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Title: The Calm before the Storm [4]

Just read this and it's good so far. Is there more published on Lit?  

 Reviewer: AP Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2015 04:55 am
Title: The Calm before the Storm [4]

Is Colin also Zaira's mate?



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No he's not 

 Reviewer: kimyso Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2015 06:11 pm
Title: The Calm before the Storm [4]

It's no problem. I love reading this!! I still have to comment. Lol.

Silly me didn't think that there were other clans. I thought Adrian was like the king of the warewolves. And his family fought another species or something in the war. Haha. Silly right. It's funny that Colin and Duncan are just like Adrian and Conrad. I hope that she doesn't get into a relationship with Colin or that he would do something like that especially because he can smell Adrian on her. That would definitely not end well. 

Loving it!!! LOl 

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2015 12:36 am
Title: The Calm before the Storm [4]

Why do men think that crap is sexy?  Do not come at me and touch me without my expressed wishes.  Zaira trying to keep herself safe has just ran into the hands of the enemy and I hope Colin retains enough sense not to touch her himself.  How would he feel if it was his made in Hitzag hands? 

Good chapter.  Can't wait until they reunite.

 Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 22 2015 01:43 am
Title: The Calm before the Storm [4]

Thanks for a great update.  I guess Duncan or Colin will be the Ogre that is in her deams.  Looking forward to reading the next installment. 

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2015 04:13 am
Title: The Calm before the Storm [4]

Well our lil Zaira is becoming a very popular woman.  First Adrian, then Igor, Nelly may have had feelings for her but since she is his dead best friend's woman who knows now Colin is stiffing around and Duncan is being a douche bag along with Adrian's brother because he wants revenge for her locking his ass up.

Let's not forget about the ho of the clan Elena who needs her claws clipped.

I'm enjoying the story so far thank you for sharing.  I thought I had missed a chapter @ first because this one just came out of no where with Zaira taking Eli to a sleep over.  I hope he is okay but I have a sense that Zaira's instincts are on point and she did not feel any bad vibes from the kids parents that Eli'e house he's sleeping over.

Can't wait for more like the storyline want to see where you take it.

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2015 03:27 am
Title: The Calm before the Storm [4]

Wow, Zaira landed right in the middle of trouble dealing with Colin and Duncan. Hope Duncan leaves her alone! Great story so far.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2015 02:03 am
Title: The Calm before the Storm [4]

Great chapter...would like to see Adrian and Zara interact again

 Reviewer: laurie94 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2015 08:17 pm
Title: The Calm before the Storm [4]

Colin is hot, where is Adrian and why hasn't he staked his claim? I wish that I had some popcorn when I read this.  Colin could smell that Zaira was Adrian's mate but Duncan couldn't, why?  Or was Duncan feeling envious of cousin's apparent connection to Z? This story is so good, please update soon! Greedy ain't I?

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2015 07:56 pm


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