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Title: TIMELINE CHECKPOINT

I can't wait!!!

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2015 02:12 pm
Title: TIMELINE CHECKPOINT

Glad to see you still working on this great story!

 Reviewer: vmck Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2015 05:03 am
Title: TIMELINE CHECKPOINT

you read my mind, I was just thinking about this story literally a minute ago

 Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2015 03:08 am
Title: DAY 1

Should we consider this story abandoned? I was really enjoying it & have been checking for updates every day since there aren't very many good stories on the site that I haven't already read. Please let us know so I can stop checking for a while. 

 Reviewer: Sylvia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 20 2015 07:56 am
Title: DAY 1

 

 

      UPDATES, UPDATES PLEASE!! 

 

 Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2015 12:21 am
Title: DAY 1

Update please

 Reviewer: sasseb Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 14 2015 01:34 am
Title: DAY 28

 

 

 

 

                UPDATES! UPDATES! UPDATES!   PLEASEEEEE!!!!!!

 

 Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02 2015 06:00 am
Title: DAY 28

please, please do an update. The story is getting even better, which i didn't think could be possible.

 Reviewer: Sandra Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2015 06:23 pm
Title: DAY 1


UPDATES , UPDATES PLEASE!!!!

 Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25 2015 07:03 pm
Title: DAY 28

I like his reaction to seeing her, he's not all ego and athstetics, and Anika needs to lower her guard a little more

 Reviewer: miss jlb Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 10 2015 02:33 pm
Title: DAY 1

and your characters dont make sense. I dont understand how Anika constantly criticizes hunter for complaining and acting like a child and she is the same exact way.

 Reviewer: lonieg Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: October 09 2015 09:07 am
Title: DAY 1

I thought this was gona be a good read. The characters are so self-centered I can't even deal. Who acts like they do after they've almost died? There's no remorse for the ppl that did die. They make it seem so unimportant to their lives and their situation. So sad.

 Reviewer: lonieg Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: October 09 2015 09:03 am
Title: DAY 28

Actually, salt water is great for open wounds. It cleans and helps heal. And reduces scaring. It's good for acne too! that and the sun will clear you right up. He should go take a swim in the ocean while still healing.

Just saying...^^

 Reviewer: Outfielder Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 07 2015 05:57 am
Title: DAY 28

Maybe Hunter should ask her about her childhood.  I know she tend to avoid some topics but it could be a good way for him to kind of get an idea of what she is hiding and why.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 05 2015 04:40 am
Title: DAY 28

Looks like Annika just found her champion. Hunter likes Annika just the ways she is. I can't wait frthingsto heat up.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2015 10:38 pm
Title: DAY 28

I'm glad that Hunter has stopped being a douche canoe. I hope he can make Anika see that she is because even with the skin discoloration. It's nice that he doesn't care about something so superficial. Hunter will probably rock her world when they finally get together. Why do I get the feeling that when they're rescue, Anika is going to have a huge belly, lol. 

 Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2015 02:54 am
Title: DAY 28

Now that is how a MAN would react. Loved that he only noticed the discoloration AFTER. Yeah, Hunter is coming along quite nicely. Wonderful update, Chica.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2015 07:10 pm
Title: DAY 28

I'm honored MP, I loved the fact that you discuss a situation every female has to are had to experience in their life, It makes it all real. I'm glad Hunter wasn't vulgar about the situation and that he showed restraint, dignity and compassion towards Anika his father would be proud. I also love the fact that Hunter is willing to teach Anika to fish, a man who teaches you how to supply for yourself, so if something was to happen to him you can survive on your own is a REAL MAN in my eyes. Their Relationship is evolving nicely. Thanks for the update MP

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2015 05:50 pm
Title: DAY 28

I am liking Huntet more and more.  Theses two are each growing nd I like the path they are on.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2015 11:47 am
Title: DAY 28

Great chapter, love how you made him see her greatest fear last.

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2015 09:23 am
Title: DAY 28

I loved this. Not often I read something that discusses menstrual cycles outside of fanfiction. Can't wait for the next chapter.

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Date: October 01 2015 09:19 am
Title: DAY 21

First of all I just wanted to let you know I love all your stories. You have a great imagination and you write you ideas well. I hope you prolong the romance a little bit more even though they should both be emotionally tied to each other already from just the trauma from the crash and dealing with the shock and death of the others. Now that we know there is no hotel on the other side of the island aka panther, more of the reality of permanency and dependency and how they deal with it would be interesting to read and I think no first names until they physically come together.  And shouldn't one of them take a swim to see if they can find the part of the plane that sunk to get more stuff. Just a thought.  lol

 Reviewer: triniflwr Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2015 01:39 am
Title: DAY 21

That was a close call for both of them.  One being the drop from the cliff and the other being the panther attack and big cats have strong jaws so Hunter would have been done for. I like how Anika quickly and thoughtfully came to his aide. I agree with jacqua43 now Hunter has physical scars as well as Anika so she won't feel inferior. Hunter seems to really beginning to notice Anika more and more and how beautiful she really is that if they were eventually to get intimate her vitiligo won't matter. As for calling each other by thier first names I do feel Day 21 is early but I can see it coming soon

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2015 09:07 pm
Title: DAY 21

You are such a god writer I can't wait to read more from you in the near future

 Reviewer: brookedoe Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2015 05:36 am
Title: DAY 21

Love this story. I feel at one point, one of them will be sick and the other has to nurse them back to health. They could grow during that period of nursing and nurturing. I prefer it to be Sterling aiding Anika. During this time he could possibly discover her vitiglio. Just a suggestion if you seem to be stumped. I can't wait for the update!

 Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2015 05:25 pm


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