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Title: Chapter 27

I loved this chapter hell this story but this chapter was hilarous.  I wonder if Scott will go to the party and will they have problems with Jared boys.

Great update thanks....NEXT.... :D

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2009 06:38 pm
Title: Chapter 27

All is good with the boyfriend and best friend.How will her other friends react when they see him. Great update!!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2009 05:35 pm
Title: Chapter 27

I don't know if I trust Jared to keep Scott safe, but it will be hilarious to read about.   I am just feeling mad respect for Scott now,  however I am still having problems with seeing the dude who plays Reed on "Criminal Minds" in the role.  I can't picture him with a sister.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 19 2009 04:49 pm
Title: Chapter 27

Jared is hilarious. I just wonder will Scott survive the party.

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Date: December 19 2009 12:58 pm
Title: Chapter 26

Thanks for a great update.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 14 2009 02:51 pm
Title: Chapter 26

Loved it. I hope Jared gives Scott a break and gives him a chance to get to know him. Loving Maddie and her sound advice to Mackenzie.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2009 12:53 am
Title: Chapter 26

Good to know Grandma likes Scott.

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2009 10:25 pm
Title: Chapter 26

Scott passed the the grandma test well sort of.  Still trying to wrap my brain the skinny white boy from "Criminal Minds" being a love intererest.  Me likey this story.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 12 2009 07:21 pm
Title: Chapter 26

I'm wondering if Jared is jealous of Scott or mad at him because Mac is with him and he has feelings for her more than friendship. Thanks for the update!!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2009 06:46 pm
Title: Chapter 26

chase with a shot gun lol to funny. her grandmother right as long as scott makes her happy nothing else matters at all. i hope jarda gives scott a change. thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2009 06:44 pm
Title: Chapter 26

Mackenzie and Scott are so cute together. I think of Scott everytime I see this actor on Criminal Minds. <SMILE>

I think they do love each other. If Scott loosens up a bit, he'll be fine with Jared and whoever shows for Turkey Day.

I'm starting to suspect some secret crush thing with Jared. But you snooze, you loose. He makes a better menacing big brother-figure.

Thanks for the update!!!

 Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2009 05:37 pm
Title: Chapter 26

Great update thanks

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 12 2009 02:25 pm
Title: Chapter 26

What is up with Jared. Do he wait her for himself or just being over protective

 Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: December 12 2009 11:52 am
Title: Chapter 25

Whew!! All caught up!!

What a nice story of opposites attracting!!

As far as couples go, Mackenzie and Scott seem mis-matched on the surface. However, they not only sizzle but seem to compliment and add new dimensions to each other.

For a minute I wondered if they were going to let public (office) opinion temper their budding relationship... or the awkward family meetings. I'm glad they didn't.

I can't wait to read more about their visit with MacKenzie's family.

 Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2009 01:25 pm
Title: Cast

Great cast!!

Perfect choice for Scott.

More later on the story!!

 Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2009 08:09 am
Title: Chapter 25

Looks like things are going okay so far!  Can't wait for Jared and Scott to talk.

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2009 04:23 am
Title: Chapter 25

Thanks for a great update...can't wait to see what happens at this Thanksgiving dinner. 

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 26 2009 09:18 am
Title: Chapter 25

Is Jared going to give him a hard time? Grand ma likes him so he shouldn't be to nervous anymore!!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 26 2009 04:34 am
Title: Chapter 25

i'm glad he stuck it out and he went to her home town to be with his girlfriend. i think it work out for them thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 26 2009 04:01 am
Title: Chapter 25

Loved the update. Now that they are in her space hopefully he gets to see a different side of her. Maybe Jared will warm up to Scott after he gets to know him a little.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 26 2009 12:35 am
Title: Chapter 25

I like this story.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 26 2009 12:09 am
Title: Chapter 25

Thank you for the update OK the meeting of the folk so far has been good.  Jared seems a little stand offish but that is to be expected cause Mac is like a little sister to him.

Grandma seems to like him.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2009 10:06 am
Title: Chapter 24

wow in the break room lol to dam funny but  glad she got out her comfrot zone. carol lol she a trip but glad she such good friend for her. cant' wait to see what happen for thanks giving. thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2009 11:43 pm
Title: Chapter 24

Ummm...no protection there kids!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25 2009 10:20 pm
Title: Chapter 24

Loved the update. Hmmm, what's up with Carol that Scott seems concerned????

 Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 25 2009 07:55 pm


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