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Title: Chapter 13

Loved the update.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 20 2009 11:43 pm
Title: Chapter 13

Thanks for a great update.  It will be interesting to see how this all plays out.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2009 02:14 pm
Title: Chapter 13

I know they wanted to take things very slow witch is very nice but eventuly something tells me they going to get naked in the office or some where else lol. lmaof when she did with that fruit lol she got him back good. love the story and thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2009 12:16 am
Title: Chapter 13

They both need to stop thinking about Carol's reaction and concentrate on their relationship.  Good chapter.

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2009 09:09 pm
Title: Chapter 13

they're not going to be able to keep it a secret for long, someone is going to see them. If she likes him then that's all that should matter.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2009 07:04 pm
Title: Chapter 13

Ahhh! That was sweet it was calm makes me think there is a storm coming.

Great update more please.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 19 2009 06:30 pm
Title: Chapter 12

Smart for not telling Carol

so how long will this be a secret?

 Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 16 2009 01:14 am
Title: Chapter 12

Nice update, thanks!

 Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 16 2009 12:50 am
Title: Chapter 12

Loved the update. It seems as if Scott is ready to burst out of his shell. Go Scott!!!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 16 2009 12:15 am
Title: Chapter 12

love the little privated joke he told mack i was lmaof. it good she didn't tell her because the girl it like cnn she have the news every where lol. i hope her and scott still countin see each other. like the story and thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2009 08:46 pm
Title: Chapter 12

Mackenzie shouldn't tell Carol unless Scott tells her she can.  Carol will blab it around the office.  Thank you for the update.

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2009 07:46 pm
Title: Cast

i don't like Carol all that much either. I love these two together though! The sex is hot!

 Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2009 03:46 pm
Title: Chapter 12

I don't particularly care for Carol. I'm glad  she didn't share with her anything about their night, she does gossip to much and is so negative. Great update!!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2009 02:55 pm
Title: Chapter 12

I think it was/is a good idea not to tell Carol she slept with Scott because she seems like a good person and what not but she talks too freaking much.

Plus she slept with Martin and just met the dude I hope she was well protected cause I aint calling sista girl a ho/slut but she sure does get around.

Great update more please thanks 

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2009 01:00 pm
Title: Chapter 12

I don't like Carol.  I am sure that she noticed more than Mackenzie and Scott wanted her to.  Thanks for a great update.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2009 08:24 am
Title: Chapter 11

I just saw this story and decided to give it a try, and I'm glad that I did, b/c its pretty good. I like Scott and Mackenzie together.. and this last chapter was HOT HOT HOT..

I wonder whats going to happen when they get back to Chicago.

 Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 13 2009 09:47 pm
Title: Chapter 11

no wonder why scott act they way he does i kind of understand him now. wow he is a freak she is so lucky lol . i'm glad they shared stories about each other and hope she doens't tell carlo about them before she knows it the whole office will know lol. thanks for the updated realy like the story.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2009 04:07 pm
Title: Chapter 10

well  with liquard and dancing brings out the freak in eveyr one lol. dam scott was working it you go boy but hope neithr reget in the moring.  love the story girl and thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2009 04:03 pm
Title: Chapter 9

ooo go scott is your birthday go scott is your birthday . i'm glad that mack got him out on the dance floor to get his boggy down instead of being  bored at a club. scott and mack make a cute couple thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2009 03:58 pm
Title: Chapter 8

wow well it looks like carol going to lose thos fav shoes of hers lol. scott having dirty thougths about her lol don't worry scott she having dirty thoughts about you too. i can't wait to see what happen in the club. thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2009 03:53 pm
Title: Chapter 7

awww he let her lean over him  to see the new york sky that very sweet i think scott wanted some carmel on top him tonight lol. wow that boss is realy a dick a very very small dick lol. i feel mack i been having a panicked attack myself but glad her grand ma was there to calm her. thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2009 03:48 pm
Title: Chapter 6

i hated boss like that. smug think they know everything but he has a little dick so everything work out lol. so mack and scott  going to be roomies this is going to be good lol. thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2009 03:43 pm
Title: Chapter 5

lol carlo remind me when my sister drink they do some silly crazy things lol. So Maz wanted some vanilla lol like they say the quiet ones always the freaks in the bed room lol thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2009 03:40 pm
Title: Chapter 4

Well i think she told scott how she felt lol . but something tells me she going to rub off on him but he might wipe himself down when it done lol. carlo better watch out she about to give that girl a run for her money lol. thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2009 03:36 pm
Title: Chapter 3

wow that is a werid guy lol but let face it we all werid in are on way. Carlo is a trip lol i think everyone at work have a carlo. thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2009 03:31 pm


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