wow...great update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: November 06 2015 04:21 am
Marie is going through a lot right now and I hope she has some girlfriends she can talk too. She has to realize that it wasn't her fault and people have choices and her future ex made his choice, so now he has to suffer the consequences of his actions. The way she took her frustrations out on the mystery man was wrong and he still came to her aid. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: November 02 2015 11:53 pm
Interesting plot. Keep the updates coming.
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: November 02 2015 06:51 am
OMG MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 02 2015 12:43 am
I agree with BellaChica (Your sister and husband that's all kinds of wrong, some lines you just don't cross). Can't wait until morning when she wakes up!!!
Update soon!!
Reviewer: Tracy21 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 02 2015 12:30 am
PLEASE, I hate to be a bother, but, I CAN NOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!
I'm really enjoying this tale. Although, I want to drop kick those two cheaters for what they've done to Marie. She saw them as a family and they saw her as what? Surely, not.
Should she care their REASONS for doing what they did? Nah, only how far she could get her stilettos up both their asses if they come with some bs excuse. Ain't no excuse or EXPLANATION will make this OK in this universe or any other.
I HATE cheaters. I mean REALLY HATE. It's lying. How can you trust someone once they'v lied to you? Won't you wonder about EVERYTHING after that?
You are killing it, Chica.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: November 01 2015 06:28 pm
Ooh! I remember this story! Glad you're back! Looking forward to more. Need a bit of editing, but it still looks like an exciting story. Thanks for bringing it back!
Reviewer: bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 01 2015 10:18 am
I want more...now!!!!!
Author's Response:
Lol more is coming, I promise
Reviewer: Lady Siren Signed [Report This]Date: November 01 2015 02:43 am
OMG, How soon before the next chapter? I was mad and laughing at the same time.
When she saw herself in jail(Orange is the new black) LOL, LOL,
Please next chapter soon!!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL!!!, yeah betrayal epiphanies are that vivid, LOL.
Reviewer: Tracy21 Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 31 2015 10:45 pm
I want more and I want it now. Lol
Author's Response:
Haha more coming.
Reviewer: Nil Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 31 2015 10:43 pm
Very good start.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: October 31 2015 10:09 pm
The first chapter caught my intention
Author's Response:
I am glad it caught your attention. Now I have to work on keeping that attention.
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: October 31 2015 09:44 pm
Please continue! !
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 31 2015 08:43 pm
I love the start of this story already! I LOVE the way Marie handled herself. Loved it. Both her husband and her sister have equal blame in the infidelity and I love how she left out. Marx had the gaul l to deflect the situation at hand and call Marie cold? The woman, his wife who just walked in on him and her sister who probably just got through f%&%ing, Marx should be happy Marie didn't hurt his a%$. That was the absolute wrong thing to do is talk about a person's character (Marie being cold, so she won't shoot your a#$) while you are the one in the wrong. Yes, he was grasping at straws with that one.
He and her sister are a trip, but I guess how else would someone act when caught cheating. I hope she doesn't blink twice through the next phase in her life dealing with her ex-husband and sister. I hope she blocks them out of her life completely. I don't think she hates them, but I know she is some kind of hurt. Trust, they'll get what they deserve. I hope she doesn't give them the satisfaction of seeing her torn up. 'F' Marx and Angel. I swear after all the processes are done to get Marx out of her life, I would not acknowledge his presence here on earth. Same goes for her sister; at family functions if she is there, I'd have her ass removed until I was done visiting or plan ahead and meet with family before her butt got there. But speaking how Marie's family feels about Angel, I don't think this will be a problem. Marie's grandmother may talk her down a bit though. Anyway I love the start of her story!!!
Author's Response:
HAHA yeah she needs more crazy in her, then go all psychotic on them, but this would be over before it even begins. LOL!
Reviewer: OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 31 2015 08:13 pm
Man!! I don't know which one of those MOFO's I would have went for first. I think the husband, the hell with the gun I would have started with crushing his balls and yanking that little pecker until it POP! off, then I would have taking my nails and go Edward Scissorhand on his face, having him rolling around on the floor like a little B*tch!. Then it's sister time!! I would've start yanking all the hair from her head and b*tch slap her so many times, she would have thought she was in the movie " Fight Club", then I would have start breaking every teeth in her mouth, this chick is a liar and a snake and not to be trusted. But my girl (Marie) went all " Silence of the Lamb" on them and she had divorce papers, she knew this MOFO wasn't husband material anymore, never show the enemy any emotions. I like this story.
Author's Response:
LOL "Silence of the Lamb"??. Hahahaha,
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: October 31 2015 08:03 pm
Ah hell yeah. I'm definitely on board.I was screaming, SHOOT!
When a spouse cheats in the marital bed, I think they subconsciously want to get caught. Yeah, they both need to skeedaddle or the cops would never find their bodies.
I'm liking Marie. Those other two need to be dipped in a cauldron of hot oil.
Well done, Chica.
Author's Response:
Totally true, if you cheat in your marital bed. You so definitely want to get caught..
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: October 31 2015 07:14 pm