Reviews For Hero
Title: Chapter 1

Hi!

Just out of curiosity, (and excuse this question's randomness lol), are you the author of a story that I think was called "The Warrior's Promise"?

It was very popular on this site. It's about an African woman that works as a servant in Europe, and she falls in love with a European man (I think during a war, which is why they were often apart during the story).

I also think that in the beginning of the story, their relationship was more of a love-hate relationship: [I remember a scene from the story, in which she was out at night (I think at the stables, checking on the animals), and he got scared when he discovered that she was gone and assumed that she was trying to run away from him, so he dragged her back to the castle which of course made her mad, but eventually they admitted their love for one another.]

I read it a while ago when I first discovered this site, and I recently tried looking for it on 'The Chamber' as well as 'The Vault', but I can't find it.

I saw your note on your profile page about how you deleted some of your stories, so I figured maybe that would account for why it is that I can't find it.

Thanks for your help!



Author's Response:

hi! i was not the author of that story. i'm forgetting the author's name (because i'm old), but she's an excellent writer. i believe it's Minerva something. she also wrote Over the Hedge. hope that helps! i know she took a bunch of her stories for publication, but i don't know the fate of Warrior's Promise, though i'd love to read it.

Reviewer: guest Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 13 2016 07:33 pm

Title: Chapter 6

What a great ending!!!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2016 05:43 pm

Title: Chapter 6

.......I have no words..... Except....beautiful. Enchanting.  Amazing. Incredible....I mean, HOT DAMN.  

 

This piece was perfection from start to finish.  Gotta love a badass heroine and an equally badass hero.  And together.....BOOM!

Loved every word!!!!!

Reviewer: ErisJade Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2016 07:13 pm

Title: Chapter 6

This was......I should start calling you mama.....you give me life!!!!!

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2016 11:55 am

Title: Chapter 6

Sad story with a happy ending...good job...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2016 06:56 am

Title: Chapter 5

So Gladys was in on the robbery, and she was only trying to help her friend. Gladys sometimes good intentions have deadly consequences. Thanks for the update

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2016 11:59 am

Title: Chapter 4

Harvey and Aria working together, it's about to go down!!. I can't believe they were about to get it on in a bathroom with all this drama going on around them. These two are Hott!!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2016 11:54 am

Title: Chapter 5

Dag!  WTH?!  Was Gladys in on this mess?!?!  Update soon. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2016 10:43 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Wow, this was one very intense chapter. Apparently Gladys thought she was helping Aria find something that she lost and to prove that she was a hero. Wow....just wow. She lost her live for it too. Looking forward to the next chapter. 

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2016 01:24 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Wow, just wow! 

Reviewer: Avapriceless1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2016 01:04 pm

Title: Chapter 5

After Gladys  went limp I kinda felt a cry to the heavens of "POR QUUUUUUEEEEEE!!?????!!???!!" would have been well suited.

Reviewer: SunnySideDown Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2016 05:22 am

Title: Chapter 1

Yes.  More please.

Reviewer: intheroar Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29 2016 01:45 am

Title: Chapter 3

My options are, Gladys planned this to let Aria save the day, or Gladys is furious at these gunmen ruining her chance to hit on her friend. Harvey's awfully sharp to notice that something is off after one quick conversation. 

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28 2016 10:21 pm

Title: Chapter 4

The.Best!!!!!

Reviewer: ErisJade Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2016 03:34 am

Title: Chapter 4

OMG!  I need more--better than Mr & Mrs Smith.

What's up with Glady?  Overly possessive and does she know the gun has no bullets--is she in on the robbery?

 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2016 02:47 am

Title: Chapter 4

We get out of this alive, I'm fucking you into a coma," he whispered

.    Hands down the best pick up line ever!!!!

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2016 11:45 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Another amazing chapter. Harvey and Aria literally are not making it out of that gala without jumping each other on the floor when all is said and done. Gladys better not be involved because Aria will kick her ass. Harvey suspects something as it is. What is Harvey up too? Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2016 11:25 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Harvey is HOOOOTTTT!!!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2016 11:29 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Love the beginning of this story! So is Gladys in on it??? Is that the conclusion Harvey came up with? I can't wait to read on! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26 2016 10:33 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Oh and tell Elizablu she has a great eye for sexy men. Both of those banners are HOTTTT!!!!!!!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2016 10:24 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Girl what!! I love boxing been doing it for years, my workout regimen consist mainly around boxing. Aria is gangster carrying around a Beretta, girl I have a Glock 19 and I'm not scared to use it, and I damn sure know how to use it. My beloved and I go the the shooting range every week. Seems to me cock-blocker Glady is living foul, what type of friend put someone they claim to care about in harms way, knowing what they just experience in the war. It's time to kick that hoe to the curb. Thanks for the updates.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2016 10:19 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Harvey is sexy and Aria is very aware of his attributes, Glady's is a hater. It's about to go down tonight, with some crazy acting hooligans trying to rob people ( they need to get a job!! ).

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2016 10:02 pm

Title: Chapter 1

GIrl...You did it again!!! I'm hooked already. Oh girl Gladys is acting like she has romantic feelings for Aria, or could it be she wants Harvey for herself. Harvey got himself a thirsty spoiled brat on his arm tonight.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2016 09:53 pm

Title: Chapter 3

That was an adrenaline filled chapter...good work...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 26 2016 07:50 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I don't like when grown women like Gladys try dictate the behavior of friends...tell your friend what you don't like and then let it go...Aria isn't a child...Harvey needs to dump his yucky date...good chapter...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 26 2016 07:43 pm



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