A good introduction with the main characters.
Reviewer: Hopieland Signed [Report This]Date: October 02 2016 02:10 pm
Amazing start!
Reviewer: silentwriter Signed [Report This]Date: October 02 2016 07:36 am
Good beginning. I can't wait to read more as you develop these characters.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: October 01 2016 08:41 pm
Alec and his wolf are batshit crazy. This is getting to become an intriguing story
Reviewer: None Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 28 2016 04:04 pm
Wow... That's horrible that they would put a little boy in a damn wall. What happened to their mother? I'm guessing she either died or left them. That's so sad. And mister Alec... About to pounce on the poor girl already. She doesn't even know you and not only are you claiming her but you're about to shift right in front of her and her brother.
Update soon. I like it.
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: September 27 2016 04:44 am
Excellent work!!
Update soon!!
Reviewer: SnowFever Signed [Report This]Date: September 26 2016 07:01 pm
Don't be nervous. This story is great. I love it. I haven't read a wolf story here and this sounds great. I would love to see a mating, but let's be real--not in front of the youngin' big cockblocker there. I love Ryan by the way---jus the whole "I'll be back faster than you can abacadabra." made my heart palpitate. What happened to Ryan? Was their father pounding on him? Where is her grandmother? Is she dead? How old is Renee? She seems young---maybe in her teens or something or early 20s? Alec? I need to learn more about him? Any wannabe mates in the way? Where is his pack?
Hey can you upload some pictures of how you think these characters look? I would appreciate some visuals. Again, just a great piece of work.
Oh, last question...did they end up in the same motel room? How did that happen?
The only thing I'd like is a translatin of the language he was speaking to the wolf. Also how does the wolf and him work---it seems as though the wolf in him is like a demon. I would also like to see more detail and longer in future chapters.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the gracious review. I'll try not to be nervous, but I'm just a nervous person, in general,lol. As for their father and grandmother who is in fact still alive. You will learn more as the story progresses. Renee is 22 years old, and Alec does have some mystery behind him that aching to be revealed.
Yes, I will upload a visual of the characters, I'm just having a hard time finding some that fits my image of them. Renee and Alec aren't in the same motel room. They are in the lobby area.
Uh, hopefully, I've answered all your questions, and I promise the future chapters will be longer and more detailed, and to include the translations.
Thank you for reading :)
Reviewer: vaberella Signed [Report This]Date: September 26 2016 12:08 am
Oooh a werewolf story this shall be interesting. So far I'm completely hooked. Please continue😊
Reviewer: Pickle Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 24 2016 07:26 am
Love it!! More please!! Hope they get to know each other slowly, I bet Alec has a secret too.
Reviewer: Loop Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 23 2016 06:13 pm
Please continue i would like to see where the story goes.
Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]Date: September 23 2016 01:16 pm
Great start! Can't wait for the update. It would be nice if it is a little longer.
Reviewer: SweetCoCo76 Signed [Report This]Date: September 23 2016 12:36 pm
I'm looking forward to reading this story.
Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 23 2016 03:48 am
Yummy story.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 23 2016 12:52 am
I'm excited to read more! 😄
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: September 22 2016 11:45 pm
Yaaaaaassssss!!!!! I am so ready to get involved with this story. It's off to a fantastic start. Great job, I'm loving it so far.
Reviewer: kinkyncurly Signed [Report This]Date: September 22 2016 11:19 pm
By all means, please continue.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: September 22 2016 10:30 pm
I really like it and I can't wait for the next update, so please continue. Great Job!!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: September 22 2016 07:01 pm
I am intrigued. Hope the next chapter is soon. Good job.
Reviewer: madison Signed [Report This]Date: September 22 2016 04:30 pm
I'm intrigued. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: September 22 2016 03:16 pm
Can't wait to read more!!
Reviewer: mekaky Signed [Report This]Date: September 22 2016 01:32 pm
Good start! Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Drea Signed [Report This]Date: September 22 2016 09:48 am
Great start, can't wait to find out what happens. Just a small thing but do you think you could leave a translation in the end notes?
Reviewer: roimata Signed [Report This]Date: September 22 2016 08:36 am
I'm your first review lol. I like your story so far. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Reviewer: Precious Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 22 2016 06:57 am