Great Choices for the cast. I love this story already d84;d84;d84; looking forward to reading more
Reviewer: ch. 2 Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 09 2016 10:36 am
Yes keep going!!!!!
Reviewer: Moonlight Desires Signed [Report This]Date: February 09 2016 09:42 am
I like all the pics of the cast and hope you continue, because your 1st chapter has me hooked.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: February 09 2016 07:23 am
Keep going!
Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed [Report This]Date: February 09 2016 06:36 am
Keep it up, seems very promising!
Reviewer: waterstos Signed [Report This]Date: February 09 2016 05:18 am
Yes please continue. Wonderful start and your character pics are perfect.
Reviewer: reader918 Signed [Report This]Date: February 09 2016 04:13 am
Please keep going. The pictures are on point!
Reviewer: Presh Signed [Report This]Date: February 09 2016 02:52 am
Yes please keep going?! If you're going to write it the way I think you are then it's gonna be amazing...it'll be amazing anyway you write it!!
Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]Date: February 09 2016 02:47 am
LOL @ hoe be gone spray! Can't wait to read more
Reviewer: CrimsonBlaze Signed [Report This]Date: February 09 2016 02:05 am
Love the pics
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: February 09 2016 12:39 am
Please, please give us more...I have three believe me when I say trifling does not fit the bill.
Great start
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2016 12:39 am
please continue
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 08 2016 09:21 pm
Whoa, Reuben. Yeah.
Amelle is real pretty.
Mama Masterson looks like a pistol.
Liking the cast so far.
Good job, Chica.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: February 08 2016 08:37 pm
Hell Yeah, you best continue. This chapter had me cackling.
I like the interaction between the mom and Amelle. I hope that continues. I wonder if Mrs. Masterson has another motive that she isn't telling Amelle about.
Yeah, I like it.
Author's Response:
Hey BellaChica, thanks so much for your reviews. I've never written humour before, so it's a challenge. I'm glad I made you cackle. I'm working on chapter 2, should be posting tomorrow.x
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: February 08 2016 08:35 pm