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Title: Chapter 30

Loved the update. Can't wait until they take this relationship to the next level.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2010 06:47 pm
Title: Chapter 30

lol i love her cousin  he funny and  a trip but a good one lol.  dam scott put it on her lol guess when you wanted it you take it when and where ever lol. like the story and glad they back on track. thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2010 06:12 pm
Title: Chapter 30

That was hot, public bathroom sex and at a gay club.  Armand is funny, and I loved her Uncle Charles.  He's cool like my Uncle Charles!!!  Thank you for the update.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 24 2010 04:29 pm
Title: Chapter 30

Damn that was hot and Scott is such a freak.

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2010 03:19 pm
Title: Chapter 30

Wow a germ freak having sex in a public bathroom.  I think he's on his way to getting over that phobia.  Great update!

 Reviewer: cyn2pede Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 24 2010 03:08 pm
Title: Chapter 29

Cute chapter, Mackenzie's family especially her Uncle Charles. He is hysterical. I enjoy this chapter very much.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 16 2010 09:20 pm
Title: Chapter 29

Sweet update.  That was so cute and seriously thought what was our boy thinking when he did the weed experiment my but he could have left that for the birds.

Thank you!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2010 09:19 am
Title: Chapter 29

Well not as bad as I thought it would be. What was Keesha's problem. That was completely unnecessary.

Scott was kinda funny though and MacKenzie did kinda treat him like a kid.

Nice.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2010 05:56 am
Title: Chapter 29

lol i feel scott i love some south food but can't mess with the pig guts lol. glad they made up and thing getting back on track. thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2010 05:45 am
Title: Chapter 29

Loved the update.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2010 02:38 am
Title: Chapter 29

THANKS FOR A GREAT UPDATE.  GLAD THAT MACS FAMILY IS ACCEPTING SCOTT.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2010 01:27 am
Title: Chapter 29

He finally got to taste some southern cuisine. Great update!!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 14 2010 10:29 pm
Title: Chapter 29

I love her family. Scott is so going to gain wt if he stay with Mackenzie because her will make sure of it.

What is up with Mackenzie and drug. I can tell there is a story somewhere in there. I still don't trust her so called friend.

TY for the update.

 Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14 2010 10:20 pm
Title: Chapter 28

Well damn Scott got how with the trick of the party it would seem. Keesha did not at all grow the fuck up and what the hell was Scott thinking about.

That just fucced up Jared's night and he was getting his party on too.

Great update can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2010 11:20 am
Title: Chapter 28

What's up with Scott?  All the sudden he has to fit in?  Getting high in the back!  That's crazy, all these years he's been his own weird self and now this.

 Reviewer: cyn2pede Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 12 2010 04:23 am
Title: Chapter 28

Keesha ain't no friend, never was really.  Great update!

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2010 01:43 am
Title: Chapter 28

Loved the update. What the heck is up with Keesha??? Why would she offer drugs to her friend's BF??? I'm a bit disappointed in Scott for smoking the blunt. Wonder how Mackenzie is gonna handle this??? Hope Scott isnt prone to trying drugs for fun. That just won't fly.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2010 01:41 am
Title: Chapter 28

oh crap she got her boyfriend high lol dam i first thought she was going to hit on him wtich is good because mac would proably killed her friend lol.  what esle they going to have scott doing down south . thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2010 08:59 pm
Title: Chapter 28

Nice update! Scott just wanted to let loose I guess!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2010 04:04 pm
Title: Chapter 28

Keesha was so wrong for getting Scott high...what a skank she turned out to be..

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2010 02:47 pm
Title: Chapter 28

Yep Keesha is trying to clown Mackenzie. I have a bad feeling She it going to try and sleep with Sott or make it look like she did.

Jared is up to no good to. I think he is also in love with Mackenzie.

 Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11 2010 09:45 am
Title: Chapter 27

Loved the update. Glad Scott and Jared resolved their issues.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2009 08:44 am
Title: Chapter 27

well i hope nothing happens to scott lol if jarda was hard core on him just image his friends reaction when they see him. thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2009 04:32 am
Title: Chapter 27

Go Scott, show Jared that you are not the punk ass that he thinks that you are.  I hope nothing happens to Scott at this party that they are planning to go to.  Thanks for a great update.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2009 09:35 pm
Title: Chapter 27

Yeah nothing is going to happen my a$$. I am glad Jarod is trying. I just think some guy is going to try and start something because he has a thing for MacKenze.

Or another girl she know don't like her and try to get with Scott.

I guess I will have to wait and see.

 Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2009 08:51 pm


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