Reviews For Heroes and Thieves
Title: Chapter Eight: Pointe me to the Ballet

Nice update - keep it coming!

Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate it.

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 06 2011 10:33 pm

Title: Chapter Eight: Pointe me to the Ballet

Wow, finally, I've waited for this update for awhile.  So now the chase is on.lol  Why was Darryl there, does he still have a thing for Alicia? How will Jeremy handle it, or Alicia for that matter. Does she have a strong enough attraction to Jeremy, to withstand a possible reconnection with Darryl? Can't wait to fine out.... Good job, please update soon....

Author's Response:

Sorry for the delay... but life seems to always get in the way... 

Why was Darryll there?! That is a good question! LOL! I guess we will have to wait and see. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: VAL1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2011 06:15 pm

Title: Chapter Eight: Pointe me to the Ballet

Great update! Glad you are still continuing this story and I can't wait to see how the characters develop. Those two are hot, and I can't wait till things heat up between them!! And what the heck was that jerkface doing there? I hope he doesn't start two much trouble for Alicia.

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad too. Sometimes it gets a little difficult to write for these characters but I'm feeling inspired...let's how long it lasts. Darryll... well we will just have to wait and see... LOL!

Reviewer: nikki Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 02 2011 01:15 am

Title: Chapter Eight: Pointe me to the Ballet

Aw....he's fallen for her.

Author's Response:

Yes he has... can you blame him?! Alicia is a sweetheart! LOL

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: R. Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2011 10:28 am

Title: Chapter Eight: Pointe me to the Ballet

YES!!! My favourite story here is finally updated after forever!!!

Author's Response:

Wow... you're favorite story... that makes me smile! Sorry for the wait... hopefully it will be better from here on out. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Logan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 01 2011 08:55 am

Title: Chapter Eight: Pointe me to the Ballet

I love this story I m so glad you updated. I look forward to the next one. Hey is her ex stalking her ? hmm

Author's Response: Thanks I appreciate it... is he stalking her... hmmm that's a good question. LOL!

Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 01 2011 06:13 am

Title: Chapter Eight: Pointe me to the Ballet

LOVED IT! I soo love this story. I get excited every time I see a new update. 

Jeremy is falling and I have a feeling Alicia is too.  I know Jeremy wants a **** buddy, but he better get over that and go after Alicia. Daryl was creeping around the theatre and I'm more than willing to bet you--well someone else since you're the writer-- that he wants to Alicia back.

Looking forward to another update! 



Author's Response:

Cholyn, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I absolutely loved your review. And yes Jeremy needs to get his head right... and well Alicia...we'll have to wait and see what she's thinking...she seems a bit oblivious sometimes. LOL!! As for Darryll...well who the heck knows what he's up to. :)

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2011 05:10 am

Title: Chapter Eight: Pointe me to the Ballet

*side-eyes Darryll* What is that fool up to?

Author's Response:

Side eyes indeed! LOL! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2011 04:10 am

Title: Chapter Eight: Pointe me to the Ballet

Awh, how sweet tis young love! They need to keep an eye on the ex. He may be up to something.

Author's Response: Isn't young love grand... and even sometimes heartbreaking?! Yes perhaps we need to watch out for the ex... then again... who really knows? LOL! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2011 03:34 am

Title: The Heroes & Thieves: Character Page

I stumbled on this story today and I'm glad that I did! Interesting so far and I love the way you are developing the characters. Jubilee is a trip and is a nice balance in the story.

Cant wait to read more!

Reviewer: katie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2011 01:24 am

Title: Chapter Seven Part Two: ...I Might Push Back

It's amazing to how hooked I am to this story! Bring out more! =)

Reviewer: Anne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 22 2010 04:55 am

Title: Chapter Seven Part Two: ...I Might Push Back

Loved the update but I agree with Jubilee that the whole situation seems to be about him and how he's gonna help but she really didn't have any guarentees. He was just too persistent to have her stay to take the course with him.  I hope she didn't live to regret the decision listening to him.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2010 08:25 am

Title: Chapter Seven Part Two: ...I Might Push Back

I think Alicia is going to be in more trouble than Jeremy. I'm really looking forward to their first kiss. 

 I love Jubilee, she's kind reminds me of my cousin, except he's a boy. He wants to be a lawyer.

Thanks for updating 

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 15 2010 05:44 am

Title: Chapter Seven Part Two: ...I Might Push Back

Wow...I hope he knows what he's doing!

Reviewer: JB_Shawty143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 15 2010 12:38 am

Title: Chapter Seven Part Two: ...I Might Push Back

Yay! - an update, I've been waiting for this one, and me likey very much! LOL! Jubilee is too funny - great character you've written, and I love the chemistry between those two leads. Can't wait for more - soon please!

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 14 2010 09:55 pm

Title: If You Push Me

Great story, really! I want more, I feel really greedy lol!

Reviewer: Whoopie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 02 2010 07:29 pm

Title: If You Push Me

Wow! I never knew of this story until now, and now I'm addicted to it! I need a new chapter like yesterday. More interaction between the two too!

Reviewer: Sally Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 28 2010 10:57 am

Title: If You Push Me

Good chapter. Now MORE :0)!!!

Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 26 2010 05:29 am

Title: Encounters of the Bad Kind

She should have broken her face!! WoW what a friend. Loser. That stuff comes around and gets us in the end, stealing someones man. Good riddance to bad rubbish. Love this story.

Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 26 2010 03:42 am

Title: If You Push Me

I love this story! And the drama is just getting started... Please bring the next part in!

Reviewer: Anne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 25 2010 09:23 pm

Title: If You Push Me

Interesting story you are writing. I never came upon it until now! Pretty good!!

Reviewer: none Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2010 08:30 am

Title: If You Push Me

I would like to know why Jeremy feels that Alicia is a brat? 

Thanks for the quick update!  



Author's Response: It's coming... wait for it! :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 24 2010 12:49 am

Title: If You Push Me

Great update but he was being a jerk to her. Love Jubilee's character.

Author's Response: Yeah Jeremy can be that way. LOL! I love Jubilee too...she's actually based off of someone I know. :)

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2010 12:37 am

Title: If You Push Me

I'm so glad you started updating again :) I love the characters though Jeremy is being a jerk, I just can't be mad at him. 



Author's Response: He somtimes has that effect on people. :)

Reviewer: LoveisPudding Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2010 10:42 pm

Title: If You Push Me

Great update and I can't wait to read more - soon I hope..!

Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate it!

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 23 2010 06:54 pm



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