I want to like this doc, but you have two other stories unfinished. A little mad at you.
Reviewer: Storyteller247 Signed [Report This]Date: April 25 2015 04:36 pm
Aww he's going to be bae!!!
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: April 25 2015 03:17 pm
Sounds good so far I'm kinda excited to see where this goes
Reviewer: NiqueMo94 Signed [Report This]Date: April 25 2015 04:19 am
love love loving this story!
Reviewer: lwxie Signed [Report This]Date: April 25 2015 03:59 am
And why do I feel that after he drops her off at home he will return for blond chick for the evening. If I was Maya, I would have to put on the breaks because 1) he invited you and some chick is hugging up on him and he didn't have a problem with it 2) You've known him for 2 minutes with a general background check and he is already going past first base 3) He is just too plain mature, on a whole nother level than Ms. Maya and I think she will be swimming with the sharks when she should stay with the dolphins.
Let's see how he goes from a gorgeous, sweet God to an avenging angel.
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2015 01:23 am
"I've always wanted a twin."
I don't think that I took this the way he meant it. Or did I? ;)
With this Dark Fic tag, I'm suspicious of everything and everybody. hee
Waiting for the next update!
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: April 24 2015 08:02 pm
I feel the connection between these two. Why do i believe thing are about to go down real quick and in a good way with these two.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: April 24 2015 05:23 pm
Maya needs to watch out. Ayden never told her who the blond chick was, yet he is ready to make out with her. Hmmmm
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 24 2015 04:59 pm
LOVIN IT!!! Can you do more with Ayden's point of view? I'd like to know what he's thinking and what else he thinks about Maya.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 24 2015 04:04 pm
I am sure Ayden has some broken hearts and stalkers lurking around him. I would like to know why he didn't go pro? I have a bad feeling about this bon fire, but then I'm a pessimist.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: April 24 2015 12:18 am
Good start more pls.....when picturing Hayden I see Gregg Plitt...damn he's is sexy just a suggestion 😘 but it would soooo make my day.
Reviewer: kyky2019 Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 23 2015 11:21 pm
Love dark stories
Reviewer: Shanee Signed [Report This]Date: April 23 2015 05:41 pm
I like this, your characters are cute, your story made me smile. update soon
Reviewer: Shanee Signed [Report This]Date: April 23 2015 05:37 pm
Great Start ....More Please ! :)
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 23 2015 05:20 pm
I don't know what to make of Ayden besides being fine , but Maya is definitely naive. There is no shame in being a virgin Maya, your body is a gift only to be given to the man who has your heart. Licia, your best friend told you that Ayden just tastes but doesn't buy the whole meal. You have be warned! From the synopsis I expect to be creeped out, there are no connotations for obsession unless it's the perfume.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 23 2015 11:50 am
I can't wait for more, I can already tell it's going to be a good one. Interesting Start :)
Reviewer: cottoncandy_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: April 23 2015 09:05 am
Intriguing please more
Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 23 2015 08:16 am
Oh, boy! I'm not a huge fan of dark fic but this one has me wanting more. Please post again soon... I just hope its not too dark, lol!
Great job :D
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: April 23 2015 07:10 am
Oooh I'm loving it!!!
Reviewer: anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 23 2015 06:57 am
Love love love love love this story already! Can't for the an update!
Reviewer: lwxie Signed [Report This]Date: April 23 2015 06:48 am
I'm ready for this one!
Reviewer: Saylfo Signed [Report This]Date: April 23 2015 06:31 am
Interesting. I hope he's not a nut, for her sake.
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: April 23 2015 05:25 am
Interesting start!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: April 23 2015 05:24 am