Reviews For Accordance
Title: Goodbye

This story is AWWWWWEEEEESSSSOOOOMMMMEEEEE!!!!  Girl I cried during both of those chapters with Horitio and Hana......If there names are incorrectly spelled I apologize.   I hope his parents get theres and please let Rae put his mother in he place.  I can not wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

hehehehe thank you kimyso!! :DDDDDDDD Aww haha. Thank youuu~~ Girl I about cried too. It was hard to write!! Aww. It's okay haha. yes Hiroto and Hana's chapters by far were the hardest LOL. Rae and his mama may have it out who knows lol!! Stay tuned lovelie!

Reviewer: kimyso Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2015 02:26 pm

Title: Goodbye

Whoa. I hope Hana is okay soon :( And damn, they're taking some space away from each other now...hopefully that'll feel like its over in a blink haha. Sophmore year sounds like it's going to be very interesting! Great job on this chapter! :D



Author's Response:

hehe <3 :D ^^ Aww yeah :) It will for sureee hehe :D thank youu love~

Reviewer: ConverseObsessed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2015 09:25 pm

Title: Goodbye

I'm gonna take this point by point:

*I was over here fighting the air when I read what that tool Aki did to Hana.  And of COURSE he's too much of a coward to fight a man.  Hiroto should have stomped a mudhole in his arse.

*Why do I feel like Emi woke the sleeping dragon in Mina-chan?  I hope their 'conversation' is punctuated by Minako's fists meeting Emi's face.  

*Hiroto and Rae are SKRONG! (that's right, I said SKRONG) Not even a KISS??  I'd have to get at least a kiss.  But, I may be a little hot in the ass...so...there's that.

Once again, you sucked me in and made me feel feelings.  I LOVE this story!

 

 

 



Author's Response:

I AM WHEEZING! MS. JAYE SIMS YOU FUNNYYYYY WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LOLLL! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAH. You said mudhole I AM SO DONEEEEE BWAHAHAHAHAH. WOO.

*Aki is a sad sad man. He don't deserve Hana at all. Or Hisae. 

* YOU KNOW EMI DID. MINA DON'T PLAY GIRLLL lol!! OOH. You ret for some PAYNE lol! I am done too done bwahaha omg I cannot. 

*Girl yeah. They is SKRONG LOL! Cause honey one kiss to the face Rae on her back and they doing something they gon regret. LOL. They intense as all get out and Hiroto not tryin to play games. Nah. If he say you ain't leaving Nara or this room for two days straight he mean that lol!! So, it's better they not kiss... yet. :D 

Aw I appreciate you and your comments hehe ^_^ THANK YOUUU!

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2015 12:12 am

Title: Goodbye

Such a beautiful story! I love Hiroto he's so amazing. I am so angry for Hana though, she and Hisae needs a real man to take care of them (besides Roto). Minako is so funny! She is an amazing mother figure.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for commenting ^_^ I appreciate it :D Yes, Hana and her baby need a real MAN. It's nice that Hiroto is stepping up but it is not his place! It's not his job to do this. He's a child himself. Don't worry, Hana will get the love she and Hisae deserves. :D

Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2015 11:32 pm

Title: Goodbye

A lot has happened in this chapter. Hana...sweet Hana. The kiss of death would be too sweet for him. A slow painful torture would be just.  A very painful STD, I see that in his future. Of course a few weeks after his intimacy with Hana. Ha ha, look at me trying to feed you ideas. Yours are much better, smooth at times wonderfully unexpected. Roto and Rae, R-rated! Lol.  I do like the intimate marriage scenes... Throw back to the oatmeal, but I would like to see more their relationship. What they do for work, their passions, their disagreements, their friends, etc. Goodluck with your finals! Keep writing my friend!



Author's Response:

LOL! I feel the anger girl. I was really mad writing it lol. I'm not sure what will happen but at the end of the day, I want Hana to be happy. <3 Thank you hehe. FINALS ARE A VICTORY! I tried to keep them PG-13 LOL!!!! They a little too much lol. I agree full heartedly with you! I do like the scenes but that's not all there is to Hiroto and Rae being married. Not in the least. Some of my readers on the other site only want to see them get down and I had to let them know lol. haha. 

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2015 10:52 pm

Title: Goodbye

Dark and lovely thank you so much for updating.  Hana has got to be okay, she didn't deserve such  isrespect and abuse.  Don't these people ever call the police? I am annoyed that both Emi and Aki are getting away with attempted murder.  I don't understand Roto's need for a break, he should be happy that Rae doesn't blame him for Emi trying to kill her. I was really hoping that he would break a body part of Emi's. I am so disatified with Emi only receiving three slaps and not a beat down! Roto's donors deserve to die!! It should be painful!!  So good!!

Awesome sauce!!  Again good luck with your finals!!



Author's Response:

LOL. "Don't these people ever call the police?" They think they are the police LOL. They think cause they got money they can run the town. *smh* I can see your perspective about Roto. He need a break cause he don't want to ruin what he has with Rae. Rae knows about his past now and how sex was such a big part of his life; how hard it is for him. So, I do think a break was needed haha. Why fan the fire if you not in the position to let it burn? :D Why play with temptation? haha. These kids need to cool down LOL. <3 YAY! MY AWESOME SAUCE WOOHOO! *bing bing winner winner* Thank you so much Ms. Gayles~

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2015 10:25 pm



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