapter 13

She's got to do some major damage control!! Lol!!



Author's Response:

Oh believe me, she definitely does. Thanks for reading and reviewing Khamalani.

CG

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2014 10:51 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Elle, smdh. How old is she, twelve? I wouldn't blame Dean if he wants to run as fast as possible AWAY. Poor guy. Attracted to a numbskull.



Author's Response:

She definitely dialed back on responsibility age wise in this chapter.  This was another test for Dean about how much he’s willing to take for simply liking her. Whether he feels it’s worth it or not will be brought up next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing BellaChica.

CG

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2014 09:10 am

Title: Chapter 12

:)   that was good and Elle' s costume was hot!!



Author's Response:

Thanks and I’m definitely a fan of that catsuit too. Thanks again for reading and reviewing Michmom2!

CG

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 09 2014 06:50 am

Title: Chapter 12

LMAO!!!! No this heifer didn't get drunk and high off her ass, go to Dean's house, lower herself (and him) with that stupid proposition in said state, then proceed to pass out??? She is going to feel like a damn fool in the morning!!! And Dean should be rightly pissed! Is it really that hard to muster up an apology for the guy?


And yes, Tracie is scum at the moment! Really, in this day and age of random psychopaths, who does that anymore?


Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

She’ll definitely feel the gravity of all her decisions in the morning. Believe me. Tracie’s actions won’t go unnoticed either. The next chapter is almost finished, so you won’t have to wait long. Thanks for reading and reviewing flikchick.

CG

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2014 03:07 am

Title: Chapter 12

Well well, what a friend Tracie is. Like seriously I would never let  my DRUNK friend go home alone like that for a one night stand. What the hell is that. How desperate was she for sex. They could have gone home with Elle, make sure she got there save and after that continue to go to a hotel or where ever they were planning to go to do the nasty. But to just let her go alone like that was not cool at all. Not really liking Tracie at the moment. 



Author's Response:

You make a good point. Best believe her lack of judgment will definitely be discussed next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing grazylisa.

CG

Reviewer: grazylisa Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09 2014 01:29 am

Title: Chapter 12

Lol, happy birthday to Dean, so glad that he's a gentleman and didn't take advantage of a drunk Elle. But knowing her, she will run again instead of just getting everything out on the table. Can't wait to find out who Josie is.

Oh not fond of Tracie now, never leave your drunk girlfriend for a one night stand.



Author's Response:

He has a knack for doing the right thing unlike Elle lol.  Yeah, Tracie definitely was wrong for that.  That and Josie’s ties to Dean will be discussed in the next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing liberty lady.

CG

Reviewer: liberty lady Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09 2014 12:12 am

Title: Chapter 12

Ok, I'm like TF? Really? I don't even know where to begin with her. Elle is a little CRAY CRAY. But it is too funny though.

Author's Response:

She’s definitely going off the deep end in this chapter and showing her ass in the process lol. Glad you’re entertained. Thanks for reading and reviewing shellyme.

CG

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2014 08:43 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Elle just can't get it right. Why oh why must we always assume we know things? Great update. 



Author's Response:

She really can’t. I guess sometimes it’s easier to assume things when you’re too afraid to find out the truth.  Thanks for reading and reviewing CrimsonBlaze.

CG

Reviewer: CrimsonBlaze Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2014 07:10 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Elle, Elle, Elle, Elle.  What more is there to say.  It has been two freakin' weeks and you still haven't talked to Dean but want to stalk his house like he stole you momma's wedding dress.   What do you expect?  You weren't official in the first place so he can do what he damn well please.  Second, you still haven't apologized for the bitchy behavior you have displayed years ago and even more recently.  C'mon now.  You are a professional, an executive, bring it baby.  It is time to transfer some of them balls you have at work to your personal life.  Call the man, set up a date b/c he is foine and if you don't obviously as you don't understand the whole story, someone one will realize he is a catch.  You betta move it, move it.  You betta move it, move it.  You betta move it, move it.  You betta MOVE YOUR ASS!!  Out here trying to play Nancy Drew.  Shame, shame on you.



Author's Response:

By all means, read her. It’s necessary.  Elle definitely needs to assert her career savviness into her love life before she loses her chance at companionship. Thanks for reading, reviewing and going off on Ms. Foster.

SN: Was that a Dreamgirls reference? Cause if so, I’m here for it.

CG

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 07 2014 03:58 am

Title: Chapter 11

Wow, very unexpected. I identify with Elle and man do I feel sorry for her. 



Author's Response:

I always appreciate your ability to side with Elle. Thanks so much for reading and your refreshing reviews HumorMe.

CG

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 05:40 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Stalkin'? Really Elle? Too funny. Elle continues to make me want to smack her. Let's see if she'll talk to Dean like an adult, or will she jump to conclusions and react on limited info.  Who am I kidding, this is Elle we're dealing with.

Her friends are a trip.



Author's Response:

Yeah, she’s definitely doing the most. Now whether she goes about the situation normally in the next chapter is totally up to her. But you know it’s never that easy with her. Yes, Tracie and Gretchen as a combined force are a hot mess. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing BellaChica.

CG

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 09:24 am

Title: Chapter 11

LOL....Elle is a stalking idiot now? Just go and apologize!



Author's Response:

I agree, but you know she’s hard headed lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing flikchick.

CG

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 04:44 am

Title: Chapter 11

Shanking head,  so wanna Slap Elle until my hand hurts. This is what happens when u let your girls get u all worked up without the facts. If Elle had put on her Big Girl Panties and knocked on Dean's door, she might have met Josie, who I assume is Dean's sister.

Please write Elle with a spine next chapter. Lol.

 Oh I hope my rants don't have u thinking I don't like thus story b/c I do my getting passionate about the characters means ur doing a Great job writing. Lol



Author's Response:

Elle is definitely easily persuaded, which is doing her more harm than good. Btw, Dean’s an only child. No worries.  I sense your frustrations are directed at Elle, so all is well.  Thanks again for reading and reviewing liberty lady.

SN: Elle with a snipe though? I can’t!

CG

Reviewer: liberty lady Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 02:35 am

Title: Chapter 11

Haha, she's jealous. Good update.



Author's Response:

Yep, good and green with envy! Thanks for reading and reviewing Michmom2.

CG

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 02:30 am

Title: Chapter 11

Love the story when I first started reading it. I have to say it's moving kinda slow and not as interesting as when it first started.

Reviewer: Black girl Anonymous starstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 01:35 am

Title: Chapter 11

So I'm guessing niece or ssomething like that.



Author's Response:

*In my creepy Brittany Murphy voice* I’ll never tell…(lol). Thanks for reading and reviewing Khamalani.

CG

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2014 10:52 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Who is Josie? If After treating Dean like a bald headed, step child with bad teeth, she can't be jealous. More please! !



Author's Response:

When I read this review it had me cackling while I was in a room full of people.  You’re a trip. Josie’s identity will be revealed soon enough.  As always, thanks for reading and your entertaining reviews pmgayles

CG

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2014 09:52 pm

Title: Chapter 10

I just wanted to say, i absolutely adore this story, i love the pairing too! (I am utterly inlove with Aaron Johnson Taylor) would love to see more stories featuring him. Anyway, i love the dialouge, the humour, the casting, i love how you give us a visual to go along with the narrative, (more visuals of Aaron needed lol) I hope you stick with this, you have me on the edge of my seat. I also love how Elle's personality is strong and assertive, yet vulnerable and likeable.

Cant wait for the next update, love all the way from the UK!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! :)

 



Author's Response:

YAS! Aaron Taylor Johnson fangirls unite!  I agree, that man needs to be in more stories or anything for that matter (Side note: I can’t stop staring at him and I’ll definitely be posting more visuals).  This review made my day! I’m putting so much into this story, so the fact that you appreciate it as a whole means a lot. I won’t keep you waiting and believe me when I say I refuse to put this on the back burner.  Seriously, thanks for your compliments and encouraging words Landa.

CG

Reviewer: Landa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 03 2014 10:25 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Good for Tracie! Thats what BFF's are for!



Author's Response:

Tracie knows when to call Elle out on her shit. I was hoping this chapter would be a perfect example of that. I think it showed lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing flikchick.

CG

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2014 04:59 am

Title: Chapter 10

Cant wait for them to talk again!!  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

You won’t have to wait long. I’m thinking of updating earlier than usual. Thanks in return for your enthusiasm, reading and reviewing Michmom2.

CG

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 03 2014 01:53 am

Title: Chapter 10

Sounds like they need to decide if they will dwell on the past or if it will simply remain just that, and move on.  Can't wait to see what Elle has in store. 



Author's Response:

I agree. Regardless, it’ll be a learning experience for the both of them. Since their both a bit confused at this point.  I’m actually putting finishing touches on the next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing Musicluva.

CG

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2014 01:12 am

Title: Chapter 10

Don't give up on love Dean! I loved it



Author's Response:

I’ll keep your words in mind for the next chapter and Elle’s sake. Thanks for the love, reading and reviewing HumorMe.

CG

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2014 09:32 pm



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