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Title: Party!

How i LOVE this story! Eugh Rina is so thirsty! Anyway great chap! update soon i hope?!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Ill do my best to update soon.

 Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2013 01:20 am
Title: Party!

Just found this story and love it. Please update soon. I like how Grace is a good person but she will not let you cross her. Please let her bring Rina and Sara to her knees. I hope the coaches wife and Grace become good friends. Love this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Ill do my best to update soon.

 Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17 2013 12:52 am
Title: Party!

Glad to see this story back.

Rina and all those women in his life need to flee...

Great update



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter.

 Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 17 2013 12:11 am
Title: Party!

Thank God my story is back!  DON't stay so long Sade!@  Sara and Gina are still evil I see but more so!  Those two evil itches can try but Grace is a child of good with a little bit hood thrown in.  More please!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Ill do my best to update soon.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2013 10:02 pm
Title: Party!

Those evil witches need to really get lives already. And I hope nothing too bad happens on the red carpet.

Kevin and Grace are so cute together.

 

Glad to see this story is back, and I hope you finish it. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Glad you enjoyed the chapter, working on the next one.

 

 

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2013 09:45 pm
Title: Party!

Uh-oh



Author's Response:

lol oh yeah

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 16 2013 09:31 pm
Title: Kevin and Sara talk.

Thanks for sharing...



Author's Response:

Thank You.

 Reviewer: Lindy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 01 2012 09:32 am
Title: Kevin and Sara talk.

Hey miss this story it good story and hope you update this story soon please pretty please.



Author's Response:

Done, sorry for the wait.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 29 2012 06:46 am
Title: What happens in Vegas!

please update. i miss this story



Author's Response:

Done, sorry for the wait.

 Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 19 2012 04:50 pm
Title: Meet the Family

Shut the front door who's pregnant?

Author's Response:

lol Rina :3

 Reviewer: meme Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24 2012 09:31 am
Title: What happens in Vegas!

Wow that was an amazing beginning!

Author's Response:

Thank You Im glad you enjoyed the Chapter.

 Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2012 08:38 am
Title: Kevin and Sara talk.

Please update soon im missing your writing. I know busy in real life.



Author's Response:

Thank you for understanding, I hope you enjoy the new update.

 Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21 2011 06:12 am
Title: Kevin and Sara talk.

Is chapter 12 it? Nothing, nada, finito? What's up, man?

I'm so disappointed.

 



Author's Response:

Sorry for the wait.

 Reviewer: yasmin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 19 2011 10:49 pm
Title: Kevin and Sara talk.

I need an update of this wonderful story!!!



Author's Response:

Thank You Im glad you enjoy the story, sorry for the wait.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26 2011 05:15 am
Title: Kevin and Sara talk.

please update soon



Author's Response:

Thank You Im glad you enjoy the story, sorry for the wait.

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2011 08:27 am
Title: Kevin and Sara talk.

Time for another update im greedy like that.



Author's Response:

Thank You Im glad you enjoy the story, sorry for the wait.

 Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2011 09:26 am
Title: Kevin and Sara talk.

Please update!!!



Author's Response:

Done :3 sorry for the wait

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11 2011 03:33 am
Title: Kevin and Sara talk.

So gld that you have unloaded a chapter for us. Can't wait to see whatelse you have planned for these two.



Author's Response:

Thank You Im glad you enjoyed the Chapter.

 Reviewer: AJ Taylor Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 03 2011 01:03 pm
Title: Kevin and Sara talk.

I love the influence Grace is having on Kevin's life...he's putting those two witches in check and slowly falling deeply in love with his new wife...I also love Grace's quiet strength...she's the stability and calming factor that Kevin always needed in his chaotic life...and now he can't imagine a life without her...they make me smile...

Of course, the vipers Rina and Sara are not done by longshot...and I fully expect them to rear their ugly heads fairly soon again...loved when that little boy in the elevator called her crazy...because that's what she is...crazy...and she bears watching...

Looking forward to more...please don't make us wait so long for the next update...



Author's Response:

Thank You Im glad you enjoy the chapter, I hope the new update is as good as you expected.

 Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2011 04:39 pm
Title: Kevin and Sara talk.

Just got caught up, and I am in love with Grace. Nothing like a good God fearing woman to turn a man around. I can't wait to see what you have planned for her and Kevin.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. HOpe the update is to you liking.

 Reviewer: BlackDove13 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 27 2011 11:26 am
Title: Kevin and Sara talk.

Short but nice, its time for Sara to go. She needs to be dealt with now

 



Author's Response:

lol, hope the update is to your liking.

 Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2011 08:34 am
Title: What happens in Vegas!

I never saw this story until yesterday. I read the whole story today, and it was very interesting and good. Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thank you.

 Reviewer: none Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24 2011 02:10 am
Title: Kevin and Sara talk.

This was my first glance at this story and I must say its good. I like Grace and Kevin and I feel like their relationship is developing at a good pace for a couple who married out the blue. I will be checking for updates on this one.  



Author's Response:

Sorry for the long wait for an update.

 Reviewer: Tempestsunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2011 04:03 pm
Title: Kevin and Sara talk.

Missed this story. Loved the update. That Sara is too much!! Glad Kevin checked her. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Thank You Im glad you enjoy the story, sorry for the wait.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2011 08:19 am
Title: Kevin and Sara talk.

love it :D



Author's Response:

Im glad.

 Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2011 06:25 am


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