Hmm. Cal didn't cut off Rusty for a flimsy reason, that much I gather. As for Georgette....Sugar had my sympathies at that moment.
I felt bad for Sugar has I wrote it, but Miles sure as hell got a kick out of it.Reviewer: Leo the Yardie Chick Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2018 03:48 am
Hmm, so does some of Sugar's issues involve her uncle? Sugar seems to be caught up in this idea of being perfect and seeing her parents and maybe sisters and Sully's relationships as being like that too. I'm kinda hoping it's just something that happened between her parents and uncle that will show that's it's not as perfect of a relationship as she thinks it is. Not having a perfect relationship isn't bad as long as both parties make an effort to work on it and be respectful and loving to each other. I hope that despite her a husband, Sugar sees and understands this and uses it to build the relationship she needs with Miles. Sorry for the long review, love this and your other stories.
I really love your interpretation of Sugar's relationship views. You're right. She does have this fascination of being in a perfect relationship. She always compares others' relationships against her own, seeing perfections while avoiding each relationships' flaws. Also, don't apologize for writing long reviews. I love them!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 29 2018 11:40 pm
Girl give me more. I am loving the chase. I am so Sugar so I cant wait to read the rest.
More is on the way. I am on a roll!Reviewer: Carmel Beauty Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 29 2018 10:26 am
I love the story and the update. You have done a wonderful job of weaving this take. The characters' interactions and growth throughout the story are evident. I cannot wait to see what else you have in store for us. Keep up the great work. Props to your mentors for helping you express your thoughts and ideas.
You are an amazing mentor! <3Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2018 05:32 pm
I do a happy dance with each update! Waiting eagerly for the final/published version. Hopefully you publish on iBooks or Smashwords. If you do a paperback version, I might need to get a copy of that too.
Thank you so much! That means so much to me that you think I should publish this. I am really considering this.Reviewer: lgsl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 28 2018 03:48 am
So, something happened when Sugar was younger and it has something to do with Uncle Rusty. Whatever happened was devastating and Sully was there. That's probably why he's so intense and Sugar's self-esteem problems. Come with it! READY for the next chapter, I can feel the excitement.
These next few updates will be jam-packed.Reviewer: maine956 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2018 03:31 am
Something about the sitting on the lap of Rusty is not sitting right with me. I hope it means nothing, but personal experience with family and their secrets and still being allowed around family makes me uneasy. I hope I’m far off track. Either way. I love this story and I’m rooting for Shug and Miles.
All to be revealed in due time. Keep watching the hints.Reviewer: Eclectic Charms Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2018 02:33 am
I think it went well. Why would Sugar be worried about Miles getting along with her father when they knew Miles even before she did and they hit it off. Its all good!
Wonder what the secret is with Calvin and his brother. Is it money or a girl? Georgette possibly? Cant wait!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This] That is why Rochelle and Katrina teased her about spying on Miles because he was Cal's friend before she even knew him. Sugar was worried because it's the first time she has ever brought a man that wasn't Lance to a family event. So, she was nervous regardless. LOL
That is why Rochelle and Katrina teased her about spying on Miles because he was Cal's friend before she even knew him. Sugar was worried because it's the first time she has ever brought a man that wasn't Lance to a family event. So, she was nervous regardless. LOL
Date: June 28 2018 01:00 am
Why do I get the feeling that Rusty’s appearance is connected to Sully and Sugar???
All will be revealed soon!Reviewer: Chapter 22 - Bittersweet Past Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 27 2018 08:12 pm
I need a miles in real life. This book is becoming a favorite.
I am so happy that you are enjoying the book (and Miles)!Reviewer: ShortybyNature Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 27 2018 08:09 pm
Thank you for slowly undoing Sugar's layers. Looking forward to the journey as they get back... As always, I love Miles and her together. 🙏🏽
Thank you so much for coming on this journey! They are increasingly becoming one of my favorite couples I've ever written. I am glad that you are enjoying them as much as I do.Reviewer: Poppy Velour Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2018 06:20 pm
I love this book...families often don’t see or understand the damage done unintentionally by a failure to allow one of their own to just be who they are...Miles does this for Sugar even what her family doesn’t...
These next few chapters will explore why Sugar is the way that she is and it definitely involves her family. Lance definitely contributed, but there is a lot more to the story. I hope you stay tuned.Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2018 12:49 am