DAMN PLEASE LET ALICIA GET SOME BACKBONE BECAUSE COUSIN OR NOT THAT BITCH WOULD HAVE BEEN CANCELED LONG AGO.. KEEPIT COMING!!!
Author's Response: lol I will keep writing, Im glad youre enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: May 31 2009 10:59 am
Oh my Kandice is a jealous witch!!!! Loved the update. This stir is getting better each update.
Author's Response: lol thanks, Im glad you like it
[Report This]Date: May 31 2009 10:52 am
i like this story...more, more!!
Author's Response: Im glad you like it. Reviewer: vmck Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31 2009 05:27 am
I'm really enjoying this story, and I love the fact that the male lead is Asian! Can't wait until you update again and I hope they can be a bit longer...I gotta know what happens!
Author's Response: Im glad you like it....will update soon.
Date: May 31 2009 05:02 am
Kandice pissed me off so bad I wanted to go thru the damn screen and beat her monkey ass. Excuse the language but that anorexic bitch pissed me the hell off. Great update and it will be Kandice that gets everything she deserves from current wrong doings and past. Waiting for more... =)
Author's Response: Im glad you like it, more to come
[Report This]Date: May 31 2009 04:47 am
TOFLMAO at that stoopid Kandance...not every man wants a skank ho. The fact that she threw up on herself was nastys as hell. Thanks
Author's Response: lol no problem.
[Report This]Date: May 31 2009 04:45 am
My review? I hate that *B*! People like her get what they get in life!
Author's Response: lol and yes they do
Date: May 31 2009 04:38 am
Oh my her cousin is off the hook. I hope she gets whst she deserves. I hope she comes back crawling on her knees to Alicia.
Author's Response: lol She will get what she deserves. Im sure Alicia is a forgiving woman though.
[Report This]Date: May 31 2009 04:12 am
Oooh, oooh, oooh, g-dammitt...let me cool down a minute...whew....I think I got it under control now...ooh, the wainch (and I meant "wainch" not wench)...the nerve of that heffa...jealous much...and whether or not Alicia realize it or not...that's exactly what Kandice is...envious as hell of her...yes, she's conceited...and some fool has blown her mind and swelled her pathetic head up...but the truth is she's just a pitiful shallow thing...who's self-esteem comes from her outer exterior...but she an ugly soul...
So any man that doesn't fall down on his knees and worship at the Church of Kandice is either gay or crazy, huh...loser...be gone, witch...good riddance...
Nick is a gem...and he's ALICIA'S GEM...a true gentleman...and Ms. Thang only wishes she could have the same...word of advice to Alicia...stay clear of wainches with evil intentions...I hope Kandice gets hers and soon!!!
Great update...though it got me heated...can't wait to read more...
Author's Response: Im glad my story can make you so emotional =D Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous
[Report This]Date: May 31 2009 02:09 am
I just discovered this sweet little story. I want to read more. I felt bad for Alicia having such a witch for a friend , well actually she is not a friend actually!! I hope she can let Kandice go once and for all becuase no real friend would ever say such cruel things to a friend!!
I like how her and Nick's relationship is beginning. He seems like a very sweet guy and any guys that lets a girl rattle on and finds it cute is worth getting to know..I cannot wait for more! Good job sweetie!!
Author's Response: Thank you. Kandice will get hers soon enough Reviewer: neneburge Signed
[Report This]Date: May 31 2009 02:02 am
Kandice is a bitch and she wonders why Nick didn't want her stank ass. She needs to grow the hell up.
I love your pics.
Author's Response:
lol true, im glad you like them.
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: May 31 2009 01:57 am
Kandice need to be removed for Alicia life because she is poison. I also think she is jeolious that Alicia is smart, funny, and knows what she wants in her life.
TY for the update so soon.
Author's Response:
Though we would like it to be the end of Kandice's game, she will prover herself to be a problem once more.
Reviewer: Dimples Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 31 2009 01:43 am
Kandice is a poor looser and I am glad Alicia gave Nick her number. Loved chapter 2. Keep it coming i am going to love this story.
Author's Response: Im glad you like it Ill keep writing =D
[Report This]Date: May 30 2009 08:18 am
I love it so far. I love BW/AM I/R stories. Please keep writing I am looking forward to where you take this story.
Kandice is going to be trouble. What is it with some thin women who think a man only wants a bone; instead of a surlion.
Author's Response: lol, Im glad you like it Reviewer: Dimples Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 30 2009 07:31 am
The cousin is off the hook. Ilike Nick and Alicia keep it coming please.
Author's Response: I will thank you for your wonderful reviews.
[Report This]Date: May 30 2009 04:52 am
Dang I like this story so far. I love that she doesn't know how attractive she is. Thanks for another great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review =D Im glad you like my story!
[Report This]Date: May 30 2009 04:47 am
WOW! Aint that a trip huh? This type of jealousy coming from her family, her blood like that? This is going to be interesting to see how Alicia and Kandice handle each other from now on.
Author's Response: Oh Alicia will handle Kandice soon enough *Muwahaha*
Date: May 30 2009 03:22 am
Why does Alicia have to look after a grown woman. Isn't she capable of taking care of herself, better yet if she has all of these guys who want her why didn't she ask one of them to take her home.
Author's Response: Lol I agree but family is family. =( Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 30 2009 01:56 am
DAMN WHAT AN SKANKY BITCH KANDICE IS. WHY DOES ALICIA FEELS RESPONSIBLE FOR THE HOE. I LOVED HOW NICK MADE IT CLEAR AS GLASS THAT HE WAS INTERESTED IN ONLY ALICIA. THAT DAMN HOE KANDICE IS DELUSIONAL AND UP TO NO GOOD.. LOVE THIS STORY, THANK YOU FOR UPDATING. FOREVER A FAN!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Glad you like it. Ill try updating as much as I can.
[Report This]Date: May 30 2009 01:39 am
Someone needs to beat Kandice down, preferably Alicia. It makes no sense that she lets Kandice talk about her that way and I'm assuming their family does the same. Promise me, she has a beat down coming.
Author's Response: lol Imm promise that Kandice will get hers =D
[Report This]Date: May 30 2009 12:57 am
i thought kandice was going to be a cool cousin, but i see she's just a jealous skank. i feel she's gonna be a head ache. great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: May 30 2009 12:09 am
i love it. raven is one of my faves. cant wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: lol Same , and Ill keep writing!
[Report This]Date: May 30 2009 12:05 am
Kandice is something else. How can she not be happy for her own cousin??? Anyhow, I love the instant chemistry between Nick and Alica!
You are off to a great start!
Author's Response: Thankies...lol Kandice's time will come =O Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29 2009 11:15 pm
Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you! =D
Date: May 29 2009 11:07 pm
Kandace is a real piece of work...tell me why in heaven's name would Alicia even want to hang around with someone so conceited...I know she's family and all that...but puhlease...Alicia is a better one than me...'cause Ms. Thang would have been footin' back home after being so out-and-out rude to me and the guy who had been nothing but attentive and nice to me...outer beauty is only skin deep...and doesn't she know that real beauty lies beneath...and beauty is in the eye of the beholder...reminds me of that movie Shallow Hal...where the guy was hypnotized to see only the inner beauty of people...lucky for Alicia...her potential new man needed no psychologist's intervention...now run tell that Kandace!!!
Good story...waiting for the next update...
Author's Response: Thank you, I will do my best to keep you interested! Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous
[Report This]Date: May 29 2009 10:36 pm