Reviews For 200 DAYS
Title: DAY 21

Anika couldn't save her parents but she was going to try with everything in her to save Hunter from that Panther and she did, Now Hunter will have scars to. There is nothing that can bring two people closer then when one saves the others life. Hunter saw Anika's light and he recognized it, Anika is seeing hunter heart and she is recognizing he is a good person and not at all what she thought he was. They are building a bond that not even Corrine can break. Thanks for the double update MP

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2015 01:36 pm

Title: DAY 21

She just saved his life and tended to his injuries so why not now? I love Mohawk, he adopted them. So cute!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2015 01:28 pm

Title: BACK AT HOME 3

Don't you just love grandmas. Mrs.Ernestine is a strong woman she's holding on to faith. Mr. Sterling makes me like him more and more, taking the time to go to Anika's grandmother house personally and inform them of the situation is being a real boss and human being with morals, compassion and a good heart. Issac and Isaiah personalities are showing I love it. thanks for the update MP

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2015 01:24 pm

Title: BACK AT HOME 3

Sterling is very perceptive, could why in the hell did he marry Corrine?  You allowed that ho to ruin your son. Love Issac!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2015 01:18 pm

Title: DAY 21

I still call my hubby by his last name from time to time. Their relationship indicates that it has to get a whole lot more intimate before they do that. Maybe that's why it isn't coming naturally to you...

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2015 01:16 pm

Title: DAY 21

This transition character is where the relationship changes...Hunter being hurt will be the cause of it. He will unintentionally revert to calling her Anika without realizing it. She will continue to call him Sterling until he finally heals from the panther attack. He will depend on her more because of his wounds and they will become closer.

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2015 09:23 am

Title: DAY 1

Anika will need to be secure with herself before allowing someone to get close to her again.  She is carrying around too much guilt and trying to be everybody's saviour.  I wonder if she realizes now how much of a selfish ass Jason was.  That was one person and she shouldn't base what that prick did to her as the standards for all men.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2015 04:11 pm

Title: VALENTINE'S DAY 2001

Jason's main goal was to get in Anika's pants, he didn't love her because if he did he would have let her explain her situation to him. He was cruel and tasteless and a down right bully, she was better off without him in her life. Anika needs to know that there is someone out there who will love her for her inside and out. Thanks for the update MP

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2015 05:54 pm

Title: VALENTINE'S DAY 2001

"Whoever and wherever this man was Anika doubted that she would ever meet him one day." That will be...STERLING! But Jason...all I can say is he is an asshole. And one would think that he would understand that Anika had vitiligo because of the fire incident or it doesn't have to be because of the fire. It's just the fact that he degrades her because of her vitiligo shows me that he cares more about appearances than anything and THAT he still has that teenage mentality (side note: I know not ALL teenage duded act like Asshole. Yes, that is HIS name...Asshole). To be honest, I think he wants to take her virginity and be done with her. I don't think he ever loved her.

My heart goes out for Anika, and I hope that she has the confidence to someday tell Sterling about her vitiligo. Great update as always!

Reviewer: luvrayne Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 02:35 pm

Title: VALENTINE'S DAY 2001

Jason is insecure. He never loved Annika. Annika will find someone to accept and love her.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 02:14 pm

Title: DAY 18

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 02:08 pm

Title: VALENTINE'S DAY 2001

That poor baby, and Jason is an Ass! I hope Sterling shows her the deep, passionate and true love she deserves and damn what or how his mother's prejudice ass feels!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 10:48 am

Title: VALENTINE'S DAY 2001

He was so damn mean

Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 03:49 am

Title: VALENTINE'S DAY 2001

Wow, what an immature jerk Jason was to her! Hope she finds someone who loves her and accepts her for who she is. She's scared from that experience. Hope she gets the opportunity to find love and to run into Jason with her love and show him she did find her valentine.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 03:28 am

Title: VALENTINE'S DAY 2001

Hunter bet not react the same as that little shit. Man vs boy, man vs boy. And if Hunter does react the same, then he's still a boy.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 02:01 am

Title: VALENTINE'S DAY 2001

Look hidden with guys like Jason, too petty! It's not her fault but sooner or later in life he will understand... Or he will beg for her back

Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 01:56 am

Title: VALENTINE'S DAY 2001

Jason is an even bigger asshole than Hunter's mom, well maybe about the same level of asshole. I bet once they get rescused, she and Hunter will be celebrities because this is the kind of news story people like. That jackass will probably show up again, probably wanting something from her.

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 01:53 am

Title: VALENTINE'S DAY 2001

Jason was an asshole and your roommate did try to warn you Anika.  I feel so bad for her, there is a real man out their for you Anika. Good stuff!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 01:18 am

Title: DAY 18

The relationship seems to be  progressing nicely at a very stead pace. I know she still doesn't trust him, but I know it's coming!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 18 2015 08:20 am

Title: DAY 18

I can't wait for Anika to be comfortable in the skin she's in. Right now Anika just think a persons outer beauty is important, but to me it's the beauty within that makes a person beautiful in my eyes. Anika can't let what one person who is not even irrelevant dictates how she sees herself and how other people will view her. I'm hoping Hunter sees her alone bathing and notice her vitiligo and she's not aware he's watching and when she do decide to show him her body he's shows her that it doesn't matter to him. Hunter is coming around to be a very cool dude. Thanks for the update MP

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2015 02:46 pm

Title: DAY 5

Hey! I'm not sure what you're plan is for this story once you finish it (edit, publish, etc.) but I just wanted to let you know there are some inconsistencies. In chapter one Hunter mentions flirting with Giselle for over a year and finally wanting to have sex with her but in this chapter it had already happened. I saw something else too but forgot what it was, sorry! Other than that, this is an interesting plot. Can't wait to see how these 2 will get past the hatred lol. 

Reviewer: Mariposa-12 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2015 12:10 pm

Title: DAY 18

Hunter is really being nice to Anika, when will relax her guard some?  Anika eye candy is always good to look at and enjoy.    My hope is that Hunter continues to grow and that when he sees his incubator he tells her about herself.  Hopefully his father will stick up for him and divorce his wife.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2015 03:57 am

Title: DAY 18

Great update! Hope she eventually opens up to Sterling about her vitiligo so she can put her mind at ease and start to enjoy herself more.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2015 03:25 am

Title: DAY 14

Hunter is human! Yeah, I am glad for that! I hope Anika and Hunter get the tree house finished and admit the feelings their feelings for each other. i can't wait.

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 11 2015 03:06 am

Title: DAY 14

Hmm, Hunter being away from all the trappings and expectations bestowed upon him by his mother and society may actually be a decent individual.  I am curious as they continue to be stranded on this island and get to know each other how Hunter will act once they return to civilization and those expectations are present again.  Will he return to the Good Ole Boy club or actually start to stand up to his overbearing mother and the village idiots.  For me that will be the true test of Hunter's personality and being a man.

Honestly felt a little sad for Hunter because his mother was actually a horrible mom that showed him his simplest desires were unworthy.  He took pride in building that treehouse with his dad, a memory more than the tree house itself and she ruined that for him.  I wonder if she has something over his father's head for him to have remained silent.  At this time his father seems like a punk ass bish for letting this woman have this much control over his SON, who has to grow into a MAN.  Unlike
Anika, Hunter did not have any good role models for adulthood and being a man.  Can he recover from that at this late stage?  I am waiting to see.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 11 2015 02:44 am



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