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Title: Chapter 1

Not sure yet, but it is interesting!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2016 09:13 am
Title: Chapter 1

This sounds pretty interesting. I'm interested to see what perspectives arise throughout this story. Sucks what happened to her mom.

Update soon



Author's Response:

Thanks girl! lol I literally just came up with the idea for this story out of (seemingly) nowhere and I'm already in love with it! Haha. Yes, her mother's murder has a lot to do with her personality. 

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13 2016 10:31 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I am very, very, very intrigued by this!  And I love your writing style.  The flow is smooth and effortless.  Looking forward to reading more.

 

Thank you for sharing!

 

~EJ~



Author's Response:

Gracias! I'm challenging myself to try out different writing styles with this story so I appreciate feedback on that! :)

 Reviewer: ErisJade Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12 2016 06:03 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I don't know yet, you haven't made her a sympathetic character despite  her mother's murder.  Stories with heavy racism in them tend to make me angry. So yeah, I don't about this story.



Author's Response:

Don't worry. Themes of racism won't be that bad outside of dialogue and very little physical action. Also, don't assume I want Namea to be a sympathetic character. I don't ever want any of my characters to come off as perfect or too lovable. I really appreciate your comment though! I always love and appreciate constructive criticism! :)  

 Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 12 2016 03:42 pm
Title: Chapter 1

1 down 7 more to come. I like Namea, she going to be one of my fav's I can tell already. This is going to be interesting giving the fact that we are dealing with Donald Trump right now. Please continue with this story.



Author's Response:

I like her too! Lol. I really enjoy writing her POV as it's challenging in some ways, but fun as hell in others. Ugh. Girl, don't get me started on that troll. -_- 

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2016 04:52 am
Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start. Curious to see where it goes. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! So am I. haha 

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2016 02:22 am


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