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Title: DAY 11

Hmm..I'm think they probably should build a new shelter. I don't think they will come across anything besides caves. I'm sure Anika will be doing all of the work. I still don't understand why she hasn't separated from Hunter. He's dead weight to her. I still can't wait to read more! 

 Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26 2015 02:01 am
Title: DAY 11

Make them work for the closeness you're building up to. Let them build one. Maybe watch naked and afraid for inspiration.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2015 11:16 pm
Title: DAY 11

Wow! when it rains it pours. I understand how she feels about her journal the only connection she feels to her mother, but her life is much more important. Wow! the human side of Hunter has finally come out. I see their situation evolving more now, Anika is emontionally and mentally traumatize right now and Hunter is the stable one now. I think they should find a new shelter, they need to discover the island. thanks for the update MP

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2015 10:04 pm
Title: DAY 11

I still can't see her falling for him especially after what he said to her in the hospital. He may look nice on the outside but he's still an ugly person on the inside.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2015 04:46 pm
Title: DAY 11

It's day 11 and Sterling is still expected to be waited on hand and foot? Screw him. I know Anika is collecting food for the both of them to give herself something to do but there's a difference between giving yourself something to do and being stupid. If you don't work you don't eat. Sterling needs to pull his weight or else she's just being stupid and wearing herself out for no reason. I don't like sterling at all and I'm really beginning not to like her either. Hope she realizes she's being played.

 Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2015 04:17 pm
Title: DAY 11

Wow, yeah, Hunter, reality just smacked you in your pie hole. I'm surprised at his reaction. I expected him to make some insensitive remark. But then again, it's still early morning.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2015 02:03 pm
Title: DAY 11

Hunter finally woke up smelled reality and now maybe he will stop antagonizing Anika abd help her.  They should build a shelter together so they can learn to get along.  Hunter she tolf you her mom gave her the journal but as usual you weren't listening.  So awesome! !

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2015 01:19 pm
Title: DAY 11

I love this story.  In response to your question, i think they should build a new one. Hunter should be the lead in it to show that he has some useful skill that was not handed to him because of wealth.

 Reviewer: qsmommy05 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2015 01:00 pm
Title: DAY 11

Build seems more plausible to me. It's like Lost.

 Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2015 12:27 pm
Title: DAY 11

For the first time we see genuine concern by hunter towards anika..its a nice change..poor anika she has had a very rough life..maybe she could start a new journal on the island... they could build a tree house, fence etc like in swiss family Robinson..theyll be safe from any wild creatires tht might be lurking around..wonder if hunter is capable of building one though hes such a baby...or they could find a secure, spacious cave as a temporary home..looking forward to see more adventures on the island..like to see hunter and anika get closer..could u make the chapters a bit longer plz..love ur story...update soon!!!

 Reviewer: Jenny Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2015 10:43 am
Title: DAY 11

Build one let Sterling's lazy ass do some actual work for a change.

 

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2015 06:32 am
Title: DAY 8

I just read your story over the weekend and I'm looking forward to more of it. Please continue!

 Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2015 03:32 pm
Title: CAST

It would be better if the chapters were longer. They're too short and It's moving too slow.

 Reviewer: Tara Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 20 2015 10:51 am
Title: CAST

I'm not feeling HS IV. He's an a-hole and I don't feel he's worth empathy. I stopped reading this because I just can't see how you're going to redeem him.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 20 2015 10:41 am
Title: CAST

Like the pictures you chose. Hunter is a lazy ass...he'll appreciate Anika soon. Well I guess they need to appreciate each other and work together.

 Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2015 08:39 am
Title: CAST

Love the cast pics!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2015 04:34 am
Title: BACK AT HOME 2

Loved the update! 'Love Sterling's dad. Corrine on the other hand is abit too much!! She needs a reality check! How in the world did he end up with someone so superficial?!! Hope they find Anika and Sterling Jr soon.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2015 04:34 am
Title: DAY 8

Great update! Glad Anika hanging in there! Hope Sterling matures some by the time he is rescued.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2015 04:31 am
Title: BACK AT HOME 2

Finally I need Sterling(the father) to Man Up ! Good chapter,can't wait to read more.

 Reviewer: stacie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 20 2015 03:35 am
Title: CAST

I am really loving this story!!!

 Reviewer: yenaj36 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2015 11:25 pm
Title: BACK AT HOME 1

Wow u wrote Malaysia .........because all of the plane crash relating to Malaysia right ?

As a Malaysian reading this ........It felt abit too real :(

 

 Reviewer: ickey_viki Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 19 2015 11:14 pm
Title: BACK AT HOME 2

Loving this story....Waiting around for every new chapter

 Reviewer: Lynn Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2015 08:25 pm
Title: CAST

The whole cast is wonderful, it something when you have a visual of the characters. Nice job!!

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2015 08:24 pm
Title: CAST

You picked two of my casts pics, awesome!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2015 07:47 pm
Title: BACK AT HOME 2

I'm starting to like his father a lot more since he is starting to speak his mind, his wife can trip on a crack honestly. Yes, don't listen to your wife you go and thank them at the church it doesn't help to thank the church members.

 Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2015 10:01 pm


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