Title: What happens in Vegas!

Wife so they got so drunk they got married..that is too cute!! 

Ok when they sober up it is going to be crazy!! First thing she married a stranger. Secondly she gave her virginity to a stranger? Thirdly they did not use a condom!! This is going to be wild!! And he does not seem like the marrying kind eithe..so I cannot wait for the update..good job sweetie!



Author's Response: lol @ thats too cute, Hope to keep you interested!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2009 03:46 am

Title: What happens in Vegas!

You're kidding right?  Of course you need to continue!!!!  This is some grade A material you working with here...LOL.  I'm hooked.

Author's Response: Lmao thank you , Im glad your hooked and plan to keep you hooked. =P

Reviewer: Vie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2009 03:20 am

Title: What happens in Vegas!

yes, please continue!!! please!!

Author's Response: I will thank you for the review~

Reviewer: vmck Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2009 03:07 am

Title: What happens in Vegas!

great start i think u should continue =)

Author's Response: I will, thank you!

Reviewer: kell369 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2009 03:00 am

Title: What happens in Vegas!

Bravo for writing another fantastic story. Please update.



Author's Response: Glad you like it, thank you

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2009 02:51 am

Title: What happens in Vegas!

You should definitely continue. this is a great start!

Author's Response: Thank you I think I will!

Reviewer: Adrian Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 08 2009 02:48 am

Title: What happens in Vegas!

Definitely continue.  So far this is a really good story and I want to read more.  I would even love it if she got pregnant, making it even more difficult for them to try to get a divorce or annulment once the alcohol wears off. 

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review~

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2009 02:20 am

Title: What happens in Vegas!

Uh oh.  I can't wait for the morning after.  Will they remember before or after they read about it in the paper? This is going to be fun :-)

Author's Response: lol the morning after will be great, next update shall be interesting!

Reviewer: Ashauna77 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2009 02:12 am

Title: What happens in Vegas!

Enjoyed the first chapter! Yes...please continue!

Author's Response: glad you like it, I will!

Reviewer: Kay Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2009 02:07 am

Title: What happens in Vegas!

HELL YEAH, Today would be good. that is all

Author's Response: lol! we shall see

Reviewer: monique32 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2009 01:42 am

Title: What happens in Vegas!

Oh snap, can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: lol hope that means you like it =D. thank you fhr the review!

Reviewer: Shameka Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2009 01:30 am

Title: What happens in Vegas!

Oh, snap...that must have been one helluva night...married...to a sexy stranger...and the marriage consummated I'm assuming without protection...oh sh*t is right...great start Sade...girl, do yo' thang again!!!

I know I'm being greedy and whatnot...but when can I expect another update...hmmm...



Author's Response: lol Yeah you said it, can you say "what the hell did I do last night" when the fog clears in the morning we shall see how it plays out. the beginning of the week is a little crazy for me but ill see what I can do.

Author's Response: lol Yeah you said it, can you say "what the hell did I do last night" when the fog clears in the morning we shall see how it plays out. the beginning of the week is a little crazy for me but ill see what I can do.

Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2009 01:08 am

Title: What happens in Vegas!

Hell Yeah, continue! :D This is a great story.

Author's Response: lol I will!

Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2009 12:54 am

Title: What happens in Vegas!

Oh My God.  This was a excellent start.  Please Please continue this story.  Cant't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Glad you like it, I will do my best to update.

Reviewer: Raven Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 08 2009 12:53 am

Title: What happens in Vegas!

I like this to. You keep tossing out these good story.

TY and update any of your story soon.



Author's Response: lol Glad you think so was worried about this one.

Reviewer: Dimples Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 08 2009 12:40 am

Title: What happens in Vegas!

Please do continue; I need to see the morning after and, not trying to prempt you, but I wanna read the headlines too.

 

 



Author's Response: lol You know there will be some interesting Headlines.

Reviewer: Great Beginning... Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 08 2009 12:37 am

Title: What happens in Vegas!

Very Nice start. More please.

Author's Response: Glad you like it, I will try to update as much as possible

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 08 2009 12:37 am

Title: What happens in Vegas!

I like the idea of this story, two drunk stranger meeting getting drunk and marrying.  However, I would like more detail on why she so willing to get drunk and have sex with a stranger and give up her vigrginity.  Also, why was he wanting to get drunk at the bar.  Longer chapeter or prologue who be nice.

Author's Response:

I thought the summery would give a glimpse into what he did and why he would want to drown his conscience by getting drunk...and also tell why she wanted to do something out of the ordinary..

Reviewer: nicnac100 Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 08 2009 12:07 am

Title: What happens in Vegas!

Please continue. 

Author's Response: I will, thank you for the review~

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 08 2009 12:05 am

Title: What happens in Vegas!

HELL YEAH PLEASE CONTINUE THIS WONDERFUL STORY IT IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Lol Glad you like it!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2009 11:49 pm

Title: What happens in Vegas!

Omigod...you totally have to continue. I have to know how it ends and whats up with "good night wife?" I'd say its an excellent start!



Author's Response: lol  as for the wife comment, and when she said lets do it she ment marrying him.the $200 paid for the wedding, =D thank you for the review.

Reviewer: storygirl10 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2009 11:43 pm

Title: What happens in Vegas!

What a interesting start. Love the cast characters. Please continue, look forward to reading more of this story.

Author's Response: Glad you like it, was a little worried but so far so good.

Reviewer: paw00 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2009 11:32 pm

Title: What happens in Vegas!

Keep Going!! You are doing a good job with this. I am really interested in where you are going to take this story. I'll be waiting on the next chapter.

Author's Response: lol I will do my best to keep you interested! Glad you like it.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 07 2009 11:24 pm

Title: What happens in Vegas!

I like this lot,please continue.

 

 

 

 



Author's Response: Glad you like it, I will.

Reviewer: yummy954 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2009 11:12 pm

Title: What happens in Vegas!

OMG!!!! How can you even ask if you should continue.  HELL YES!!! Please continue I want more.  This is great so far and u used Jennifer Hudson to depict Grace wonderful choice I love her to death.

They are married and he is/was her first this is a wonderful start they did not seem to be too drunk and he seems to be aware that he married her. Girl I want more.

Please continue and update soon! 



Author's Response: lol I think I shall then, Im glad you like it and I like her as well, I found her to be a perfect choice in this story.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2009 11:12 pm



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