I really like your story, I hope you will finish it one day
Reviewer: fanaserie Signed [Report This]Date: July 21 2020 10:24 pm
I hope they will be able to made it
Reviewer: fanaserie Signed [Report This]Date: July 21 2020 07:25 pm
Kalo should ask less question and run faster
Reviewer: fanaserie Signed [Report This]Date: July 21 2020 06:33 pm
It''s sad that you did not get more reviews, your story is really good
Reviewer: fanaserie Signed [Report This]Date: July 21 2020 06:30 pm
They found him
Reviewer: fanaserie Signed [Report This]Date: July 21 2020 06:26 pm
What is happening to thème?
Reviewer: fanaserie Signed [Report This]Date: July 21 2020 06:23 pm
I hope Edrick will make the right choice
Reviewer: fanaserie Signed [Report This]Date: July 21 2020 06:21 pm
The story is well written. The plot is strong. The chapters are short, but suspenseful. Impatiently waiting for next chapter
Author's Response:
It only just occured to me that the chapters may be short, lol, I will try to lengthen them but as I am writing as you are reading in order to keep the schedule I am trying to get the main points across. I am glad you are enjoying the story! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Francis Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 10 2016 12:06 pm
"Moonlight Skin" is supposed to refer to pale luminescant skin. At the moment, we don't have any identified "races" but I can promise there aren't any elves!! Hope this answers your question, if you have anymore please feel free to ask and I will try my best to anwser and always thanks for reading!
Reviewer: TheUN_Life Signed [Report This]Date: November 27 2015 06:35 pm
I'm loving this story. One question, what is moonlight skin is one of the woman Elfin?
Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]Date: November 26 2015 01:35 pm
Hey Chamber-mates,
I would just like to thank you guys again for your support. This is a work in progress that I have been "working" on for a while but with all the love support I will continue on this adventure with; Kit, Kalo and lovable Lycia!
Thanks,
TheUN_life
Reviewer: TheUN_Life Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25 2015 03:41 pm
I like the story, you have a way with words I find invigorating, so please don't stop!!!!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 19 2015 05:00 pm
very good - please continue! i'm super intrigued!
Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]Date: November 06 2015 08:29 pm
love love looooove! i haven't wanting to read a fantasy stoy on this site and here you come - thank you! thank you! thank you! great start!
Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]Date: November 06 2015 08:23 pm
Yep, I'd say Continue. "god" is something else. Makes you wonder.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: October 27 2015 03:29 pm
Please continue? That supposed God was evil. Can we get a description of Kat? Why is Kat in prison? I feel bad for Kalo, his town was destroyed. He has no one from his old life. I love that he adopted that little boy, Kalo is my hero!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 27 2015 10:49 am
Very good start
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: October 27 2015 02:16 am