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Title: Want

Welcome back! Thank you for updating! I've missed this story!

I'm glad Mercy was finally truthful with Gage, but more importantly herself. Now the balls in his court to prove his truth. I'm glad you've held off consummation. She needs to be sure about him; although, continuing the "little" things doesn't hurt her or us. 😉

It's definitely a happy holiday for me. I hope for you as well. Take care.

 Reviewer: Presh Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2015 04:55 pm
Title: Want

Finallt Mercie admitted her feelings! Merry Christmas Chica!! Thank you for updating!!

 Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2015 04:22 pm
Title: Want

AAww I love them so much. I'm really enjoying the rewrite. Thanks for the updateand can't wait for the next one 

 Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2015 03:41 pm
Title: Want

I love these two. Can't wait for more. Happy Holidays!!

 Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 23 2015 03:36 pm
Title: Want

About time! Yeesh! I'm glad Mercy forced Gage to just tell the truth. I'm also glad she let him know she wanted him, too. Mercy can be a pain, but this was initiated all ass backwards by Gage. So all this miscommunication, guessing and assuming can stop now. Go on a date, talk this thing out for real and be HONEST, and then see where that takes them.

Love Nana for cutting through the foolishness with Mercy and getting the ball rolling here. She knows her well!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2015 03:27 pm
Title: Pies & Lies

Update soon!!!!!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2015 02:36 am
Title: Pies & Lies

I know it has been only a few days from the last update but I'm hooked on your story. I'm in total expectation of the next chapter and the direction it is going.

How is Gage going to make his mission of making Mercy his, not just through having sex. They have had fights  throughout their lives. A romantic calm twist to his chase would be different for him and an unexpected eventful mind blowing shock to her.

Any way, please update soon. 

 Reviewer: Cleo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 07 2015 12:19 pm
Title: Pies & Lies

Colton will never give up, she just needs to sit back and enjoy the ride. Thanks for the update MJ.

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Date: November 05 2015 07:40 pm
Title: Sugar on Top

Stop running girl.

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2015 07:36 pm
Title: Pies & Lies

This is my story! Reread it so many times before. My heart drop when you said you removed it! Like gurl come again?! But then you were putting back up! So my real question... when are you going to up back up " Baby its cold outside" because gurrrrrllll that story right there. Ooooo i just need it back in my life!!! All time favorite! Please girl when?

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 05 2015 11:02 am
Title: Pies & Lies

Missed this story! 

 Reviewer: emynence Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2015 05:48 am
Title: Pies & Lies

Oh Mercy, you ain't fooling nobody but yourself, hon.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2015 02:53 am
Title: Pies & Lies

Gage seems to be only interested in sex with Mercy. One of his wishes was for Mercy to be his, for sex games or his future wife with a family? What's the rush for sex? Does he love her? What draws him to Mercy? He needs to get to know Mercy as a person and the same for her. Are they going to go on dates? 

Please update soon.

 Reviewer: Questions Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 05 2015 01:25 am
Title: Pies & Lies

If this isn't the best writing!!! Mercy just needs to go ahead and give in!! Lord knows I would have already lol. Keep up the good work. I love it. 

 Reviewer: TiesThatBind Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2015 12:37 am
Title: Pies & Lies

These games need to stop between these two. Gage is always talking about sex and Mercy is always running away. When are they going to get serious?

Please update soon



Author's Response:

It will get there soon. :)

 Reviewer: Cleo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 04 2015 08:48 pm
Title: Pies & Lies

What has Gage done to earn Mercy's trust...a sexy man can still use and hurt you...why should she consider that he has real feelings and wants more than the physical...does he knows who she is...does she know him...what do they know of each other outside of a childhood rivalry...he spanks her and she likes it but what does he do for her heart...what does she do for his...true love is honestly beyond the physical but the physical seems like the only thing they really have...be vulnerable Gave and show Mercy love...

 Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 04 2015 07:55 pm
Title: Pies & Lies

Mercy, Imma need for you to stop running gurl!!!

 Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2015 06:41 pm
Title: Pies & Lies

Keep the updates coming!!!!! I can't wait to see where  these two are headed.

 Reviewer: Grace Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 04 2015 05:48 pm
Title: Pies & Lies

I love it 

 Reviewer: Jadedbylifesavedbygrace Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2015 12:55 pm
Title: Pies & Lies

Why is Mercy always running? What is she afraid of?  Colton, with his arrogance and pushiness is making Mercy run from him.  When did his feelings change for Mercy or did he always love her?  Little boys show their like of a girl in stupid ways   Mercy is still stuck in the past childish crap, girl let it go. You know you want you some Colton!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2015 12:27 pm
Title: Open Seas and Olive Branches

Love it! This is my first read. I just started reading on this site. It would be nice to read Gage's transition from hate to love. Was it when he saw her bent over in the fridge or something deeper that he hadn't acted on before now. Keep the updates coming.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2015 08:26 am
Title: Leading Cast

I remember loving this story the first time around and its still one of my favorites!!

 Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2015 06:32 am
Title: Sugar on Top

I am loving this cat and mouse chase, even though I never read the first version.  But what I am REALLY curious for is more of their back story. If they've known one another for over 20 years, what was their childhood like? I would love to see detailed flashbacks about them in school, why they hated each other, how long before he knew he really didnt hate her at all, but she hadn't caught on...etc.

Excellent story so far!

 Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2015 05:02 am
Title: Pies & Lies

Why is Mercy scared of? Herself? Love the updates.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 04 2015 04:28 am
Title: Pies & Lies

Thanks for the timely update.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 04 2015 03:28 am


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