Title: More Characters

Just started reading love it!!! Only complaint chapters are to short.

Reviewer: jackson1973 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2015 08:35 pm

Title: More Characters

Awwww...you got my hopes for a new update.  

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2015 07:33 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Thanks for the new chapter. I just started reading this story and I quite like it.

The premise is interesting. I like the fact that Aries and Cameron had a drunken hoopk up and there is no insta love/attraction between them; and also the fact that Cameron still loves Ambrosia. It feels more true to life. I hope Aries w'ont just fall for Cameron when they meet again and that they will try and build a proper co-parenting relationship and get to know each other first.

What I am not sure about is the direction of Ambrosia's character : she appears to be a tad too much of the crazy ass evil and conninving ex girlfriend/fiancee stereotype. The whole affair with that Gregory guy since she was 16 is pretty creepy though : that guy who is old enough to be her father was nothing more than a freaking sexual predator and I hope he'll get what he deserves in the end (which is a ass whopping and some jailtime).  Ambrosia seems to have some serious daddy/mommy issues to adress and come to terms with too.

Reviewer: RedHobo Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2015 06:43 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I love the story so far and Jaylen is sooo cute.

Reviewer: simplydijah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2015 03:58 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I'm glad Aries got some help.  And Ambrosia got what she deserved, if only minimally.  I'm curious as to what Cameron's reaction is going to be. 

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2015 12:21 pm

Title: Chapter 6

great update! love chris!

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2015 07:38 am

Title: Chapter 6

Well The witch finally got caught. Cameron & two of his brothers heard her so they know she's been having an affair with this Gary person. Can't wait for one of the brothers or Cam to tell Christian & their father. Nice to see them taking care of Aria & Jay & the closeness they're getting in this short time. Can't wait for more what mess is the witch plotting & how is Cam gonna respond to him having a son & that things the Witch did to Aria. Letting the family get to know her & finally hearing her side of all the lies the witch told about her.

Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 18 2015 07:37 am

Title: Chapter 6

This story has me hooked! Love it!

Reviewer: Alexandria Glass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2015 05:18 am

Title: Characters (So far)

I love them all. I hope you keep Aries' hair. Love all the men, too!

Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2015 04:09 am

Title: Chapter 6

Glad Ambrosia was exposed for the cheat she was! But with her uncle?!! How gross!! Wonder what her mom will have to say about that? Or does she know and encourages her? ....Also glad Christian wasn't judging Aries based on Ambrosia's word. Can't wait for Antonio to learn that Ambrosia is still a cheat and some of those babies she lost may not have been Cameron. Antonio may finally see Ambrosia for what she is, a manipulator!! Loved the update!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2015 03:57 am

Title: Chapter 6

Good story. I usually think baby mamma stories are overdone but you developed a strong, likable chararacter with integrity in Aries. Cameron needs work to be worthy of her and even his son. Aries has nothing material yet her integrity shines especially above her child's father who seems to have everythiing. Still I wonder if the money and influence of Cameron's family will try to pull Aries from her child. To early to tell but I'm along for the ride.

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 18 2015 03:22 am

Title: Chapter 6

Hosia  doesn't live in the real world if she thinks that Cameron is going to marry her skanky ass. She had been sleeping with Gregory since  she was 16, that is a sex crime and Gregory is a sex offender. I really want her and her  momma homeless and destitute.  Is it wrong to hate hare Hosia? That heifer makes my teeth itch and left eye twitch.   If she were to die in horrific car crash it wouldn't be a bad thing. Just saying..

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2015 02:32 am

Title: Chapter 6

You know, I really like Aries. She has a good sense of herself and she's strong with a good mindset. She does what she has to for her and her son and its evident that he's always first priority. The fact that her son always walked into daycare clean, feed and presentable spoke volumes about her character. It didn't matter that she wore secondhand clothes as long as Jaylen was looking decent.

She also doesn't take any mess and she doesn't think these people are any better than her just because they have money. She never tried to game these people and she could have at any point in the last three years. She took what she had and made the best of it for her child.

Plus, as her very last resort, and only for her son, did she contact these folks. Initially, they said no and she went on about her business. No badgering, begging, constant calling, or theatrics from her to them. I hope Anthony and Chris are taking note of this because her actions are speaking louder than any words Ambrosia could ever say going forward. She appears even-tempered and has manners. And her sweet baby looks to be the same way. Its also tickles me pink that she and Jaylen are stuck like glue to each other :)) I like mother and son!!

Cameron...I can't decide what he's about yet. Is he so in love that he's blind to all else or just gullible? And this is because of what Aries said about him knowing how Ambrosia was treating her and yet he did nothing. Because it sounds like she was bullied by Ambrosia and her pack. No, we don't have the full story yet and maybe he's just a person who is indifferent to others in life, but that doesn't exactly endear me to him until I know more. It also says something about his character as well.

Cannot wait to learn more about these menfolk.

Good stuff!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2015 12:36 am

Title: Chapter 6

I love Aries strength. I hope she keeps it. Yes, she probably should have told Cameron about her child, but she didnt't. I totally understand why she does not want to be anywhere near Ambrosia; she is crazy. I think Cameron will welcome his child, but I hope Aries does not be quick to start something with Cameron, no matter how much he pushes, if he pushes at all. From what Aries just said, Cameron knew about how she was treated and just ignored it. Now, I don't blame Cameron for Ambrosia being a witch, but if you could easily be with someone who picks on or makes someones life a living hell when that person has done nothing to deserve it, you have a problem. I mean can't you tell your girlfriend to cool it. You don't even have to know the person! But, I also understand if Cameron did say something, if he even cared to say something, Ambrosia would most likely have amped up her cruelty on Aries. 

Still, I hope she doesn't fall under Cameron's spell. He is the father of her child that she finally decided to tell him about and that should be it. Plus, although he is ready to kill Ambrosia, he still loves her, so he says. Great update!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 11:54 pm

Title: Chapter 6

As I read this chapter all I could think of is, What kind of mom does Ambrosia have?  Why didn't her mom say anything to her when she dropped out of college?  Isn't her mom a doctor?  Goodness, Ambrosia, you never give up your opportunity to be independent based upon trying to trap a man.  That in and of itself is a plan for potential failure and pitfalls.  Realized, she cant' cut her losses because she put all of her eggs into the Marino basket.  What can she do but go psycho like she is about to.  This man you have slept with since you were 16 is a pedo and needs his behind beat and you know he isn't leaving his wife.  You are the side chick like your dad messes with.  She made my head hurt.

Now I am not too fond of Cameron either.  He knew the torture and hell Aries was going thru and didn't defend her at all when he was just as much a part of the "mistake" and slept with her.  A grown ass man and you couldn't stand up to Ambrosia.  Hell nawl, he would have some begging to do before I even consider him as anything other than this dude who happens to be my son's father.  So you know what, this is karma for him too, that Ambrosia was cheating on him b/c if that is indeed what he did, then hey, you deserve it also to be willfully blind to her mayhem that affected an innocent person.

Great story though and can't wait to read more.

 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 10:21 pm

Title: Chapter 6

This hoe is delusional, she don't know if the babies were his or not. Plus in her mind Cameron will forgive her and come back. I see problems on the horizon, Ambrosia is like a ticking time bomb who is going to explode when Aries and jaylen comes on the scene.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 09:55 pm

Title: Chapter 6

OMG , I AM SO HOOKED ON THIS STORY.

Reviewer: yenaj36 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 09:48 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I'm in love with Christian. Aries is a woman after my own heart, she peeps people out first and then see if she can trust them. I don't trust that Ambrosia, Keep her away from Jaylen please or Aries and the Marino men will have that *ss.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 09:44 pm

Title: Chapter 6

so freaking cute... Yes, yes, yes,... Time to tell Cameron now!!!

Reviewer: Anomy Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 09:32 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Kind of looking forward to when Cameron or the twins tell 'Pop-Pop' and Uncle Chris that Ho-brosia ain't all sunshine and cinnamon.

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 09:29 pm

Title: Chapter 6

16!!! And she was going to continue if her nasty behind hadn't been found out. Trick has that stalker vibe. Wouldn't put it past her to try and do something to Jay. If she does, there will be numerous suspects in her disappearance.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 09:27 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Damn damn damn. So who knows which babies was Cams? If any at all. Damn damn damn that's all I got. 

Reviewer: Lisastpaul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 09:18 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Great job.

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 09:11 pm

Title: Chapter 5

"Did your precious Ambrosia inform ya'll that the reason she broke up with Cameron in College was becuase she was pregnant by the man she was cheating on him with? Or how about how she paid some back alley doctor two hundred dollars to abort the baby so her parents wouldn't find out?"

Well, that explains ths scar tissue and her well used kagina.

 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 07:38 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Papa Marino made some pretty babies. DAMN!!!

I'm liking Christian!

I think I'm going to love this story.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 07:33 pm



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