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Title: Chapter 7

What's up with that Hilary girl?  I don't know how i feel about her yet.  And that  Gerrie woman is extremely annoying.  Take the hint Gerrie.  Jeez!

 Reviewer: rosa1234 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 12 2016 03:36 am
Title: Chapter 6

She got you, didn't she?  Dude wasn't expecting that.

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Date: February 12 2016 03:27 am
Title: Chapter 5

Lol,  things are getting pretty interesting .

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Date: February 12 2016 03:23 am
Title: Chapter 4

Haha,  cannot wait .

 Reviewer: rosa1234 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 12 2016 03:17 am
Title: Chapter 3

Lol,  this had me cracking up.  I like the characters.

 Reviewer: rosa1234 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2016 03:12 am
Title: Chapter 1

Like it so far.

 Reviewer: rosa1234 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2016 03:04 am
Title: Chapter 7

Spy!!!

 Reviewer: Eva Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 12 2016 02:57 am
Title: Chapter 7

"Reuben shrugged his shoulders lightly at the discomfort caused by her spindly fingers and sharp nails."

What popped into my head was an old crone. Reuben needs to delouse and get rid of that git.

“But not important enough to have a serious relationship with obviously.”

Nah, bitch. You smart. What do you THINK he means. Stop pestering the man. HE.DON'T.WANT.YOUR.THIRSTY.BEHIND. You got that?  *Victor Newman voice*

And girl is asking him questions that just is not her business. I hate folks like that. Ya'll don't have that kind of relationship, ya hag.

“You have lunch with your mother every Tuesday,” Gerrie pointed out.

And yeah, IT'S HIS MOTHER, you twit. Is there anything in that thick head of yours besides wool? DAMN. She's starting to tick me off on Reuben's behalf.

I hate to be mean, but I LOVE that Hilary is coming around. That Gerrie is gonna lose what marbles sh has left. hee.

There's something kinda offabout croneGerrie.

And now for the other one. What in the blue dilly hell does Hilary think she's doing. She ain't no Mata Hari. This is so transparent and hopefully Reuben doesn't fall for it. I wonder if Hilary really wanted to do this or was that demon forcing her to do it? demonDylan is evil, but I must admit, he's one fine piece.

There is so much to wonder about, in a good way. Keep us wanting MORE. Thanks so much for the great update, Chica.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2016 02:39 am
Title: Chapter 7

This story is so good. I am looking forward to more

 Reviewer: Belladonna400 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2016 12:42 am
Title: Chapter 7

Gerrie Ruben does not want your thirsty tale so please go somewhere and sit down!!  I knew that trick Hilary would show up after seeing Rueben with Amelle especially since Dylan was all over her like a fly on shit.  Gerrie makes my left eye twitch and Hilary just needs to slap so hard that sees the insides of her momma's womb again!!  Dylan is an untrustworthy asshole who deserves a beat down.   I so want him to loose everything! !

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2016 12:39 am
Title: Chapter 7

Seems both Gerrie and Hillary are vultures. Obviously they're up to something. Can't wait to see what. 

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2016 11:33 pm
Title: Chapter 7

I happened upon this story, and I'm so glad that I did b/c its great so far... I love the dynamic between Reuben and Amelle, I can't wait to see thier relationship develop.

As for Hillary, IMO she is being kinda shady, all of a sudden she wants to be friends with Reuben after she dropped him for is frienemy Dylan, (who to me only wants what others have.) I think its b/c of Amelle and how Reuben seemed to be effected by her, don't like her or Genie at all.

Can't wait for more.

 Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 11 2016 10:59 pm
Title: Chapter 7

REALLY! REALLY?! Come on Reuben...don't fall for the okie doke from Hilary. I believe Dylan sent her there. Possibly with the premise of reestablishing their friendship, but really it's so he can pick her brain about Reuben's designs. She went because she's curious about Arelle.

Gerrie's going to be a big problem.

Great chapter. Good length.

 Reviewer: Presh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2016 10:46 pm
Title: Chapter 5

I really like how you gave Hillary a meek personality. Usually the ex is vindicative and a terror set out to destory the relationship of the main characters so it was different and refreshing to see Hillary as the total opposite. 

Thanks for the update!

 Reviewer: Annienathanson Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 11 2016 04:35 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Can't wait for the next update! 

 Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2016 04:24 am
Title: Chapter 5

Sparks with the touch

 Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2016 04:00 am
Title: Chapter 4

Lol

 Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2016 03:56 am
Title: Chapter 3

Lol I love it!!

 Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2016 03:52 am
Title: Chapter 6

Good to see that there is something covering the girls beneath the lace. Yup, got his attention. However, I think her words captured his attention more than that bra did. She gave him some really good insight and I think that was what was stunning to him. Although, that lace number DID make a diff, I'm sure. :)

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2016 01:57 am
Title: Chapter 6

I love how Amelle deals Rueben's rude ass!!!  I see that he likes her DD's.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2016 01:12 am
Title: Chapter 5

Amelle just saved Dylan from a knuckle sandwich!! Damn!!  HIllary was just introduced and I already hate her she is so undeserving of affection from any man.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2016 01:10 am
Title: Chapter 4

Gerrie is thirsty and needs to be declawed!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2016 01:04 am
Title: Chapter 5

Whoa. I was digging the conversation between Amelle and Dylan until Hilary came up and I got a whole nother vibe regarding Mr. Chambers. Hils timidity just smacked of being afraid of this f*cker and walking on egg shells so that she's not punished later. And this f*cker seems to have gotten Hilary so that he can rub it in Reuben's face. Yeah man, I got your girl and I have "eggs" every morning with ya girl. What a real prick.

I was so ready to hate Hilary, and I might eventually, but right now, I feel kind of sorry for her. Yeah, Dylan, Amelle can handle yo azz just fine. I'm liking Amelle. She's confident in herself, even if she didn't go to an Ivy league school. She knows who she is and seems to be a good person.

Chica, you've upped the stakes.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2016 08:13 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Amelia is on fire lll

 Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10 2016 05:25 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Just 6 chapters and I'm already hooked. That bra is not for your bosses eyes though... Basically seeing all the goods. 

 Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2016 05:05 pm


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