Brillant!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks hon!
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 20 2020 01:48 am
Wow, it seems like there might be something there. I was kinda hoping Abby earned another lesson, but oh well. LOL! I can't wait for the next chapter, keep posting please.
Great Job!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2020 08:01 pm
Elias is growing on me... He's a keeper‘Abby's life is about to go from dull to exciting😀 Nice!
Author's Response:
Lol...he knows what he's doing. Abby doesn't quite know what has hit her! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: April 15 2020 01:42 pm
Well .......that was hot and heavy!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm trying to write good scenes without focusing on the hot and heavy too much though...
Reviewer: Kkpeter Signed [Report This]Date: April 14 2020 06:51 am
I love this story. It reminds me of an episode of Criminal Minds that I was always intrigued by (minus the murder of the parents). I will continue to look forward to updates.
Author's Response:
Oh...that sounds intriguing! I will have to hunt for the episode...Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 13 2020 08:23 am
The investment I place in stalking for updates of this story is a testament to your wonderful writing style! This is dark fiction and you have posted trigger warnings throughout, so if people don't care for this type of fiction, please don't read it! Please continue your story, I also want to know about the other wives and how long this has been going on! Loving Abby and Eli!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! This is certainly a darker story and while it'll never get too crazy, it will blur a line or two.
Reviewer: Drea Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2020 03:51 am
I love it!! I am checking every hour for an update!!! I hope you continue this story becuase your writing is amazing. This is a nice break from all the fluff in most romances. I am rooting for Elias and Abby!!! You have the appropriate warnings and people that are too sensitive about a fictional story should just stay away!! Keep writing and showing your creativity. Everything is not for everbody!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! It is indeed a dark fic that will explore and blur some lines. I don't want to trigger anyone though. I will do my best to keep writing!
Reviewer: PurpleIsBest Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 12 2020 09:59 pm
I'm right there conflicted with Abby. This story drums up some strong emotions tied to all different type of places. I'll continue reading because the story is interesting. I don't know if I should root for the couple and hope something healthy forms, or root for Abby's escape. Confused! LOL! I can't wait for another chapter. Please continue.
Author's Response:
Yes I am as well...I am trying to stay true to her motivation. Stay tuned and thanks for reading!
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: April 12 2020 08:12 pm
i thought the story was cute but it turned dark.. more then anything it’s hard to stomach reading this story. It’s gross and creepy.. nothing attractive about being kidnapped and assaulted. This shouldn’t be marked as a love story.. white men are already crazy fucks. Nothing about this is entertaining and I love your writing style and the way you write it’s amazing but like if ole girl don’t end up killing him and escaping then I don’t see the point. It’s just romanticized Stockholm syndrome.. kidnapping and assault shouldn’t be seen as attractive romantic opportunities because the captor is handsome ‘
Author's Response:
I understand... I had planned to explore more of those themes as the chapter continued. Thank you for sharing your opinion...
Reviewer: I’m not finding this pleasant. Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 12 2020 06:16 pm
Elias is really patient for being so crazy... He tries to make it seem as if this "snatching a wife" thing is normal. How many generations have done this? You would never know if the women in the area are actually in love you or if its an extreme form of Stockholm Syndrome.
Abby is so confused. She liked him before all of this happened and now she doesn't know what to do.
Author's Response:
Good assessment...They have definitely been doing this for a while. With the women being in love or Stockholm Syndrome... I think it's a weird blending of the two...I plan to explore that more in upcoming chapters...
Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: April 12 2020 02:17 pm
This chapter is amazing. Your writing leap from this screen, the chemitry between Abby and Elias is stunning. Elias is one step closer to having Abby heart. Brillant writing!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I have been learning as I go...Abby is definitely conflicted...
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 12 2020 05:54 am
I want more! This was not enough, LOL!! Great job, I am really glad you post again, I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm wondering how Elias expects to get Abby to get on board with 'new role' on the mountain.
Please post more soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am trying to be consistent but also true to the characters. Stay tuned!
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2020 05:51 pm
Ok ... I had to read this over ! Damn that was good writing he flip the script now she thinks maybe this situation is not so bad after all . Heck it sounded good to me too ! Bravo
Author's Response:
She's definitely very conflicted. Thanks again!
Reviewer: Kkpeter Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2020 02:32 pm
Damn Elias ! You got a girl over here ready to move to the country ASAP !
Great chapter
Author's Response:
Haha! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Kkpeter Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2020 01:15 pm
Eli is crazy!! She should have kept on going after eating.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2020 11:22 am
He still crazy.
Author's Response:
Yep...Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2020 12:01 am
Outstanding writing, and I enjoy how you described Abby feeling. Can please have another chapter because I have been stalking this story and re-reading since you post.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the compliment! I am glad you're enjoying...Just stay tuned. I am trying to be consistent with updates while writing somewhat decently...
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 06 2020 07:02 pm
I understand this story may not be for everyone, but I check every day for an update. There are so many questions I need answers to, so can't wait for next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you...And understandably it's not. Each piece will fall into place. Next chapter should be up soon.
Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: Drea Signed [Report This]Date: April 05 2020 12:58 am
This is well written and I had to sleep on my response and I even fought off a mosquito in my dream...heard the buzzing and everything.
I tried to come around to his excessive spanking of her and insisting on her calling him Daddy. I finally came to the conclusion that I just did not like this Chapter. He really shoud have taken the cop's advice and explained to Abby on why he said he was keeping her. He coud have wooed her to his side.
Then to put her to bed like she was a child after punishing her...came off as creepy perv, and I am sure you were not trying to give us this impression.
If Abby had any sense, she would roll out of that bed, put pillows under the cover, and get out of that house with her purse. This is some Stepford Wives country style stuff and I wouldn't trust that woman from the Library, either...if not born there why stick around? Unless she wants to be one of the lucky ones.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review! I was trying to give off a slight impression of creepiness as Abby is "new" to all this and it is from her POV. Unfortunately he has her stuff and to leave without knowing where she's going only to have to "do it all again". Good analysis about the woman at the library... Sorry the spanking and such aren't to your liking. I may use it again...so be warned... Thanks again for the read!
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2020 08:46 pm
This is some creepy shit.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading...
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 03 2020 05:41 pm
Thus whole town is creepy.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 03 2020 05:36 pm
If he's a Narine maybe he isn't a sex offender?
Author's Response:
No...He's not a sex offender...Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 03 2020 05:27 pm
He did something to Abby 's car.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 03 2020 05:22 pm
Wow.. I didn't see the turn happening such as this one. I'm not sure how I feel about Elias now, on one 'hand' (lol) I hate him for what he is doing and hope Abby gets out before it gets worse. But on the other, I like their chemistry. Now it's about to get spanking hot, LOL!
Great Job, very different and well written. Please post soon, I can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Yeah...The tracks went straight off a cliff with this one. I hate him too and so does Abby...Well she's conflicted. Thank you so much for the read and review!
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: April 03 2020 02:41 pm
I wanted to give this story a try, despite the warning 'dubcon', which I always hope is not what I fear it is... And then I am proved wrong. Ugh. I can't see any way this story can turn out other than romanticizing abuse/violence against women/rape. I just can't. I hope I am wrong. Really. But I can't chance it... Bye.
Author's Response:
I apologize for the story making you uncomfortable...
Reviewer: RedHobo Signed [Report This]Date: April 02 2020 11:06 pm