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Title: Chapter 6

I love the strangeness of this story and the pace, the fact that a stranger would latch on to someone but in a non creepy way is what I like about it.

 Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2015 01:08 pm
Title: Chapter 6

I would very much like to hear from Mica's point of view, if for no other reason that to learn why she felt like she needed to help Ken.

 Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2015 08:04 am
Title: Chapter 6

Ken deserves some happiness and love Mildred is coco for Coca Puffs.  I would like to hear what Midas thinking although I am still bothered by the age difference.   Team Ken!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2015 01:07 pm
Title: Chapter 6

I want to hear from Mica's point of view definitely. The only error that i saw was that you put mines instead of mine but this story is so intriguing i read it as soon as I realized that you had updated please do so again.

 Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 06 2015 10:33 am
Title: Chapter 6

Nice update

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2015 03:12 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Oh man, I feel so sorry for ken. I hope he finds happiness soon maybe with Jamica? 😉

I would love to hear Jamica's point of view. This story is really deep and I'm loving it, so keep it coming 😊

 Reviewer: Rainbows Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2015 11:23 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Very nice chapter! Can't wait to see where their interactions go. 

 Reviewer: Cju Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2015 09:00 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Omg I don't know why it took me so long to read this story! I love it. Please update soon!!

 Reviewer: AmmaWem Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2015 07:36 pm
Title: Chapter 6

I've read this story and with each chapter I try to get into the grove of the story you are telling, but something is off.  I can't put my finger on it.  The implausability may be to much for me, but I think it is the character of Jamica.  She just isn't believable.  I am not saying the story is not good, outside of Jamica, I like the story.  I like Ken and his struggle and his trifling wife and the detached kids.  But the two of them together just is not quite there for me.  

 Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 04 2015 05:37 pm
Title: Chapter 6

 I like this story and hope Ken and Jamica become a couple don't see that happening no chemistry but we will see

 Reviewer: Charming2i Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2015 04:57 pm
Title: Chapter 6

It may enrich the story to have Jamica's point of view. However,   I fear a loss of the intensity you've cultivated in Ken's character, given that you have little time with your studies to write.  That's just my greed and impatience talking.  Whatever makes this story flow for you; keeps you inspired.  It's really great,  this far! 

 Reviewer: Not sure Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 04 2015 01:30 pm
Title: Chapter 6

I would like hear Mica's point of view, although I can admit that age difference bothers.  Ken is his best but MJ is like an albatross around his neck bringing him down.  Telling him that he was ruining their family when it was her cheating ways that were.  Nasty drunk heifer!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2015 12:11 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Plz update soon.....

 Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2015 07:48 am


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