In the words of that late great musical genius named PRINCE....
You SEXY MUTHA F@&$-#!!!
I love the verbal foreplay!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love writing playful conversations. It's my specialty. ;)
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed
[Report This]Date: July 27 2017 03:49 am
Introducing the sexy mystery man, with tatts! Oh yeah!
Author's Response:
I hope you enjoy!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: July 27 2017 12:17 am
Shugah(that's how country people pronounce it)...should've sent them both a drink with antifreeze in it....She could name it, 2 Dead Bitches!
But that just shows how much class she has, because she did not go off on them for being at her restaurant or him claiming it's success!
Me, I would have poisoned them somehow.....just sayin'
Author's Response:
Sugar has to restrain herself from doing something to them because she knows they would do something to damage her hardworking.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: July 26 2017 11:45 pm
Interesting, I know Sugar's story is going to be good!
Author's Response:
Keep an eye out for more updates!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: July 26 2017 11:23 pm
LOL it's already too late for Sugar ...in a Good way. Chef is already "under her skin" , and I like it. I want them to have fun and I don't mind the serious convos either. They have both been through a Lot in their lives so it's time for them to have some FUN.Can't wait to read more
Author's Response:
Chef and Sugar have a wild journey ahead of them! I hope you enjoy it alongside them!
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 26 2017 09:25 pm
Just finished both updates and they were Great.
I love the fact that Chef is not letting Sugar Runaway, that something she did thoughout her marriage... and Chef is a Marine, they don't know the meaning of the word Quit. its going to be so good to see Sugar try to pull away from Chef and him not letting her.
Hurry with more.
Author's Response:
You are so right. Marines don't know the meaning of the word quit. It's not in their vocabulary at all, which is a perfect quality for Chef when it comes to a stubborn woman like Sugar.
Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 26 2017 09:14 pm
Amazing chapter but you already knew that! I'm so excited for them! Chef is definitely going to push the boundaries of Sugars rules and I can't wait to see how she handles that. Can't wait for the next chapter. Just waiting for her shitty ex to show his face and I hope it's while she's with Chef.
Author's Response:
You know Chef is going to push and push inch by inch until Sugar breaks down. She's gonna be gooey melted sugar.
Reviewer: MiaIsabella1 Signed [Report This]Date: July 26 2017 05:06 pm
Yaaaaaaaaaasssssss Love these two! Hopefully Chef can teach Lance a lesson!
Author's Response:
Lance and Chef will cross paths in the near future!
Reviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]Date: July 26 2017 03:23 pm
Not that I don't love my hubby...but CHEF...Lawd Have Mercy...More please
Author's Response:
LMAO!
Reviewer: Stories Signed [Report This]Date: July 26 2017 01:01 pm
He's going to defy in the most delicious way and she's not going to notice or she will not even notice and let it happen
Author's Response:
Date: July 26 2017 11:56 am
Wonderful, wonderful update
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: July 26 2017 05:38 am
Lord, help me! Very good update. Fantastic!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: July 26 2017 05:27 am
Beautiful chapter...loved it...Chef is just who/what Sugar needs...excited for more...
Author's Response:
I am so happy that you enjoyed the chapter! Chef is exactly what Sugar needs.
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: July 26 2017 05:12 am
Sugar is so judgmental of Chef...she should get knocked off her high horse...Chef will be good for her...
Author's Response:
She is very judgmental, but she is also very skeptical of Chef's interest in her. She doesn't trust any man right now, but she'll learn the hard way.
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: July 26 2017 04:54 am
We all know that the moment Chef puts it on her, she's a goner.
All jokes aside, I was a little surprised when Sugar was so open with Chef so soon. Then again, sometimes your spirit knows someone is trustworthy before your heart and brain do. Chef comes on strong and with great certainity, but I like that he's applying the brakes a bit for Sugar. Seeing their relationship progress will be quite a ride.
Author's Response:
I think an internal reason for Sugar telling Chef something so painful and intimate is because she wanted to see how he would react to it. She wanted to see if his opinion changed of her and if he was even still interested in her considering her ferility issues.
Reviewer: Leo the Yardie Chick Signed [Report This]Date: July 26 2017 03:38 am
I love your writing, it's so good. The character development is awesome, and I love that Sugar it has given Chef
a chance.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Sugar and Chef have so much growing to do separately and together.
Reviewer: HumorMe Signed [Report This]Date: July 26 2017 03:07 am
You can feel the romance between Sugar and Chef. She's scared because of what happened in her marriage. I think he's heard about her from the mother and father as they frequent his restaurant and have become friends. The romance coming is oozing off the page. I LOVE IT!!
You made a very good guess about Chef hearing about her from her mother and father. ;) except he only heard of her as Magnolia, not Sugar.
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: July 26 2017 02:43 am
I need to find my own Chef!!! Whew!
Author's Response:
I wish had a factory. :(
Reviewer: Drea Signed [Report This]Date: July 26 2017 02:37 am
😁😆😁😆😁!!!!!!
Author's Response:
<3
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: July 26 2017 02:36 am
Lol I'm laughing because Sugar doesn't know what she just got herself into. She's wifey now and she doesn't even know it :)! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
She is wifey! Lmao
Reviewer: AmmaWem Signed [Report This]Date: July 26 2017 02:29 am
And yes, glad he's on the level and not some goon running around!
Author's Response:
I'd rather him be a sexy boxer. ;3
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: July 26 2017 02:22 am
Why do I think Chef is the one who really got over here? I think he's cased Sugar enough to know that her conditions are probably something that doesn't really fit what he's observed of her. He's ensured the wooing by making sure he's the only man in her life. Breaks her down that much faster and more complete. Homeboy let her know he's found wifey now, whether she knows it or not. Its smart on his part and she agreed...lol! Doesn't ven know what she's even done yet...lol!
Goodness! I'm all up in this story now!! Love it!
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: July 26 2017 02:16 am
Miss Sugar you might not know it yet but you ain't bout that no strings attached non commitment sex life. Trying to resist falling for Chef is futile.
Author's Response:
She'll learn the hard way.
Reviewer: Aiwen Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 26 2017 02:00 am
Yass Chef!!! Sugar give him a chances please
Author's Response:
She'll be stubborn, but Chef will get his chances one way or another. Lol
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: July 26 2017 01:36 am
Suagr will defy her own rules as she is already real attracted to Chef. Chef wants him some Suga and he will work his way further into her heart. I am team Chef. Suga is still young enough for a baby and CHef could give her a couple. There is reason why your pregnancies endedin miscarriages Suga, Lance wasn't wss not the man to give you babies. Lance never really loved you, but Chef can give you all of the love and connectons(emotiona) your heart desires.
Author's Response:
When it comes to a man like Chef, any woman would break the rules. ;)
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 26 2017 01:19 am