Aurora got a little sassy mouth on her... She should be punish. Why do I get the feeling that Sean and Luther when they become teenagers feelings for Aurora will change to something romantic, putting friend against friend. Thanks for the update MP!Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 20 2017 07:33 pm
Wow, poor Rory, punished for standing up for herself. Her mum should have clapped back at the church woman who said all that crap to Rory, it was church woman that was in the wrong. And those girls in her school, I had to double check the year that this chapter was set in because I kept wondering if she accidentally time traveled back to the 1950s.Reviewer: K Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 20 2017 04:17 pm
Why is Rory hating on her nephew?
She's at an age where she's figthing gender sterotypes. Everyone assumes all women and girls love babies and being maternal while Rory is the complete opposite of that. She dosesn't really hate her nephew she just can't understand what all the fuss is about.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: November 20 2017 01:12 am
Ok, this story is interesting, especially the childhood flashbacks. I wonder what must have happened to Rory wofr her to drop out of school and all. I reeallly hope it's not just cause she had a crush on Sean and then when he left she just lost her way too....This would be very...ugh! Also the whole "stripping ="whoring"" thing is very unbecoming. I get that Rory has serious self-esteem issues, but I wish there was a different voice that wouldn't demean being a stripper or even a sex worker like that...Reviewer: RedHobo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2017 11:51 pm
Aurora was a tomboy😆 so was I growing up😆 I think everyone had that one house in their neighborhood where all the kid were afraid😨 to venture near😃oh I wish I was little again😆 I'm digging this update 😆Reviewer: Tre Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31 2017 07:44 pm
I like Rory and Sean costume but Luther's not so much. We are taking the kids Trunk or treating at the church tonight and they don't allow no scary or demonic costume's, plus we are feeding the families dinner so no cooking tonight. This was a great update MP! Honey you have fun tonight yourself.
I tried to look up the most popular Halloween costume trends of that year and Batman and Ghostface were pretty popular. However if you would like it to be more kid friendly I can rewite it to have Luther be Robin, a Power Ranger, or a different Pokemon and have up by at least this weekend.Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31 2017 05:11 pm
I know how her mother feels, because I wouldn't change a thing about my life either. I would've kept my same number, my same house, my same hair, girl... I would've kept my same panties if that means my child could find me again. And I do believe Rory was running from something that she didn't have to run from, which is judgement. Her family don't care if she a stripper as long as she's safe, healthy and happy. To each his own. I love the name Jacquelyn by the way. Thanks for the update and I hope all is well.Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28 2017 02:56 pm